Fake Golden Finger

Let's talk about the shortcomings. Being very detailed is an advantage... But being detailed from the beginning is a problem... Because the world is too complicated and we just want to read the story. The world does not need to be described. We can feel it from the story. Don't treat readers as fools, because they will discuss and improve the world by themselves. Then the second question is the definition of protagonist, what is a protagonist, the core character of the story, so there is no description of the protagonist in more than 30 chapters? Not very few, but none. Even if you write something about the protagonist's daily fishing, or thoughts about the host, it would be good, because he is the protagonist, instead of watching a story destined to be a puppet protagonist, because it is boring, really boring. Third, the world is neither black nor white, nor gray. There can be one protagonist or many. People don't care, but they need charisma. Villains need it, but don't protagonists need it? Ideals, ambitions, persistence, dreams, experiences, feelings, and the choices made, may not be dark or bright, but they must be the choices made by the protagonist himself, not "reasonable". Fourth, the system is too boring. What is a system? Interesting, this is the core of the system, omniscience? Omnipotence? Yes, this is very powerful, but it is unique because of omniscience and omnipotence, so... It has no characteristics, just like God, yes, he is great, and then what? It cannot be described, so it is just great, but it is impossible for humans to realize how great it is. This is beyond the scope of human cognition. But when it comes to the sun god, humans will have a deep impression, because the sun is always there, and humans know his greatness, his light, his heat, and his importance to the world. Knowing the supreme meaning of this name, the system is actually the same. Omniscient and omnipotent, mortals cannot understand it after all. Because he is not a "god"

Many people say that the first dozen or so inkblots are good, but I think they are quite good. They talk about the details, and don't they give people a sense of control? It's not like the feeling of being scratching your head and not knowing what it is, and a feeling of being oppressed (personal opinion, if you don't like it, just complain, let me take care of you😶) In the end, the only shortcoming of this book that I have read so far is that there are too few chapters.

It seems like it is for children, there are too many explanations.

As long as the writing is messy enough, no one will be able to find any clues about it.

It was so sloppy. After reading many chapters at the beginning, I almost forgot about the real protagonist of this book. I almost thought it was just a story about what happened in this world. The real protagonist was not mentioned at all. 😒😒

I don't seem to be able to read slow-burning novels. It's better to get together and relax.

Opening feeling: It should be a good work First copy: Where is the protagonist??? Why is my mastermind protagonist missing? What are these two elementary school students doing? , Why not destroy the world?

It's a very good novel, but you've gone into too much detail earlier. Why do you want to fast forward? Suddenly it's c-a-level and s-level. The skeleton and textures are all drawn and it suddenly ends. There's not even a formal fight, and the development of skills and traits is not used. I'm really disappointed. If you want to be detailed, why don't you write a long story? It ends in an anticlimax.

There are too many unnecessary foreshadowings, which makes people sleepy, and many chapters are skipped.

After reading it, I think the author and the author are suitable for writing a life series of novels