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You told me that the third volume is for people to read. Sorry, I couldn't get through three chapters.
I would like to make a small suggestion. I suggest that the little devil should be changed to Japanese, at least in terms of content and title. (Copied) Devil is the name the Chinese people used for the Japanese invaders during the Anti-Japanese War.
The exaggerated high CA 🤭 makes it a bit embarrassing for me as an FM old man. But the book is good😊
This is a wonderful book starting from the third volume
The third volume written by the author is also very good. Without the first two volumes, this book would have done well. It's a pity that many readers were dissuaded by the previous one. I hope the following one will be more exciting.
Let me give you some thoughts The author is definitely a true fan who wants to write this novel well. He has a deep understanding of all aspects of the Chinese Super League. This book is the only one I have read in the past few years that dares to write about domestic football and writes well. Come on, author 👍, and the results will be very good after laying the groundwork. But having said that, there are many problems. Let's not talk about anything else. Just talk about the heroine, Xiaoxia. I don't want to see her Yan Ruyu for a second. It's too poisonous. Author, if you don't know how to write about women, don't write blindly. Xiaoxia is the same. The words used are really awkward. The author is great. Anyone who can read football novels or even watch the national football team you wrote will not care about the female protagonist. Even if the protagonist is single all the time, it doesn't matter. You really need to read the female protagonist to read the emotional story. The ones written in the city are much better than yours. Because of the female characters you wrote, I gave up the book twice and picked it up again. Please stop writing about the female protagonist. Please let us readers let go of the heroine. Secondly, regarding some vulgar plots, such as the original Lao Wang, such as the interaction with Gao Fushuai, don't you think many places are too vulgar or even disgusting, such as the interaction with Gao Fushuai, and even some with Xiaoxia. Watching them made me feel uncomfortable, although the man is a second grader until death. , But in the book, they behave like two mentally retarded people, and I won't go into details about how they suddenly become brothers with Gao Fushuai. Later, the two of them fight like two elementary school students. Maybe the author thinks this is interesting and funny, but as an old book fan and an adult, many scenes are really naive and vulgar. Then there are some plot choices, which are simply what should be written and what should not be written. . . For example, Luneng and Evergrande lost in the second round of the AFC Champions League. No problem. The game was well written, but what about the follow-up? The press conference, the reaction of the media, the reaction of the fans, the reaction of the team, especially Wang Dalei's, shouldn't he say something? Don't think it's just water, this is only good if it is written well, but the result is nothing. Where you could have written a few more chapters of high-quality content, you focused on writing the heroine, and just jumped to the transfer discussion after the game. It is too blunt. Also, the protagonist's suggestions are based on big data. Okay, so can we write some suggestions that are usually based on big data and subtly affect the thinking of the coaching staff. Otherwise, if suggestions are made on the fly at critical moments, everyone will be subconsciously unconvinced. I know this will increase the conflicts in the plot, but it is not good to always raise doubts. Just as the author mentioned in your book that only players with characteristics can succeed, so does the book. Why did everyone choose your book among a group of football novels that rushed to the street? Why did I pick up the book again after abandoning it twice? Because you write about the national football team, you write about domestic football, you write about the areas that we are most familiar with and the most unfamiliar. It is novel, and you can see that you write with real care. I have to give you a thumbs up for this. The plot of domestic competitions, the comments of domestic fans and the Shandong dialect in the Taishan team (Shandong people feel very friendly) are the characteristics of this book. The rest is really mediocre. The off-field brotherhood, the relationship between men and women, and the plot of the second female lead are all poisonous rather than enjoyable. I still hope the author can focus more. Finally, just a piece of immature advice from me, that is, youth training, whether it is children sent to Europe or those in the reserve team, my suggestion is to finish it from the beginning and don't write too much. This is definitely the most difficult part to write, and readers (such as me) may not necessarily buy it. It is very simple. If you write about a group of dummies that you have never heard of, will everyone agree with it? No, if there is no sense of identity, then it is just data. Unlike real people in reality who are alive and everyone can like it if written in a novel, a dummy is just a dummy. The protagonist is also a dummy, but the main reason why the protagonist is alive is because of the writing and the reader's subconscious self-introduction. Why would people like a few sentences of past data? Unless you write about a talented young man who can find the data in reality, and write it step by step, then everyone can understand it. However, this requires too much writing and energy, and it is purely thankless. I have a lot to say, because I still like this novel, and I hope it will get better and better, instead of abandoning the book again. I hope the author will continue to work hard. There are not many football novels with a good starting point, and most of them are nondescript football novels. I hope this book will carry forward its advantages and get better and better.
Author, I'm convinced. A good subject has been ruined by you. What the hell is the first volume? Ninety-nine percent of it is discouraged. 😅 I advise you to revise the outline, or the content of the first volume. Otherwise, ten people will come, nine will leave, and the remaining one will be like me and want to complain. The one percent who really want to read your novels
It's a good book if you insist on reading to the end, but the first volume is too full of life, so I suggest shortening the length, or it doesn't matter whether Lao Wang exists or not. I think this can attract more people. The subsequent volume on Taishan Team is really well written, allowing people like me who have never watched the Chinese Super League to understand the problems with the Chinese Super League.
It's so normal for a weak team like Luneng to be abused by a stick. No matter how hard the author licks him, he can't clean up the tragedy.
A very good book, a rare work that starts low and moves high, and the more you write, the better. The author is very knowledgeable about football theory and his writing style is also good. It has gotten better and better since the second volume. Please give me your support and hope to continue working hard.
It is a very good football article. It is recommended to read it from the third volume. Of course, if you are a real warrior and dare to face the bleak Chinese football environment, you can read the first two volumes.
It's getting more and more interesting. Although it's slow to start, the preparation is in place and the previous pitfalls have been filled. I'm really looking forward to the plot behind it, but I still hope that I won't have a romantic relationship with that woman.
What Lao Wang wrote was a bit too disgusting. I finally miraculously won under the protagonist's tactics. I thought to myself, this guy finally looked at the protagonist squarely, right? In the end, it got worse. This guy is really a stone in the pit. On the other hand, would anyone like to watch this character "act" and watch a plot where the protagonist is disgusted? If you want to say that some people really like this fight-and-fight scene, then you can at least give yourself an advantage by writing the protagonist, right? I didn't mix with a bunch of players at all, I didn't know anyone, and the only rich second generation didn't have much interaction. I was just fighting with this pig-headed head coach. You have to write that the other side of the fight has to show signs of leaving, which is okay, but there is no sign at all, so I persuade you to quit. Firstly, if the protagonist is capable, he can definitely get rid of this b who occupies the toilet and does not shit. Secondly, as the comments said, the rich second generation can definitely set up a club, even if it is still an amateur. At least it's more formal, and then the protagonist is still stupid and just wants to win first, so let's think about the future. Don't talk about arranging other characters, but arrange the motivations and purposes of the protagonist's behavior No matter the subject matter, even if it is slow to get started, it is important to go straight to the topic. As a result, you, the protagonist, have spent so many chapters on such a team, wasting your life without doing anything, and holding the system in your hand is of no use. This kind of beginning is really not fun.
Can you simplify the plot of this woman? It looks so embarrassing.
I feel that the development of Chinese clubs should learn from Ajax, Benfica, etc. Instead of those big clubs. They should pay attention to youth training, let the sport sink and be down-to-earth, and then train in the Chinese Super League. If there are talented talents, they will be sent abroad. Buy a club like La Liga, let the players gradually become famous, and sell them at high prices.
In fact, it's really possible to work with Mendes. Seriously speaking, many authors have a habit of writing books in which the upstream, middle, and downstream take all the advantages. Yuanshuai Company is mainly responsible for the operation and development of Chinese players in China. At the same time, we will absorb some European and South American players. But does Yuanshuai Company have such a large scale that it can support the care work of multiple, dozens, or hundreds of players in the future? And what about the development, physical and mental health of its players? Many other channels are in the hands of others. . . This is also the problem of many authors writing books. They always think that the outside world is a free market economy, but in fact it is not 😁😁😁 The secret channels in foreign countries are simply not something that a newly established company like Yuanshuai Company can understand. And although the protagonist system is powerful, human energy is limited, and now he is so wise that he is almost a demon! ! ! This looks like a high-altitude attic. The protagonist always thinks that good players are in his hands and he can operate them however he wants. In fact, he has no idea what the players' psychology is like. Data is just data. Cultural differences are also huge. Not everyone likes Lao Gan Ma, not everyone agrees with Chinese food, and not all Chinese people's thinking patterns can be understood by foreigners. Although in theory the winner takes all, in reality in Europe, it is not entirely appropriate for you to act like a reckless bull and run rampant. Your core base is not allowed to be touched by others, but your extended business can share profits. In fact, cooperation with big-name foreign brokerage companies is the best cooperation. Expanding one's territory does not require appearing fearless. This is not how business is done. . . Seriously, doing this business well is the greatest support for Chinese football. Football is also an industry when it is highly magnified. The Chinese football industry still needs to be closely linked to the whole of Europe. Only in this way can it develop, rather than just being the protagonist. . . What the protagonist should do is set a benchmark, lead an industry, and can be the first, but he cannot handle problems with the mentality of "I want all the benefits." Personally, the writing in the third volume is pretty good. It's just that the handling in some places is still too high-altitude and the actual operation is too simple, without taking into account the complexity of international football. Creating an imaginary enemy is also too deliberate. Come on, author. I hope my writing will get better and better. . .
I will subscribe in the future and look forward to your next book. The writing is good and the football-related points are spot on. However, the fun and poisonous points are not yet under control. I think if you work hard, you will be the next dleer.
The writing is good, and it is rare for a systematic coaching article to be interesting. There are too many cliches in the subject matter of systematic articles. The beginning part is really cruel, especially the football article. I just read it for fun. However, there is an advantage to slowing down. The author feels endlessly happy writing the article, and readers can't bear it. After all, after getting high, it suddenly becomes boring and there is no desire to read.
It's a bit of a drag. . . . Can the protagonist grow up faster? I get tired of seeing silly situations all the time. . It would be better to be a coach with a stable personality. . . It feels so dramatic to be so out of touch
The beginning was really bad, and I was persuaded by my strength to quit. The author himself also joked that it was disgusting. If not, it was really disgusting. He said that he could not write about Long Aotian, and said that it must be logical. Even if you have a golden finger, you are still timid, and if you have several handles, you are still timid, but is it still logical? ? ?
This is the best football novel in the past three years. The best part about the systematic novel is that it has no tasks. Everything comes from the heart. That is the love for the country and football. It can be seen that the author was beaten badly by the teacher in elementary school 🤓🤓
One of the three best novels about domestic football, just waiting for it to be released!
Hahaha, the first volume describes all the characteristics of Shandong people, which is really eye-opening. Those who know are Shandong fans, but those who don't know think they are in Black Shandong.
I was so addicted after reading the previous part that I wanted to run away. When I saw that everyone was saying that the third volume started to look good, I decided to read it and found that it was indeed the case. Hahaha, I finished reading it in two days. Can the author update it faster?
This Xiaoxia looks disgusting. I have to write such a character. Vomited
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It was supposed to be a good book, but unknowingly it was gone. I'm really sorry for this author. A good book is a good book, but the highlights are too short. The Chinese Super League and Brazil may be the most exciting parts. The front is poisonous, and the back is awkward. I hope to continue working hard on the next book. I have limited financial resources. I will reward you with 10,000 to show my love. Come on!
The title of the book is "The Best Football Manager in the World", but it turns out to be "Coach"
It's a good idea, but the updates are a bit sparse. I hope the author can write something new. There is a lack of new things in football articles. As for the reduction of wisdom, there is a point and it is acceptable. I feel like this book has its power in the middle and later stages. It is difficult to incorporate the sand sculpture style without appearing to be witty. I hope the author will increase the number of updates and keep working hard (ง •̀_•́)ง😁
Who is hhd? Why can't I find it? What have you committed?
When does the high guidance plug-in expire?