The Girl Who Wears Fast Clothes Is Not Suitable for Her Anymore

I like this quick-travel novel. The style is crisp and clear. The heroine's character is also self-improvement. Each of the short stories is also very novel and fresh. However, I don't know what kind of heroine the author wants to establish. I think the plot of the novel is to portray the characters. In this novel, each story seems to be told too quickly, and the character traits of the perpetrators (the original male and female protagonists) in the story are too thin and too brainless. I would like to make some small suggestions to the author: First, can Yuan Xi slow down a little and feel more of the beauty of the world. Secondly, in this novel, since every world is real, can some supporting characters be "double-sided" so that they have both shortcomings and advantages, with more psychological descriptions and environmental descriptions to portray the characters? Next, I hope the author can add some positive supporting characters so that readers will not be fatigued by the numerous scenes of abuse and slaps in the face. Finally, I hope that the author can add his own characteristics to the cookie-cutter routines among the many fast-traveling articles. I wish the novels will get better and better as they are written. The above is my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.

I like it very much, I hope Sister Xi can be happy with 000

It's too short, at least write a side story. It looks pretty good. It just feels like every piece is too short.

What to say about this book! A combination of spear and shield! There are obvious shortcomings but there are also obvious advantages. Let's talk about the advantages first. This is a fast-travel novel with a very fast pace. The heroine in the book is efficient and does not procrastinate, and her outlook on life is also good. The author has no obvious nonsense in writing the book. The plot is very well connected and makes it easy to read. The stories of each unit are also well written, and some units are even more novel and imaginative. It is also fast-paced and as long as you don't mess around, the book will basically not collapse. But the shortcomings are also obvious! The characters in the article are not delicate enough because after all, it is a fast-travel novel and the details are not easily displayed, making it difficult for people to have a strong sense of involvement in the story. The image of the heroine is not vivid enough, and I often forget the previous chapter after reading the next chapter. The above is my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it! By the way, if you like cool writing, you can rest assured that there are not too many clues. It is a pretty good book for those who like cool writing. Even if you don't like cool writing, you can read it. After all, there are really not many good books nowadays. As long as it doesn't collapse, it is considered a good book, not to mention that this book is really good! ! !

I actually finished reading it in one sitting for free. I really liked it. The protagonist is neat and tidy! The system is silent and does its job! The author will continue to write and will support you!

I read this book in one afternoon. I like the style of this book very much. It is not procrastinating. Of course, it would be better if the plot could be more complete, such as more extra chapters Overall, I am very happy to read it^_^.

I'm tired of reading stories with dozens or hundreds of chapters. I like this type of novel. The most important thing is that it doesn't have so much nonsense. Come on, author! ! !

I enjoyed reading it, but it was a little short. I only finished it after a few days of enrichment.... Compared with the other 30 or 50 chapters and the fast-travel articles with one story in hundreds of chapters, this book is really fast-paced. It is short and does not drag out. It would be even better if the supporting roles in each story could be fleshed out and different exciting extras I especially like this kind of powerful IQ online. The heroine with a positive sense of justice and no cp, and the system, trust each other and accompany each other. The task method of working hard (´-ω-`) Finally, I wish the author to get strong as soon as possible and come back to write a new article~(´･･)ﾉ(._.`)

It's very beautiful. I like the protagonist's dual quotient and three views.

Now I feel like these people are like robots, with no inner description, I can't stand it anymore, so I say goodbye.

Maybe it's just that I'm not used to such short novels. Only two or three chapters have as many words as one chapter of others. The pace is very fast. Telling stories for the sake of telling stories is like keeping a running account... The story is okay, maybe I'm just not used to it. I couldn't stand it anymore, so I left.

We are all locked up at home, and there is nothing to do anyway, so why not update more!

Emm, I found a lot of long comments from big guys in the post. After reading them, most of them are quite pertinent. It would be better if the writing was more serious and detailed. It still has potential. However, at present, more than 100 chapters are readable and the logic is barely wrong.

Each story is too short, so don't have too many top stories , otherwise it will be like in chronicle novels, there are too many top stories, it will be annoying to read, and you can't stand it anymore. Most of the chronicles nowadays are top quality

That's it? Too short, the characters are thin, the content is watery, farewell

Everyone wants to read more. I don't mean to tell you to finish a chapter so quickly!

The pace is too fast, and you arrive at the next world without any buffering. It's not very adaptable.

I wrote a comment in the comment area. The author is so cute, hahahahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia. All the chapter names are "I am there, that, that, I am, that, that," and the obsessive-compulsive disorder is extremely comfortable.

300,000 Words completed? Did you generate electricity for love?

I feel that the writing style is a bit similar to "Kuai Yuan Xiaoyao Dao", except that the male protagonist is the main character.

I actually forgot to watch it after I fully ordered it, so I'm back to watch it now.

The writing style is average, there are few typos, the logic is general but there are no big loopholes, the plot is relatively common, and the chapters are not divided well. I just finished the last story, and the next story started without any warning, which is quite abrupt. If the author wants to write next time, he can separate the stories.                                                                                                                                                                                , bad novels have their own poisonous points, and different readers have different points of enjoyment and poison.             ，，，， No cp, no ambiguity, the heroine is not weak, not a virgin, not a white lotus, not an idiot, not mentally retarded, not a coming-of-age story, not a hydrology, the pace is fast, the system appears very rarely, almost never. Don't rely on system cheats, there is no mall, there is space.         ，，，