The Night Is Still Dark

Sorry, I told the truth I can really tell that the writing is very serious But there should be no outline... It's okay without an outline, the main line is a bit messy 1 Introduction and main text ... The introduction is not a place to show off your skills, do you know the headlines? For example: The breeze is blowing in the willows, the blood-red flowers on the other side are blooming, and the Wangchuan River under the Naihe Bridge is surprisingly calm today... Just keep writing like this ✍🏻 And another A year ago he was the rich second generation of a billionaire family, and now he is in the garbage dump... Give me a silly example🌰Which one do you think is more attractive to you It's just that the amount of information in the introduction is more important than the readability of it It's not a literary work, it's a novel If you are a literary work, start with it If you don't step on the breeze and the bright moon, the bright moon shines on the ditch You didn't give me much, so I'll leave it at this~ The crow brought "My Book of Another World" to the above

The writing is very good and worth reading. It is not difficult to tell from the works that the author is a meticulous and sunny boy, come on! You are still so young, you can be whatever you want to be!

I feel that the realm is not very clear. Is there anyone who understands it? 😭 I will put that thing up, haha

The connection between this introduction and the following main text is not very strong. The last of the three paragraphs is barely connected to the main text. If the plots corresponding to the first two paragraphs of the introduction are too late, there is no need to put them in the introduction, otherwise it will appear confusing if they are not connected. The direction of the plot is also very confusing. It's a game, it's a get-together, and then it's all thrown away, and there are only two people left, and then they start practicing again? Then these plots are meaningless and can be streamlined or deleted directly. Character description, add some description of appearance and demeanor. Especially at the beginning, when there were three or four people speaking one sentence each, it was hard to tell who was who. I personally feel that this part of practice is a bit cumbersome, but different people have different opinions, so it's good to receive feedback from readers in a timely manner. The writing is still very serious, come on!

Look at me, look at me, all the gentlemen who came to see me, thank you for coming to read the book I wrote. Mingyue is very honored, and I hope I can leave you a recommendation vote. Comments welcome.

Ah ah ah, although I don't know which four masters invested in Xiao's book, but I am very grateful, hahaha

Mutual receipt. Added to bookshelf, hope to visit again

Zi Yijun came to step on each other with "Tang Yi Zhuan"!

The writing is great, it shouldn't be buried, let's work hard together

Thank you all for your support and encouragement. Hahaha. I had an immature idea about that. Anyone who has read my book, can you show your face here? If you don't mind, I want to meet you. Hehe. 😍😍

The writing is very good and the descriptions are very detailed. It feels very immersive and feels good when I read it. I just feel like the introduction is a bit too much (holding my head) Collected 😁

Come on, the writing is pretty good!

Very well written! Keep up the good work! ——You gave me the idea of ​​writing an introduction hh