All-Time Sharpshooter

How should I put it? In fact, after seeing it now, everyone will obviously see the two major poisonous points in the book, and they may be the only two major poisonous points. First, it's Lin Yi and Kaili. Of course, this is also necessary for the plot and is unavoidable. Let me explain here. The favorability in the DNF game is very exaggerated. When the favorability between you and the NPC reaches the full value, they will like you. Therefore, the heartbeat that Kelly showed when she saw Lin Yi is real and reasonable. So although it is a bit poisonous, please watch the grandpa Haihan 🥺 Second, there is Lin Yi and Mary. It has been four years since I wrote this chapter, so my thoughts at the time may have been naive. But if you think carefully, it can be reasonable. As the eldest daughter of a medium-sized urban family, it goes without saying that Mary has been protected since she was a child. Therefore, it is difficult to control people's worldly feelings and emotions, and she has never experienced love. Therefore, she may fall in love at first sight when she meets the somewhat dashing Lin Yi for the first time, but they are not together later, and they cannot be together, but there is another story. Okay, these are probably the two biggest poisonous points in this book. There should be no more poisonous points in the future. Luo Shen hereby implores all readers not to cancel the collection... I love you 🥺🥺

I have been coding in a stand-alone mode for a long time Even though my last book with 160,000 words was rejected three times and now it is blocked Maybe this is nothing to some authors It is indeed nothing But I just want to say to the majority of authors Even scumbags like me have signed up What are you still hesitating about? Internet writing is the path There are not many people who can really persevere But those who persevere to the end will definitely get satisfactory results This is the first time I have been signed since 2013. To be honest, I am a little excited and tearful Of course, I have been invited to sign before, just because For various reasons, I had to reject them But this time, I hope I can finish the book, and I firmly believe that I can finish the book, whether it is 600,000 yuan or 300,000 yuan There is a beginning and an end This is respect for the readers and responsibility for myself Okay, don't be self-motivated You are still young, come on! （Please reward me please reward me please reward me please reward me please reward me 🥺🥺🥺)

Let me make a statement in advance, dear viewers, my name is Luo Shen. I started to conceive of this book since I was a sophomore in high school, and I have been until my sophomore year now. Chapter 1 to 21 were written when I was in high school, so maybe even after revision, the writing style will still be somewhat lacking. But please don't worry! Because the following chapters are all coded by me now (although the writing may still be a bit poor), the feeling is still different, so please read it patiently! I have already thought about the next book, which is about the alien world of League of Legends, but I have to wait until this book is finished. Here, I would like to express my special thanks to a brother {"NickName":"","UserId":334370173} who occasionally votes for me. Thank you very much! I would also like to thank all my friends who have been reading and silently supporting me. Your support is really my motivation, so I hope you can comment more, whether it is good or bad! Thank you!

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Just a few comments, I just read your new book, and my first impression is that it feels very confusing For example, in Chapter 1, there is a very abrupt straight ball thrown at the beginning, also by Xing Lin. Why is the gap so big? This is very unfriendly to readers who have not read the novel "Onishen Swordsman", but the so-called "dissuade" from the novel in one sentence is still the same sentence. The first impression is very important to the reader, which will determine whether he will read this novel with a colored eye. I wrote a little beginning and the author can refer to it. Lingo sat slumped in a chair, fiddling with his phone boredly. The computer in front of him was downloading files at a crawling speed. I fiddled with my phone for a while and quietly glanced at the progress from the corner of my eye. It was only 30%. "This is too slow." Ringo wailed and fell on the bed. Recently, he accidentally came across a video of Dungeon and Fighter on major video websites. He had been out of the trap for two years, and suddenly wanted to go back and see Selina. Back then, although he was not a big player in this game, he had put a lot of effort into this game. He was familiar with most of the professional skills and could be considered a master. After browsing the phone for a while, the computer prompted that the file installation was completed. Lingo excitedly clicked on the game interface, selected the golden "Sky-grazing Wings", and then looked at his cell phone, which was almost out of battery. I found a charging cable and fumbled to plug it into the interface below, but I couldn't plug it into the interface on top. Looking at the characters on the computer waiting for my control, Ringo was already impatient. He exerted force, and there was a loud bang from the computer case. Then there was a sound of electric current, and Ringo lost consciousness.

I really like the book "The Demonic Swordsman" Since I was in junior high school I have been reading it over and over again since I was a senior in high school Now that I am a sophomore, I finally have some time to myself I want to share the novel I once conceived with everyone To be honest, this book can also be regarded as a fan So I don't ask for anything else, just because of my feelings I have submitted it internally, but this book is not good. How long did it take to sign the contract I really didn't expect that this book would eventually be recognized by the signing I just hope that this book can give some comfort to the brothers who are still with Guangre now The ending of the gods and ghosts was too hasty So now I will continue writing Even if I don't have Guangre's imagination and writing power But it's just a young and frivolous dream! {"NickName":"Sudden Light and Heat","UserId":102295988} ps: Before publishing the book, I asked Brother Guangre, and he agreed. Then I will definitely use my own efforts to protect the Arad continent again!