Avengers: Polar Wolf

Avengers polar silver girl 😂

After reading this book, to be honest, I always felt it was weird. The plot was okay, the writing was okay, and it was quite interesting. However, I always found it a bit laborious to read. It took me a long time to realize that when I saw names like Logan, Jeroen, and Coulson, I couldn't immediately combine these names with Iron Man, Captain Wolverine, etc... I have to say, I am a fake Marvel fan. But many people should be like this. When watching Marvel movies, they all remember nicknames, such as Iron Man, Captain of the Winter Soldier, and Hawkeye and Hulk. It really means that they don't pay much attention to their names. So, let me make a small suggestion. In the future, you can write Wolverine Logan, Iron Man Tony, Dr. Banner, Hulk, etc., At least in the first ten or twenty chapters of the novel. Not only can you make up the word count, but the most important thing is to give us readers who don't remember names a process of adapting, otherwise it will be really uncomfortable. Moreover, as an adaptation, you can definitely add some new characters. Although there are quite a lot of existing Marvel heroes, wouldn't it be more interesting to create some unique heroes of your own imagination? Anyway, I personally hope that some new characters will appear, because there are really too many movies in the Marvel series, and the differences in abilities are too big, just like Thor and Black Widow. They have completely unequal strengths, but they were arranged together by Marvel because of their popularity. So I think since the author knows so much about Marvel and his writing is quite tasteful, he can definitely design some strong heroes. I hope the author has more imagination and gives us more surprises! Come on, author!

I want to ask, where is the protagonist?

I saw the silver wolf and thought it was Bronya

The author's ideas are very good, and the writing style is at least readable and won't make people feel embarrassed. But I would like to make a few suggestions: 1. Shorten the dialogues between your characters, significantly shorten them. You can look at the proportion of character dialogue in your chapter, and compare it with the proportion of character dialogue in other authors. Excessive description of character dialogues leaves readers confused. From the reader's experience, you often write a xx location, and then the hero and villain meet, and then a few pages of dialogue begin. You may have a very strong sense of the picture in your mind. But from a reader's point of view, it is almost difficult for me to have a sense of the picture. It is recommended to strengthen the description of the environment and plot. 2. Distinguish priorities. You need to prioritize the relationships between characters. Take the Golden Three Chapters as an example. You write about Nick Fury in the prologue, a naive kid in the third grade of junior high school in Chapters 1 and 2, and then jump directly to Bucky's attack. Moreover, your word count per chapter is several thousand words larger. From the perspective of a reader, I really don't like this kind of book, because I still don't know whose story you are telling, especially the title of your book mentions the Polar Silver Wolf. Of course, most people will guess that the child is the protagonist, but from my point of view, 1. If the child is the protagonist, there will be almost no sense of substitution for a third-grade child with a non-precocious personality. 2. In your prologue, you also said that the Polar Silver Wolf is the result of biochemical transformation, so it doesn't look like it. So I'm not sure about child protagonists. To summarize, I hope readers will try to write from the perspective of a reader when writing a book, or ask someone to read it for you after you finish writing. At least I won't make these non-plot mistakes.

Hulk was originally very cute, but since he merged with Banner, he doesn't feel cute at all.

In fact, after reading this book, I felt really happy because the author added our protagonist, Xiao Liang, to this Marvel world. What's there to be happy about? Because when we watch TV and stuff, these superheroes are all foreigners! Don't tell me about Gu Yi or anything else, they are all supporting characters! Can it be the same? Although Marvel is already producing a Chinese superhero named "Shang-Chi", there is currently no plan to make Shang-Chi into a movie. Therefore, I am very surprised to see Xiaoliang, a Chinese superhero! But... The author, you wrote for a long time without letting Xiao Liang appear! I have to say that the foreshadowing of the plot is indeed necessary, but as the protagonist, you can leave it alone. Can't you write less of these foreshadowings or recall them slowly later? Or maybe the author has some special reasons... But these are not important, anyway, there are indeed more appearances later. Regarding Xiaoliang's experience, I actually think it's quite magical... So why is a broken box quietly waiting for the protagonist to open it? Even if it were me, I would open a bottle and take a look at it. I don't believe that the author has never seen it before? Or is it just like the author explained, Xiaoliang was chosen for the space stone... The person who opened the box in front couldn't bear the power and died? Then the Space Stone stretched out his hand, closed the lid of the box, and continued to wait for his fate, Xiao Liang? Okay, forget it, it is a space stone after all, these explanations are completely reasonable. Then his father carried Xiao Liang to the hospital and said that this stone was bought by Xiao Liang with his life... It's too weird... Including the back, anyway, the original space stone felt that there was no need to hide it, so Xiao Liang had to hold it... He had to have a lot of people see him, and he arrogantly emitted a blue beam of light... My God, as a space gem, it can completely go to Xiao Liang's mental space, isn't it reasonable? There is only one truth! The space stone is definitely conscious! It's definitely intentional! I feel guilty when I write this, because this is the author's behind-the-scenes manipulation... Maybe I accidentally opened a small pot lid? But I think that Xiao Liang is really just an ordinary person now, which is still unreasonable. After being washed away by the power of the original space stone, it is understandable that Xiao Liang did not die. Why did Xiao Liang not have any superpowers after such a big change? In fact, I am very curious about how Xiaoliang became powerful in the future, and what abilities he has. Is it because of the original stone? Or have there been any changes within yourself? I'm very much looking forward to these. Of course, I don't want Xiaoliang's power to come from the original stone. It would be great if he had a brand new ability. Finally... I still have to say, I know this is a novel with a group of protagonists, but I always feel that Xiaoliang appears too little! Other superheroes collided fiercely under the author's arrangement, but our Xiao Liang has been developing silently. To use a very simple metaphor, we are playing the King of Kings. Each of the 10 people is a protagonist and has an indispensable role. From the beginning to the end, everyone is constantly fighting in team battles, encounters, capturing people, and being caught, while our Xiaoliang is constantly fighting in the jungle... Occasionally stealing troops... Anyway, he does not join the team, does not capture people, and does not support... Such a person in the King of Kings, not only the enemy does not like it, but his teammates don't like it even more! Even if Xiao Liang takes off later and Kerry wins the game, at least in the first few minutes of the 20-minute game, Xiao Liang will be sprayed by his teammates and the audience! Therefore, I hope the author can consider my idea and let Xiaoliang have more roles! After all, Xiaoliang, the new hero, is the highlight! The early stage of a novel is much more important than the first few minutes of a game! Big cheers for the author! ! !

I searched for books that have been updated within three days. It's amazing that this book can appear.

When the Hulk appears, it feels very well written, especially the pink warm-weather suit. The scene must be beautiful.

When I saw the 20-year-old review, I was shocked by the author's persistence! Come on!

It's a pretty good American comic book, with a profound layout and a subtle line, and a wonderful idea. Please give your best to the author.

Wow, the writing and creativity of the Lifetime series are very good. I must stick to it this time.

What I write always reminds me of myself. I don't know why, but it is obviously different from me in the novel...

It's so beautiful, it feels like watching a TV series, it's so graphic.

I don't know how to write book reviews, and even if I do, I can't write anything constructive. All I know is that your book is right up my alley. I like to watch. I support it. I was happy to see it. I vote.

I have read a lot of novels adapted from Marvel, and I really think this one is pretty good. It follows the original work more closely and adds new things.

I have a feel-good tip that I hope the author will take. This is what I think. As an agent, Black Widow, even if she is strengthened and powerful, is really incomparable to those perverts in the Marvel world. I have been paying attention to this for a long time, especially when watching movies. The Black Widow in the movie is really strong and weak at times. Call him weak because he can compete with Captain America. Call him strong because she can be injured by ordinary people. Anyway, just for the sake of Black Widow's popularity, Marvel has made her embarrassed to play for so long. Therefore, I suggest that the author can make Black Widow stronger in the future, the whole adventure, mutation, etc. Anyway, we are adapting the novel, right? As an important and the only female hero in the early stage, of course I think Black Widow is only a woman, Captain Marvel does not count, right? Anyway, Black Widow is very important. It is absolutely necessary to strengthen her, add some attributes, learn some skills, buy some equipment and so on. After all, she is about to move to Asia, and it is very reasonable to have new opportunities! I can provide a direction, let Black Widow break the window paper with Banner when she goes to Asia, and the two establish a relationship and later become a female giant... Or through a life-and-death crisis, she tests a new drug and survives to be able to transform briefly. But why do I think the author intends to have a story between Black Widow and the T-Virus? Becoming Alice? It's pretty cool, I think! Of course, these little suggestions of mine may also be speculations. Maybe the author has already made arrangements?

I don't remember names very well, especially foreign names. I would rather use nicknames when addressing people!

Not buddy, Chapter 1 19 years 😰

There is actually a silver wolf😍

I accidentally clicked on this book and found that it started in 2019. More than 100 chapters and 990,000 words in ten years, which is no worse than three days and two nights of sleep

Wolverine is indeed quite strong, but he should be average against Avengers characters.

I feel the same way as Xiaoliang's experience when he was a child. I don't understand why he didn't give any pocket money but gave it to the hateful cram school teacher.

The writing is very good and definitely worth reading and subscribing. By the way, enjoy the heat. Recommend a book that makes you laugh like crazy, don't read it while eating, "The old man in time travels to pick up rags and makes a living by making bad movies"

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

There are no black posts in the book club.

This book hasn't been updated in more than 20 days, so why does it suddenly appear in the top 10 of my weekly recommendation votes?

It was very hard to finish the first chapter, but I stopped reading halfway through the prologue.