Come First in the Beginning
开局先来大
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 52k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Stats
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23Chapters
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The writing is not bad, but there are too many verbose things, especially the paragraphs describing the environment. At the beginning of the article, the reader has no idea what kind of story you are describing. It is best to go straight to the topic and don't write in such detail other than necessary.
What can I say? We all stay together and wait for updates. Hurry up!
Duanyi came to visit and hope we can work hard together in February
Very well written! The author will update soon!
Update soon. It's well written.