King in Marvel

In terms of the book itself, I thought it was good at first, but then it started to fall apart a bit. The first few hours were very good, but later on, I even went to the scene in Thor where the king dressed up as Batman and stole things from Kelson. Is it over? *, What exactly? Do you really think Coulson is a jobber? And the part about Captain America is even more unbearable. The time and place of Captain America are wrong. We can accept that. But you pretending to be Batman alone and stealing forging materials from Thor's Hammer are beyond my comprehension. I originally raised it for a period of time, but I didn't expect it to be a bit useless. The creativity is still good. That's it😔

The pacing drags, but this may also be to prevent the protagonist from developing too quickly. Secondly, the thinking level is not so rigorous (which is actually not bad), and the writing style and immature thinking are the most uncomfortable. If you pay attention to these, it will improve, but if you don't pay attention, it will eventually make people give up reading like those old-fashioned works**.

I was just wondering, if the protagonist passes on the inheritance of the Protector Colossus to the statue of the king of Atlantis, will there be an overlord of the sea? A strong man who can create seaspouts with just a wave of his hand! Needless to say, even the sudden advance

I think it's very good. I support it and keep working hard to maintain the quality and quantity. Big deal.

To be honest, it looks great, but you can't be so short and weak, how can you not explode?

Author, it's been two days, where's your update?

The overall story is good, the plot is coherent, and the characters are well drawn. I just need to pay a little attention to whether the elements of Demacia are integrated into the Marvel Universe, or the Marvel elements are integrated into the Kingdom of Demacia? The direction of rewriting is different. In addition, if it is the plot line of the DC Extended Universe, Mera, who has not yet met Arthur at this time, is only the fiancée of the new king of Atlantis, and more importantly, the princess of the Kingdom of Zebel. Therefore, when she met Mera, she did not establish a relationship with DC's Atlantis, but the Kingdom of Zebel, so Orm was really miserable. Arthur robbed him of the right to inherit the throne and his fiancée. In addition, Marvel also has the Kingdom of Atlantis. Aquaman Namor is Marvel's first superhero and the first mutant character created. However, it has not been made into a movie, so it does not appear in the MCU.

I have just read more than a dozen chapters, and I can only say that the author has too many common sense mistakes, so why can't he be more serious? First, tell me how the four locations in New York, Africa, Ireland and Paris form a straight line? Even if you don't understand, just draw a line on the map. Second, Mach is one time the speed of sound, it is not a fixed value, it is not 340 meters per second! Mach 1 in sea water is 1852 meters per second! It takes less than five minutes to reach the Mach 2 speed of 1,000 kilometers. It also takes one night. It can be reached at the speed of driving. Third, the detection distance of alien technology is only ten kilometers. Isn't it funny? I found the target directly in front of me and hit it at full speed for two seconds. Whose radar is so bad? Earth's technology is hundreds of kilometers away.

Uh-huh, I'm wondering about the problem! The protagonist's occupations are king and god. So can the protagonist pick up the trident? According to the setting, the trident represents the King of the Seven Seas. Then the protagonist's profession fully meets the requirements! What do you think? Also, if the God Lord says it, can Wonder Woman arrange it? But at this time, Wonder Woman has been acquired by Batman, so there is no chance, unless she kills the Flash to sacrifice 😁. Then the next hero should be a shooter! I don't know if the author is reading the comments, but I suggest that it be changed to Legend of Heroes without adding stars, or maybe the author is not so thorough about the concept of stars! I don't care, I'm just afraid that it will be very uncomfortable if there is a gangster later, and I'm even more afraid that there will be confusion in the concept of star rating later. Just like the Iron Suit, now it's just the second generation of Marco! It's been so long that I forgot how many generations it is! So what star rating does the Nano Steel Suit have in the author's estimation? Then I don't know if the author's review of Marvel and DC's combat power is based on a movie or something else? How many stars are the Infinity Stones? How many stars is Quake? What kind of material is vibranium? Personal opinion, the author may read it or not. If you are a book lover, just read the first half. The second part is purely personal opinion.

Okay, it gives me a new look after I'm used to seeing Marvel's vulgar street hero routines. Really, although it's a little awkward, I think it's OK and looks good. (Although some of the strong comments leave people speechless.) I'm very interested in the next content. Come on, come on, I support you, Liangzai! (Do you have a group? Feel free to add someone 😁😁😁)

Give me the blood of my enemies and sacrifice my great Noxus 😎

Suggestion to change the name: The stallions in Marvel really accept every one you meet 😤😤

If not, I wouldn't understand, you are the king! You are the king of a country, and all the heroes of LOL! Doing everything yourself? Have you ever seen a country without diplomats? No general? Which country relies on the king himself to fight wars? Are everyone dead? Change the title of your book! Except for playing with women. This title of king is of no use at all! ! !

I stopped reading after seeing twenty of them. A security inspector despises a king. You, a security inspector, cannot despise other countries when they are poor. Also, someone robbed him as soon as he came to the United States. A king was robbed. Even if the country is small, it is still a matter of diplomacy. Is it good or not? There is no small matter in diplomacy.

There are so many poisonous points in 42 that I can't stand it anymore. The biggest problem is that the author doesn't write like a king but like a loser. Even if the poorest tribal chief comes to 🇺🇸 through formal diplomatic means, 🇺🇸 cannot ignore it. Even a little gangster dares to rob the king. You can think about whose face will be lost if something goes wrong. If a small country is gone, it will be gone. But with so many small countries coming to a country as powerful as yours for diplomacy, and you can't even guarantee their safety, who will dare to establish diplomatic relations with you🇺🇸 in the future? Don't other big countries take advantage of this to criticize? Is the United States so stupid? The same goes for Black Widow, who lets the protagonist race a car or something. Even if the protagonist is a king, his status will be different from the beginning. What if the protagonist doesn't know how to race and dies, can an agent take the responsibility? If an agent can design a king to be killed, then maybe there is no other country in the world except 🇺🇸. If you say that the protagonist is a diaosi, I can bear to read it, but he is a king, which is seriously inconsistent with the title of the novel. There are many other poisonous points, but compared with this, they are good. When I write it, I feel like this is the story of a diaosi who traveled to Marvel and became Long Aotian, not a story of a king leading the country to prosperity.

I'm surprised that the main character is staring at New York for nothing. He goes to New York to get some medicine, and even goes to New York to fish for some gold. He even talks about Wakanda. A country as big as Wakanda has been lurking on the earth for thousands of years without being discovered. If the old king had not been killed, it would probably still be lurking. With the protagonist wandering around like this, countries with better intelligence can snoop on it. And that Poseidon mecha can actually be detected by the navy

If a king does not develop farming well, he will be dissipated. It is written by Zhenliu. How many Chinese emperors only took a few people to go dissipating? It's still an enemy zone, so a king like this might as well die early.

He is obviously a king, and he is either rational and strategizing, or the hero is plotting a series of plots, but I am tired of seeing the hanging threads you wrote. The pictures used to be fresh, but now I am speechless no matter how I read them. This year's protagonists are all hanging threads, which makes me vomit.

The setting is good, but there are too many common sense errors. Iron Man went to a traffic jam in Monaco, and returned to New York for a party the next day. On the third day, Braised Egg gave his father a relic. On that day, Hammer opened the Iron Soldier display. On the same day, Iron Man changed the energy source and went up to do it. They are all gods. He spent one day helping Hammer transform the Iron Legion for him to hold an exhibition. At the same time, he created his own new armor, which is even better than Tony. Iron Man ll was completed in three days for a movie 😴

If you want to make a Void, Ascended, Darkin, or Valoran gods, any one of them is better than Demacia. Demacia's military level is too low, and it is basically at the lowest end of Valoran.

Can I complain? I knew about Silver Surfer before, but not about Galactus later. Is the protagonist a patient with intermittent amnesia?

Monthly tickets are offered for improvement 😍

The writing is a bit off track. Isn't it about building a country and farming? If a king wanders around, what's the point of training those heroes? Did the author write wherever he thought?