Conan Winery Cleaner

Well, the author makes the protagonist invincible. But once the main characters are involved, the plot. . Hmm... The protagonist is a scumbag and slipped away.

Ahem, um, is there a female protagonist?

I have a small suggestion, that is, don't use the English word for wine, as it won't make you feel comfortable.

I think why this book... Has such a poor performance... It is obviously well written.

The author is great, please don't have a female protagonist. Why do you want the heroine to do that? Doesn't it look good for me, Kudo Shinji, to be like him? 😁

The beginning is good, but the rest is like that kind of villain novel, forcibly giving others a halo of the world to interfere with the protagonist's actions. It feels frustrating and boring.

I read the first dozens of chapters and then went straight to the table of contents.

It's great, the beginning is quite suspenseful. Already followed and collected... Looking forward to recycling

When I read this introduction, I thought it said, "They are very strong, but it doesn't matter because their horses can't run as fast as mine" (funny)

The writing is very good, but I would like to make some suggestions First of all, it is a matter of strength. I saw that the protagonist was very powerful at the beginning of the article. Who is the first person in the world? How long does it take to train, and then suddenly he is on the same level as Gin? Official data shows that Gin is good at assassination. His long-range sniper is not as good as Shuichi Akai, close combat is not as good as Anshi Tohru, and mid-range sniping is not as good as Calvados, but he is better at balance and organization. The executioner, so it looks more scary If the protagonist is as strong as him, it is completely impossible to dominate the dark world Then there is power. The world is a big cake. The rise of each global organization does not only share the interests of one or two organizations, but also considers the relationship between many organizations, so there will inevitably be compromises. This is why there are so many undercovers in black organizations, and politicians generally look down on new organizations.

It's kind of poisonous not being able to kill the main character.

It has been identified that this book is Hedinghong. Come on, have you read Conan? Writing blindly?

Do you have to write about magic... It's quite boring I only read Conan fandom for daily life... Suddenly I started doing magic or something. It's hard to explain in a word.

Why does the Conan fanfic start with either a winery or a detective?

In fact, the writing is okay, but the setting is too poisonous and seems very contradictory.

Bourbon, Amuro Toru, low-grain zero; can be attacked or tolerated, salty or sweet

I understand that the heroine is Haibara Ai. I don't have to read it. If I like Ai, I will come in. If I don't, we will discuss how many books the heroine is not Ai.

The will of the world can be strong, but it will never affect the plot in such a brainless way that leaves people speechless.

Could the author tell me how long this book is going to be, or whether it will be finished in a short period of time? I'm a little panicked after reading the comments below. I don't want to finish it while I'm at it. . .