
Black Dragon City Tour
黑龙都市行
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 85k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Superpowers
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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34Chapters
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After reading some, your introduction to the prologue is too long, and you have just finished writing the three golden chapters. You write about the protagonist being hunted down, and then entering the cave, the demon king, Yao Lao, and the senior characters. You can definitely abbreviate the characters. The first part of the article seems to be nothing new and not very tempting, but it will feel good later on. I have to say that you wrote the three golden chapters as battle royale, entering the cave, and training. These can be written in one chapter. The abbreviations are squeezed into the wedge, and don't be too wordy! Go straight to the topic, open up new content, and more importantly, attract readers to continue reading.
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