Stay in the Portable World

Now the protagonist is completely out of the home setting. Obviously, you can slowly explore another world. When you are tired of exploring, you can go on a trip or attend some comic exhibitions to do handicrafts. It is so relaxing and relaxing. I have to forcefully write a few female characters and then be burdened by favors. There is also a Baiyudan incident in an organic vegetable and mineral water factory, which excessively increases the chance of exposure! I have read several similar novels written by the author before, and they all collapsed in the middle and late stages. I still can't change my old habits!

Let's not talk about the plot of opening a water plant, which is such a loss of share, but the writing about the dividend is really poisonous! ! ! !

If you can't write an emotional scene, then don't write it, you're an embarrassing group...

I'm going! ! ! "Staying in the Portable Space" This book should be yours too! Although I can't find it now, are you making a fool of yourself? ? Is it really okay to rewrite and still write so rubbish? ! !

After reading too many pretense and slap in the face, I came across the title of Xianyu's book and came to read it. It's okay in the front, the mentality of a salted fish is the behavior of a salted fish. But after he started to be friends with the female writer, the protagonist became more tired than a dog, and the affairs of running the water plant and Bai Yudan became completely influenced by the female writer and her family. After that, he started to stud, and the more he watched the protagonist, the more tired he became.

The book did become more and more broken as I wrote it. In the early stage, I thought I had found a treasure, but in the later stages, the plot became worse and worse.

In Chapter 199, there are remarks about regional blackness. Although it is said in the mouth of the character, I have to suspect that the author himself thought so, so he abandoned the book.

To be honest, I feel good about the first part of this book, but at the end, especially when it comes to the national level, isn't it everyone's obligation to pay taxes? It can't be more than half at most. Wouldn't it be better to use this money in exchange for peace of mind? It's enough. And why can't we hand over the materials we obtained to the state? Do you have persecutory delusions? ? ? It's good that the male protagonist's character has shortcomings, but author, you have portrayed it too much, and you may even have said it. You succeeded in making me dislike this book Personal experience, I don't have much social experience, don't comment if you don't like it

There were too many scumbag scenes, which made me sick to watch. If this continues, the only option is to abandon the book.

What the hell did the author write at the end? The more I read, the more annoying I get.

I gave up the book, and saw that it was getting worse and worse at the end. I could still read it before. What happened later was that Lan Mengxin got married, and Lan Mengxin did all kinds of things, and even agreed to all kinds of things. The character of the protagonist is very different from the previous one. Hey, the more I read, the more uncomfortable I am. I suggest you finish it as soon as possible, if there is nothing to write.

The more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes, licking a dog

I knew Aunt He would be caught. I was shocked that the mother of a billionaire's wife was caught selling fake health products.

This book collapsed from the moment women appeared. The description of emotions is so bad.

It's okay at the beginning, but it gets more and more vicious at the end, especially the female protagonists. I feel that the biggest flaw of this novel is these women. It's just terrible.

The protagonist is so tired of living, has such a chaotic life, and is too soft-hearted.

The early foundation is very good, but there are too few plot twists later.

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I think the book he wrote is quite good. The author, who lives under a lot of pressure nowadays, is close to real life and adds some imagination. For example, you will not get tired of reading it when you are in a daze and bored. The casual book does not have so much competitive pressure. It is very good and I hope it will not be unfinished! I have added it to my bookshelf to keep following!

I gave you two dollars and a half, you ate shit. Chapter 148 What do you want to do? If the relationship is established early, it doesn't matter how much you give the author, but you write that the protagonist has no feelings for the designer, and then you insist on giving her money? One million ten percent? This is a big, sure-profit business, and your girlfriend can make a profit from selling a house. Wouldn't it be nice to give her a little more? Still treat everyone equally? It's just a joke. The protagonist's girlfriend also has a low IQ. She obviously has a better choice, but she has to kill her through the plot? There are also designers who really have the nerve to speak out. Really, this one also has an IQ below the line. A person with a normal IQ would not have the nerve to make such a request. It is not an investment of unknown value, but one who dares to ask after already knowing the value. After being rejected, he proposed it again and after discussing with Lan, it was reduced to 5%. The protagonist was still not happy and insisted on giving 10%. ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The author can consider a prefabricated house or an RV as a residence in another world. Compared with a simple shed or building a house by yourself, these feel more suitable. In addition, since the protagonist should also consider his own house in the real world, after all, as a rented house, some problems will arise sooner or later. Some small comments, for reference only

I'm here to scold the author. It's okay at the beginning, but what the hell is going on in the end? Is it worthy of your introduction? The promised home nickname? Did you agree to explore the portable space? The more you write, the uglier and more cliched it becomes. For new readers, I suggest you open the table of contents and take a look. You'll find it boring later. Goodbye.

The first comment on this book, if I hadn't voted for recommendation today, I would have voted for you, hmm, please add some fine points?

Returning to urban home-style writing, it will definitely become a high-quality product

If the author still writes like this, he will definitely be disappointed! Originally, it is a good book. If nothing else, it can at least allow readers to finish it and you can get some results! But what the hell did you write? Don't you see that there is something wrong with what you wrote? Or is this the kind of value you have? There is still a way to save it now, issue an apology, ① rewrite from the place where the female writer and heroine were accepted, reorganize the outline, and make it more normal. ② Rewrite the story from before the two heroines were pregnant, and find a reasonable excuse to send these two heroines away! To be honest, I really want to finish it, but I really can't stand your whole thing! As for the jewelry, that girl is more normal than these two heroines! Nothing! ! !

What is it like for a person with very upright views to read a novel that subverts his views? I am experiencing it now. Who asked me to subscribe to so many chapters? 😆😆😆 It would be a waste of money if I don't read it.

I immediately gave up the book after reading the harem, oh yeah

When I saw everyone scolding me, I felt relieved. Using poison to describe this book really matched the word perfectly.

I really don't know what the author was thinking. In the beginning, he portrayed a person who was very homely and didn't want to fall in love. Later, he changed too quickly, and he also had a harem. Wouldn't his personality be split? You either have a harem stud from the beginning, or you have a heroine who is single-minded and the theme is not clear. She can't stand it when she is not clear with Li. It's really disgusting. The first part is very gripping, but the second part is really unbearable and makes me vomit.