Rebirth in the Southern Song Dynasty and Seek Immortality

Originally, this novel was quite to my liking, and the early and middle stages were quite good. But now, what are you writing about? Are you changing this urban literary style? Have you rewritten your diary? The water is so irritating to the eyes! It's so bland, like eating vegetables without salt! The author has successfully eliminated any expectations from me! ! !

After reading Chapter 10, I wonder if my poison resistance is high? This writing is really childish~~

The author speculates that the Murong family's internal skills are instantaneous, have no value in practice, and are inferior to Quanzhen's ordinary internal skills. I don't agree. First of all, when Murong Fu was in his twenties and thirties, he earned the title of Nan Murong by relying on his family's martial arts. There are only four cheaters among the younger generation who can defeat him. The older generation only has three from the Shaolin Sutra Pavilion, three from the Xiaoyao Sect, plus Jiumozhi. Neither Ding Chunqiu nor Duan Yanqing may win. Then there is Jin Yong's world, where martial arts declines over time. You actually said it is not as good as Quanzhen's basic internal strength? ? ?

I'm curious as to what the author will write next. It has been written about modern times, is it possible that there will be "revival of spiritual energy" and "cosmic cultivation" in the end? ? ?

This book can't be the same as one written by children

Extremely poisonous, he has died, please read with caution

The protagonist is too cowardly and not fun to watch.

I am lucky enough to read the latest chapter. The author probably wants to experience this world as a bystander and then look for immortality! Personally, I feel that the presence of the protagonist is too low. If it were about daily life, the heroine and hero could be more grateful, otherwise it would be too bland, and it would be like watching TV in fast forward!

There is nothing interesting to see in the back, and it is no longer attractive.

Guo Jing's Quanzhen Internal Skills and the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms were not taught to others privately, and Yang Guo's mother never taught him Xiaoyaoyou until her death. Dongxie's apprentices did not even teach Peach Blossom Island martial arts to their children without Dongxie's consent. This is because they keep gratitude and respect for their teachers in their hearts. Privately teaching martial arts without permission is a taboo in the sect. Originally, the old naughty boy's teaching of martial arts to the protagonist was just a side project, and he was considered a registered disciple. If the old naughty boy teaches the protagonist martial arts, it is inevitable that the protagonist cannot pass it on to others, including his children and his wife. The protagonist knows this but still passes it on to others, which is an injustice to the old naughty boy. It can be seen that the protagonist has no principles, does not remember gratitude, and is an ignorant white-eyed wolf.

The protagonist agreed to the Quanzhen teaching and the martial arts he learned could not be passed on to others. Later he met a beautiful woman and felt that the beauty had a temperament, so he passed it on easily. 🙂 It's 2020, and there is no market for the protagonist of dog licking + hanging silk. Normal men will have requirements for themselves, and normal male readers will not assume the role of a despicable, spineless male protagonist. 🙂 Grandpa, I read novels. The male protagonist can be less ambitious, indifferent and leisurely, or he can not be a ruthless and awesome type who kills decisively, even if it is a hot-blooded Japanese comic genre. But one thing is that your grandfather and I will never watch a low-key, dog-licking protagonist. Get out!

Maybe I'm quite selfish in my heart, and don't really like giving martial arts to others casually, and when I'm not an acquaintance. It is better to give it to Lu Chengfeng than to give it to Huang Rong

Although I don't hate the protagonist who shares his martial arts skills with others, and sometimes I feel a little warm when I see the protagonist sharing good things with his family and friends, but the protagonist of this book has never even met Lu Chengfeng, and he just comes to teach others the Murong family's martial arts secrets. What's wrong? Is Lu Chengfeng your long-lost father?

At the beginning of the protagonist's life, when people around him asked if he could learn martial arts from the Quanzhen sect, they said that he didn't have permission and couldn't teach it privately. Now here comes a little girl who looks more elegant so I just pass it on casually. (Although according to the routine, this woman must be the heroine)

Not filial to parents, unjust to friends, unkind to the nation. The superior cannot serve his family and country, and the inferior cannot save the people. He has all the skills and all kinds of knowledge, but he has no intention of saving the nation. He just says that this is a destiny, and there is nothing he can do. Even if Yue Buqun is reincarnated and Jiang Biehe is reincarnated, it is extremely difficult. I examine myself three times a day.

A few comments 1. In addition to being righteous and peaceful, the characteristics of the Quanzhenxin method include all-weather low-efficiency automatic operation. The whole set of Zhenxin Dharma created by Master Chongyang has transformed every movement and stillness in daily life into a method of practice. Starting from sitting, standing, walking, eating and sleeping, there are fixed postures and breathing methods. Although Taoist exercises are slow to practice, if you spend all your time practicing, even eating and sleeping without relaxing, the overall speed will definitely not be slower than any other method. 2. At present, Nine Yang Magic is the easiest internal skill to obtain, because it is kept in the place where Buddhist scriptures are collected in Shaolin Temple instead of the place where martial arts are collected. There is no need to sneak into Shaolin Temple. You only need to say your wish and pay enough incense money, and then you can go in and copy it.

This is the stupidest martial arts novel I have ever read

At the beginning, I said I couldn't teach Quanzhen Kung Fu, but when I met a girl in Chapter 13, I taught her directly. The quality of the starting point became worse and worse. I can really write a novel about anything.

It is true that I paddled the whole process, and I always say that others can't do it, but you, Li Shucheng, did it yourself. I am really speechless and have no sense of participation at all, like a zz who accomplished nothing from the Southern Song Dynasty to the Republic of China.

This is the only martial arts book that relies on hard wounds to persuade people to quit in the first ten chapters. First of all, those who have watched Jin Yong's martial arts know that Jin Yong's martial arts becomes weaker as he goes on. Secondly, Quanzhen's only strong martial arts is Xiantian Kung Fu. Quanzhen Internal Kung Fu can only be said to be neutral and peaceful, and it is not a particularly strong internal Kung Fu or mental method at all. Except for Qiu Chuji, who was barely able to reach the top level of the Divine Eagle, most of the Quanzhen Seven Sons couldn't even beat Huo Du. Then, Tianlong is far stronger than the Divine Eagle, both in terms of internal strength and martial arts. Murong Fu is an absolute first-class master in Tianlong, and if he gets the divine eagle, he must be at least a five-level master. Finally, although Murong Longcheng comes from the narrator, his era is earlier than Tianlong. He was almost at the same time as the founder of Dali and the founder of Xiaoyao Sect, and he described Murong Longcheng as being invincible and famous all over the world. There is also a description of the gap between the Tianlong period and the periods of Duan Siping, Murong Longcheng, and Xiaoyaozi: "In these last days, martial arts were in decline, and no one could gather such strong and strong internal strength." It can be seen that in the previous period, the internal strength must be stronger and martial arts more prosperous. Tianlong has already declined, but as for the divine eagle, it may have declined to the extreme, right? Yiyang Zhi is considered a top martial arts master, the Six Meridians Divine Sword is gone, and the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms are all incomplete. And just like that, Yideng and Hong Qigong are both five masters. At this point in the book, Murong Longcheng is just an ordinary top master? The martial arts he created are all generic, apart from using the other person's way and applying it to the other person's body? The inner strength mental method is actually not as good as the Quanzhen mental method, which was the unit of measurement during the Shendiao period? And although the Shenhe finger is not as good as the Six Meridians Divine Sword in the original work, it is not comparable to the level of the Yiyang finger, right? How much did Murong Bo look down on Yiyangzhi when the original work came out? I feel like the author has no understanding of Jin Yong's martial arts system!

The protagonist is a rookie who has not yet left Gusu City. How can he have the confidence to think that his understanding of Quanzhen swordsmanship is deeper than that of the Quanzhen Seven Sons? I'm still thinking of reducing the Quanzhen Sword Technique to twenty or ten moves. Wang Chongyang has never thought of that. Are you a chicken? Don't think about changing your skills until you reach the stage of Five Ultimate Skills, okay? Once you develop your inner strength, you will become invincible, right? Are you still afraid of spreading your inner strength to Jin Kingdom and Mongolia? ? ? With such a powerful force, if there were no masters, the emperor would have been killed a thousand and eight hundred times. It is really poisonous.

Guo Jing can sacrifice his life for the country, but the protagonist is selfish. His parents asked him to have children, but he made them wait until their death without even having one. Is it difficult? His father asked him to take the imperial examination, but he took it perfunctorily. The country was ruined and the family was destroyed, but he ran overseas to hide. This kind of person is depraved and cunning, and is completely unworthy of old naughty professors, the upbringing of his parents, and the upbringing of his country.

I can only see Chapter 10, no more. You were robbed while doing business. The person who kidnapped you paid the protection fee! You still think he is very powerful (ง •̀_•́)ง Go to his house and give him your secret skills! There is no such thing as licking! I refuse to be disabled! It's all for nothing!

The writing is not good, all the big and small things are dealt with in one stroke. The supporting characters are not qualified to speak, and even if they speak, they cannot express the character that suits their status. The plot is poor. The protagonist can acquire martial arts easily and likes to teach martial arts randomly. In the second chapter, he teaches his servant Quanzhen basic boxing skills. Then he says that he cannot teach martial arts easily, and later he teaches his enemy's apprentice Jiuyang Divine Kung Fu. The protagonist, as a teenage boy, refutes his father who has been brainwashed by Confucianism, saying that Confucianism is not good today, and yet he convinces his father with just one sentence? ? The most important point is that there are too many typos. There are really too many. Occasionally, there may be three or two typos in places that can be used as highlights.

The plot is protracted, the timeline is confusing, and the outlook on the world is very distorted. The Murong family's internal skills are taught everywhere like cabbage. When others ask, they tell the truth. They hoard money when they have it, and have no pursuits. Even with Jiuyang and Jiuyin, they still have no future. I have no problem with rationalizing martial arts practice, but it's hard for you if you don't have any idea.

From the time martial arts was written to the present, history has not changed at all, so why should I read it? Later I stopped subscribing. I advise latecomers not to fall into the trap.

When he was two years old, he met an old naughty boy and started practicing martial arts. He learned the inner skills, mental skills and swordsmanship taught by the whole town. Then he taught the village's Quanzhen inner strength without permission. When he was five or six years old, he found the inheritance of Gusu Murong. Just take one look and say Dou Zhuan Xing Yi is rubbish, and the technique of using strength to fight can only defeat those weaker than yourself? Can't we beat the weak Ping A? Also, after watching Dragon City Sword Technique, I thought it was pretty good. Without practicing it, I integrated and improved Quanzhen Sword Technique, and reduced the 49 moves to 15 essences? ? I secretly thought that I am now about the same level as the Quanzhen Seventh Son, are you kidding me? You haven't had a single actual battle with anyone. You have been practicing martial arts for three or four years when you were just 6 or 7 years old and taught martial arts to the whole town. How can you be as good as the Quanzhen Seventh Son under the guidance of a famous teacher? ? Throw a shuriken and you and Kakashi will fight, right?

I couldn't stand it after a few chapters, and even commented on Murong Longcheng's skills. The five skills combined were not enough for Murong Longcheng to fight alone. Having never fought against anyone, Jiu commented on swordsmanship and martial arts, and thought that killing a wolf was the same as beating a human. Even if you haven't fought with anyone before, you still have to delete and modify martial arts skills... Good secrets are created by the creator based on hundreds of thousands of experiences with martial artists. Qiao Feng practiced for many years and fought many battles before modifying the secrets.

It's so poisonous that you dare to talk nonsense after only practicing Quanzhen's basic internal skills and swordsmanship for a few years. Nan Murong has inherited martial arts for so many years, but he is not as knowledgeable as you, a person who has only practiced basic martial arts for a few years. The martial arts created by a top master are so-so. What's the matter? Shen He pointed out that Longcheng Sword Technique can only bully people who are weaker than you. It is not as good as the Quanzhen Basic Mind Technique and Sword Technique that you have practiced. It is like a primary school student who just learned addition and subtraction and said that a PhD student is not as good as your addition and subtraction method. Who gave you the courage to say this, Liang Jingru? I'm afraid Liang Jingru won't even dare to give you this courage😅

First of all, I don't understand why you spread martial arts everywhere. You learn other people's martial arts and then pass it on to others without consent. For example, you pass on the Quanzhen sect's martial arts to outsiders. What do you tell the Quanzhen sect to do? It's like modern plagiarism. Why is there knowledge protection? You stole my shovel and gave it to others. You pretended to be a good person, and then I will bear the consequences.