Professional Card Artist

I waited until Chapter 10, but found that I had no desire to continue reading the novel. First of all, the biggest problem is that there are too many characters appearing at once. In just ten chapters, I don't understand how powerful the protagonist is except for the name Ye Luo and the ability to assist in card making. I don't know what kind of cards were used for the big event that indirectly killed a lot of people. It's like teasing the readers. Instead, the supporting characters appeared one by one, and each one can bully the protagonist at will. Maybe it will be more exciting later, but I can't stand it anymore. The second point is the rhythm issue. I understand that you like foreshadowing, but you have buried a lot of it in just ten chapters, and I have completely failed to see your ability to fill in the holes. The third point is depression. The protagonist indirectly killed people, and was bullied before. Now he is famous and powerful but is still bullied. He is like a doormat, with no temper at all, and no idea of resistance. Like a saint, he takes the responsibility. It is completely illogical to suppress the emotions in oneself, and have to be the teacher of other girls The idea is very good, but the author cannot express it, or wants to leave it to the later. As a reader, the world view of this work, that is, the ability is completely confused, and what the card master is is also confused. I feel that the author is more suitable for writing urban campus novels, at least the supporting characters have distinct personalities, 881~

When writing a novel, try not to use the first person, but you do! ! ! Then try to show me, me, me as little as possible. After reading the first chapter, there is a short paragraph with three words "I", which is quite dramatic. In addition, the author is not very old, right?

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