My Miss Mint

The rise of the Hawthorn Party, long live the Hawthorn Party

I think (personal opinion): The heroine can be replaced by Hawthorn... Ahem, what about everyone?

The author's ideas are really good, and it feels great to see two hearts getting closer and closer through the exchange of letters. I have also read the author's new book, but to be honest, I didn't feel as good as the beginning of this one. Actually, I think the time flow rate of the two people can be a little closer. The IU line is more than 10 years old, while the male protagonist is only more than a month old. The time gap is too different. According to common sense, friends who contact each other once a year will easily be diluted no matter how good they are. If the two timelines were closer, it would give the male protagonist room to grow. For example, the male protagonist's growth path is as follows: from being a street singer, participating in programs through teachers/talents, producing music independently, and becoming a singer. If the male protagonist's line is from 2014 to 19, and the iu is from 05 to 19, the letters exchanged between the two parties will be more than ten times more, and the content of the letters will not only be a guide, but also gradually change from a teacher in life to a teacher in music, to a friend in music. They write songs to each other, comfort each other amidst the violence that is black on the Internet, and finally the two meet to sublimate their relationship. If there are a few twists and turns, they can also write about some of the differences in life after the real meeting, including living habits, running announcements and not caring much, and they can also write about being jealous of the next door neighbor and so on. In fact, in the final analysis, the author did not solve the relationship breakdown caused by the inequality of status between men and women. From the beginning, looking at the female supporting role, I knew what kind of conflict the author wanted to create later, but it was a pity. I hope the author can consider restarting it when he has time. I really think this subject matter is very good.

I have long said that if Mint Line wants to continue writing, IU and the male protagonist must go through hardships, that is, there must be a cleansing process. As a result, as soon as IU confessed her love, the male protagonist licked her back. An unequal love will not make people feel involved at all. Why is Hawthorn written more smoothly? Because this is a complete story, from strangers to friends, from friends to relatives, there are stories to support it, and there is also a pavement for the warming of the relationship. But the Mint Line is completely a dog-licking story. It is just a pen pal who replied to letters for several months. He confessed his love as soon as they met. After the failure, he met Hawthorn. When Mint saw that his licking dog was robbed, he immediately snatched it back with one sentence, and the male protagonist immediately licked it back. Especially in male-oriented novels, no one wants to read a story about dog-licking But I give high praise to the author for not giving up and not giving up because of failure. The author is also improving step by step. The framework of the story is actually very good at the beginning. In fact, you can consider remaking it. I will continue to support the next book with monthly votes and recommendations. I hope the author can write an ideal work.

Holding high the banner of the Hawthorn Party, little IU is ridiculous

The author reminds me, don't let those people ruin your mentality. It is said that it is difficult to satisfy everyone. You cannot satisfy everyone. You have almost 20,000 recommendation votes now. Please write more these days and contact the editor to see if you can be recommended in a category. If your grades are good, you might even get a recommendation. The writing profession really requires you to be able to endure criticism, not only from readers, but also from peers. Look at Jiangnan, I think these people have been sent razors countless times by readers, but after updating, readers are still Wang Jingze. The work really has to be judged by its quality. If you tell the story well, you have nothing to fear.

Although I like IU, I prefer this book to Yuri

Lime is mint, hawthorn is mint. Zhi En and Ming Yan get along like young lovers. But Hawthorn and Mingyan look like an old couple who have been together for seven years. The outcome is clear at a glance. .

The author insists on writing about IU, so I guess the next step is to downplay Yu Li's appearance. Although you are outstanding, I just won't write about you. Then there were various misunderstandings, misses, etc., And then IU's emotions turned and they were forced to get together. Welcome to slap the author in the face

When I opened the starting point and saw two updates, I was very surprised! When you look at it, you realize that I'm overthinking it😂