I Traveled to a World with Elves

Jiangjiang left little footprints here. By the way, I moved a small bench and sat down. I brought my own small cakes, melon seeds, and spicy strips to watch the big book. ^_^

Now the first person is definitely trying to persuade you to quit.

The mythical beast is too weak! Did you say that the fully leveled Level 2 Divine Beast Flame Bird was defeated by the 70 Bond Evolution? Is technology so valuable? Can any object capture a sacred beast or a mythical beast? Are you going to intervene in the battle between super beasts? If he still attacks, can he withstand the aftermath?

The food was tasteless and nothing interesting. Daily life is not routine enough, and battles are not exciting enough. Moreover, it feels like a 50-50 split even if you are cheating and beating anyone.

It's all full of flaws, you can look at it without thinking

Author, you seem to have written too many skills that elves can learn when they are weak.

What is the use of this plug-in? ? ? ? Others are equally great without plug-ins. After reading more than 70 chapters, I feel like it helps the protagonist save money and nothing else.

The elf of system flow is really a magic weapon of water characters.

The whole process was to persuade him to quit. There is no bright spot at all, that's the truth.

This plug-in is broken. The protagonist improves so quickly, but the results are still the same as those of his peers. It's useless...

Going to high school at 11 years old?

Childish protagonist, depends on the system for everything

Why is it that the reward for discovering a characteristic is 1 million and a skill disc, which is already 10 million? And then the champion also gives the protagonist a set of evolution stones. They have just met. How is that possible? How can someone who just finished the game go to another place a few days later? The author should explain the reason.

No conscious system likes it

Are you playing against an elf?

Author, you can read other elf novels, learn from their lessons and advantages, and then write a new elf novel.

In 2020, I wanted to try to change the status quo, so I wanted to try writing something, so I came up with this online article. In fact, I feel in my heart that the writing is really bad. The scene description is not good, the character description is not good, and the plot is not good either. Sometimes I really want to give up, but actually a lot of the follow-up content is still being thought about in my mind and has not yet been written into an outline. But there are still many people recommending it to me, and there are more than 200 collections, so I will still insist on finishing it. I hope that through this time I can improve my writing skills and that the next one will be liked by everyone.

I felt that the writing was so bad that I couldn't stand it, so I decided to revise the previously published content in the near future, hoping to satisfy everyone.

The content was recently published before modification. Please forgive me if it hinders reading.

The company has been writing tender documents these days. Sorry for the delay in updating. I will try to make up for it later.

Two points do you believe in the alliance so much?

Just watched. In the first game where the colors faded, the elves were changed too many times. How could they be changed so casually? Is it possible that some relay batons and the like are not pushing the team?

Is the protagonist's family an ordinary family? It is acceptable for the father to give 500,000 yuan, but a 15-year-old child has 100,000 yuan in savings. . . Awesome