Red Invasion

The language is fluent, without any hesitation, and the situations change naturally. Apocalyptic writings generally describe large-scale scenes. How to highlight the whole scene from point to point is a big test for large-scale scenes. The author's description in this aspect is pretty good! Collected!

The writing is very good. I will save it and read it later. Keep up the good work, author!

Academic first supports the author's choice and I hope we can meet again!

Collected. Overall, the plot of this book is compelling and makes you want to read it. The disadvantages are that foreign names need to be adapted, and updates are not timely.

As I said in my chapter review, this book is written in a very translation style. In fact, this style is not suitable for hair at the starting point. From the book title to the introduction, it doesn't look like an online text. This style is only suitable for masters, and newcomers will definitely fall behind when using it. It seems that you haven't signed a contract yet. Try to maintain stable updates every day. This is very important.

I have read very few apocalyptic articles, and the writing is okay. I just want to say that you should pay more attention to dividing it into paragraphs. It is too long and it is hard on the eyes...

The writing style is above average, and there is still room for development. The cover and the title of the book match quite well, so keep up the good work.

The writing is very good! Be rich and noble, brother! Just pay attention to the paragraphing. Some are indeed connected into one paragraph for the sake of continuity. However, if the paragraphs are not divided appropriately, the gain will outweigh the gain. The reader will be tired and will miss things. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I have read it and the writing is smooth, but I don't like foreigners treating pigs' feet. The plot of this article develops too slowly and the beginning is not attractive. The opinions have been expressed. I hope the author will work hard! !

In fact, the traditional apocalypse does not have systems, powers, time travel or even rebirth. It purely presents the most classic and grand world to readers. I am the first to admit that I have only understood the tip of the iceberg of apocalyptic literature, and I dare not confirm the correctness of my own views. It is undeniable that there are some contents in the traditional European and American apocalyptic literature that are not suitable for the current situation. Many people have been misled by the superficial rendering techniques that are not suitable for the local reality, and have ignored the positive side of the apocalyptic literature - the brilliance and shining points of human nature, humanistic care, and the appropriate pursuit of freedom and individuality. If there are some inappropriate rendering techniques, I hope you can tell me in this chapter or in the comments, and I will make appropriate modifications in a timely manner. Indeed, many people have certain misunderstandings about apocalyptic works, thinking that they are bad, superficial, dark, and short-lived. Even I had this misunderstanding at one time. I write works not to prove anything, nor to deliberately pursue superficial pleasure. Rather, I want to show everyone the apocalyptic world as I understand it. Retain the internal and external essence of traditional apocalyptic literature, promote the positive energy and shining points of human nature, make adjustments suitable for fast-paced online literature, keep pace with the times, and present works that are more accessible and accessible to both refined and popular people, so that more people can accept and benefit from apocalyptic literature. I am passionate about apocalyptic literature, I am positive and optimistic about real life, and I also have a certain yearning for the world in online articles. This is the purpose of writing novels (it would be better if I could make some money, hahaha) I hope to see more people like and recognize apocalyptic literature one day, thank you all! 🌹🌹🌹

I came here specially today because I have something big to talk about. This book is very good, very good. Between the lines, you can see the author's intentions. A well-written novel, needless to say, absolutely wonderful. From every word and sentence, you can read the author's passion for the novel. With this indomitable courage alone, this book is destined to be wonderful.

I would like to express my solemn thanks in advance to every reader of this book, friends who support me, and those who give me suggestions for my drug trial I am very sorry to inform you that since I am about to enter my third year of high school, I really cannot spare enough energy to maintain stable updates. I apologize here However, this book will always be updated, but the speed will be reduced In the future, I will release the latest chapters on the first day of every month. , If I have more time, I will release more chapters This will continue until the end of the college entrance examination in 2021 I solemnly promise that after the college entrance examination, I will continue to complete the exciting content of "Red Invasion" and will return with a large number of exciting new books. Currently, there are a total of 11 new book inspirations Thank you for reading 🌹🌹🌹

The author's writing is so good, it's perfect. I'm already fascinated by the work. The first two chapters are so powerful that I hope I can finish them in one day. Excellent!

Young man! I'm here to support you

Boss, would you mind taking a look at the cover I designed? 😭 (This post can be deleted)

I am very sorry to inform all readers that due to my recent busy schedule preparing for the exam, I am unable to continue updating. The updates in May and June will be postponed until after the college entrance examination in June. We ask for your understanding.

It's like "The Last of Us" (The Last of Us), and it restores the apocalyptic environment very well.

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Multi-line narrative, but the plot is not confusing now, I look forward to the future

Come and check in today, happy holidays

Author, come on, come on! Pindao believes in you!

Boss, I recently changed the outline of my book (mainly changed the prologue) and wrote two versions. Can you give me a review?😭😭

Recently I have opened a dian circle, can you help me open it😳

Sorry, the circle leader is crazy. I have been banned until 2070. I am really speechless and I don't even have a reason. To be honest, I don't have a good idea about your opening. I'm not very satisfied with my own opening either. The signing of the contract is an unexpected surprise. It's too difficult to change it now. It affects the whole body. So I can only say that you should pay attention in the future. In addition, if you are recommended, you can send a description. As long as the content behind you is exciting enough, I believe it will still attract readers.

The pace is too slow and there is too much water. Chapters one and two can be compressed into chapter one, and chapters three and four can be compressed into chapter two. Chapter 5 contains too little content and not much useful information. The author is not suitable for writing online novels. Writing popular science novels may have more future prospects. Judging from the writing, the author is a chronic person...

Come on, professor! Thank you for your encouragement and support.

Author, I believe you are the best.

Sir, my book has collapsed 😭, and now I am going to delete the book and resubmit it. The latest chapter of the book is a new plot that I changed the outline of. Can you please take the time to review it? Thank you very much, sir! ! 😍

Happy New Year, boss 😍

Professor, happy new year. May the new year bring you more prosperity.