Lao Xu's Relics

This short story is very well written. Watched it for a noon time. The writing is good and I really enjoyed reading it. However, the first and last chapters are a bit cumbersome, complete with confusing perspective cuts. You can absolutely see and write with just the eyes of a co-worker👀. The mobile text messaging section is very exciting. If you compare, will the difference be better? There are different ways of chewing the old, one is to ask directly, the other is to deceive, all kinds of sweet words, all kinds of lies, just for money. After all, there are many ways to nibble on the elderly in life, and the personalities of children are also different. Writing the same thing is a waste of pen and ink and lacks breadth and depth. Speaking of depth, the novel has a clear theme. But it could be a little deeper. The main cause of the tragedy is nibbling on old age, but it also involves insufficient safety protection, reluctance to see a doctor, and the improvement of the medical insurance system for migrant workers. In addition, the love between co-workers needs to be sorted out. What exactly is meant to be expressed is unclear. This reminds me of the movie "I'm Not the God of Medicine". The same goes for writing. It writes the backbone of our era, and it also has the responsibility to promote the development of the era. I really don't like non-nutritious web articles. But, your article is amazing. If you practice again, you should be close to the level of famous masters. The above is my personal opinion. Give you a little red flower 🌸Looking forward to your more excellent works