Just Look at It and You Will Become an Immortal
看一眼就成仙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 12k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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6Chapters
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Well, the rewritten first chapter was pretty good, a lot of improvements. After getting to know White Ape, don't immediately add other supporting characters. Take a look at food novels. Write your daily life beautifully. Don't make the same mistakes as before. I hurriedly introduced the supporting characters and carefully considered the plot, character logic, and behavioral motivations. Finally, rewrite and arrange it piece by piece. Paragraph is too large.
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