Fake Golden Finger

If you don't read it carefully, some plots are really incomprehensible.

Let's talk about the shortcomings. Being very detailed is an advantage... But being detailed from the beginning is a problem... Because the world is too complicated and we just want to read the story. The world does not need to be described. We can feel it from the story. Don't treat readers as fools, because they will discuss and improve the world by themselves. Then the second question is the definition of protagonist, what is a protagonist, the core character of the story, so there is no description of the protagonist in more than 30 chapters? Not very few, but none. Even if you write something about the protagonist's daily fishing, or thoughts about the host, it would be good, because he is the protagonist, instead of watching a story destined to be a puppet protagonist, because it is boring, really boring. Third, the world is neither black nor white, nor gray. There can be one protagonist or many. People don't care, but they need charisma. Villains need it, but don't protagonists need it? Ideals, ambitions, persistence, dreams, experiences, feelings, and the choices made, may not be dark or bright, but they must be the choices made by the protagonist himself, not "reasonable". Fourth, the system is too boring. What is a system? Interesting, this is the core of the system, omniscience? Omnipotence? Yes, this is very powerful, but it is unique because of omniscience and omnipotence, so... It has no characteristics, just like God, yes, he is great, and then what? It cannot be described, so it is just great, but it is impossible for humans to realize how great it is. This is beyond the scope of human cognition. But when it comes to the sun god, humans will have a deep impression, because the sun is always there, and humans know his greatness, his light, his heat, and his importance to the world. Knowing the supreme meaning of this name, the system is actually the same. Omniscient and omnipotent, mortals cannot understand it after all. Because he is not a "god"

Many people say that the first dozen or so inkblots are good, but I think they are quite good. They talk about the details, and don't they give people a sense of control? It's not like the feeling of being scratching your head and not knowing what it is, and a feeling of being oppressed (personal opinion, if you don't like it, just complain, let me take care of you😶) In the end, the only shortcoming of this book that I have read so far is that there are too few chapters.

It seems like it is for children, there are too many explanations.

As long as the writing is messy enough, no one will be able to find any clues about it.

I don't seem to be able to read slow-burning novels. It's better to get together and relax.

It was so sloppy. After reading many chapters at the beginning, I almost forgot about the real protagonist of this book. I almost thought it was just a story about what happened in this world. The real protagonist was not mentioned at all. 😒😒

There are too many unnecessary foreshadowings, which makes people sleepy, and many chapters are skipped.

After reading it, I think the author and the author are suitable for writing a life series of novels

Opening feeling: It should be a good work First copy: Where is the protagonist? ? ? Why is my mastermind protagonist missing? What are these two elementary school students doing? , Why not destroy the world?

It's a very good novel, but you've gone into too much detail earlier. Why do you want to fast forward? Suddenly it's c-a-level and s-level. The skeleton and textures are all drawn and it suddenly ends. There's not even a formal fight, and the development of skills and traits is not used. I'm really disappointed. If you want to be detailed, why don't you write a long story? It ends in an anticlimax.

. . . Although every author has his own setting, and it feels a little intellectual to say that the original author's setting is nonsense, this setting really makes me feel incomprehensible.

Don't know why I can't understand it. Maybe my taste is not in line with this novel. I always felt it was a bit unsatisfying, complex + bland.

In fact, the writing is good, but it is a bit slow to catch on. After all, there are still more audiences for light novels and creative novels (I am one of them~(￣▽￣~)~). Even if the author writes about novel themes, it will be difficult to attract readers who tend to read novels to relax; of course, if the author insists on writing and maintains the quality at the beginning, he can still attract a small audience |･ω･｀). Anyway, the author needs to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง

I have read about fifty chapters. To be honest, it is a bit too confusing. There are too many setting explanations and inner analysis of the characters. It is difficult to read. I have always felt that the character of the characters and the background of the world are reflected in the story in the novel. I read the novel to read a good story, not to accompany the author to imagine the world he created. This book is poisonous weed level.

What can I say, the first world feels a bit too complicated? There are too many settings, I feel like I can release them bit by bit, come on

I scanned the table of contents and saw a chapter without a chapter name and didn't want to read it. Are you like me and saw a chapter without a chapter name and didn't want to read it?

Moreover, the author's writing style seems to be difficult to write with so many protagonists and difficult to control the plot.

Is it complicated? ? ? Are you accustomed to reading fast food articles without thinking about them? And I also think this book is a bit naive.

There were too few people, but the writing was obviously pretty good, and the writing style was pretty good. Although the main character's role was a bit small, it was quite enjoyable to watch. Come on, author, I hope there will be more people in the future

It's like writing a TV series, bit by bit, endlessly. It feels like writing a diary

More than a hundred chapters were written in one world. . .

I feel like the performance of this book is not good.

Why not reveal Mo Yao at the end? Wouldn't it be nice to have one protagonist in one world? (It can be written like a series of short stories and then the identity of Mo Yao is revealed in each volume) Set up as a character similar to a background board. (It's boring to explain everything clearly at the beginning, and it's not a daily joke. If you think about Mo Yao's purpose, it won't make you ignite. If you say it's scary, think about Mo Yao's purpose. It won't make you scary. (We all know what the male protagonist is doing, so it's scary.) (If I want to say that Mo Yao is not the male protagonist, then I have nothing to say. It's just a little strange why the first volume keeps introducing him.) (It is estimated that in the end, the male protagonist will either change his evil ways or be beaten by the iron fist of justice. The river crab beast is watching you)) Or create a kind of Mo Yao. Always watching the host, Mo Yao feels like he knows everything about the host (let the audience from God's perspective have this feeling, and it does not conflict with the host's impression of Mo Yao) (Personal opinion, I am a lousy reader and don't know if I can write like that, so I will provide an idea. I always feel that this book is well written, there are no problems, but I just don't have the desire to read...) (After reading Chapter 18, I feel that I am complete. Come on, author, I will see if there are any other interesting books)

I rarely post when I read a book, but the world setting of this book is really too complicated. I was confused when I read it. The details of the plot are okay, but I hope the setting can be as concise as possible. The subject matter is still very good.