Second Generation Wine Master

Author, your selection of materials is very interesting. You focus on restaurants, and the details are also very good. The only problem is your update. This book was published in 2019! That's just Braille! Hope you can improve this. In addition, <>, this is my book, I hope you can read it and leave a comment. Thanks!

The plot and writing are all excellent, keep up the good work and don't stop updating. Mutual relations have been closed. Keep updated, better every day

The name Jiuxian is very attractive. From the previous content, it can be seen that this is a novel about immortality with a new theme. The writing is very good. Keep up the good work!

Good. However, it has not been updated frequently. The cold readers have lost their interest in reading, and the readers' wish to read has been lost!

It's better to update the new book issue daily. Come on.

The novel begins in a restaurant, which I personally find quite interesting and engaging,! In addition, the writing style is smooth and the content is good. I am mainly looking forward to the next updates! It is recommended that some paragraphs be further subdivided, which may be more visually comfortable. To sum up, keep up the good work!

The plot is good, and wine leads to Taoism! But there are too many unreasonable elements in the plot. It would be too difficult for you to fill a newborn baby with alcohol. If you want to use heart-broken wine to highlight your child's special physique and avoid being discovered by Tiandao, you might as well think of other ways to highlight your child's physique. Then we have to talk about whether you, the wine wizard, should focus on wine or immortality. If you focus on immortality, then the pitfall must be that cultivation is the main focus. Then there is nothing wrong with your beginning, but there are no highlights. If wine is the focus, then the atmosphere of wine should be set off at the beginning and wine should be included in the drama. There is also a matter of details. You don't have to be precise at 1.1 Meters for the height of a three-month-old child. You should have the same height as a 2-year-old child. Wouldn't it be better to give readers a vague sense? The number of words in each chapter is too few, I suggest about 2,000! The above is my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it!

The title of the book is very attractive. The subject matter is okay, the plot is okay, and the writing is exquisite. But it's hard to retain readers if the new book issue doesn't keep the date. I hope the author can update it steadily, come on

Haha, I learned Taoism through wine, and the novel's selection is very interesting. From the beginning of the novel, the background is clearly explained, and the main plot enters very quickly. The story gets better and better as it goes on, and it can already arouse the interest and resonance of the readers. But the only slight flaw is that some of the article transitions are a bit blunt, and the writing style still needs to be refined.