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The creativity is good, but some of the data are a bit confusing. It would be better to be more rigorous. Fifty kilometers in the morning, two thousand push-ups at noon, and then break the bones at night and rely on your ability to recover? ? You have a five-hour long run in the morning, at a speed of 10km per hour. It will be noon when you come back, and then you will immediately do two thousand push-ups... Break the bones in the evening... Your ability to heal is too buggy, are you not afraid of muscle dissolution... The more detailed and reliable the description of the treatment ability is, the better this problem will be. The spirit of violence is gone, otherwise I will scatter your bones and ashes into the Rhine River.

Author, in the first few chapters, the protagonist was so embarrassed when he fought. You learned Bajiquan. You can just call Bajiquan the name of the move.

Comments: Bringing people out has also been set up as a hidden front. In fact, the problem of bringing people out has been solved. The author handled this well. The whole book is very imaginative and creative. Let's talk about the shortcomings: At present, the plot of the whole book should be in the invincible style. The demon slayer part is okay, but I feel that the protagonist is full of hot-blooded Japanese comics, which is a bit embarrassing for the second half. When I finished the Heroes of the Lost Knight, I felt that the whole book was more about how the protagonist combines his talents to play with his imagination, and there was less description of the protagonist himself... Making the protagonist look like a ruthless brain robot. The summary is that there is too little characterization of the protagonist, and the plot is too smooth and lacks a sense of expectation. For example, I have been reading this book all day today, and the more I get to the end, the less I want to read it. The reason why I don't want to watch it is that the plot is too slow, apart from the fact that the plot is too smooth. To put it bluntly, there are too many scenes described, which makes me tired to watch. [Suggestion: The author should pay more attention to controlling the length of the plot. In addition, the characterization does not necessarily require a lot of space to fill in. It will be natural if you slowly add in the details.

The author, the writing is very good, but your biggest failure is to choose Demon Slayer in the first world. After all, Demon Slayer is quite a niche, and not many people know about it. If you want to write about it, you should first write about Fate and others that everyone knows about, to gain popularity, and then write about Demon Slayer.

The division of low-level demons is very obvious, as are the middle-level demons and high-level demons, but there is a difference between low-level and high-level demons. Low-level demons generally refer to the existence or possibility of becoming a god, which means that the basic highest achievement is the creation of the world or the Taoist ancestor. My constraints, to put it bluntly, are time travellers, or there are more variables. As long as it is beneficial to the world itself, then all kinds of concentration and troubles will often involve the universe and space, and there will even be existences such as world cultivators. Immortals and gods, although uncommon and hard to see, are still heard of. At most, they are a little at home and will not make trouble. The world is in a parallel development stage. High magic and so on are outrageous. Because of the world itself, the environment will actually be inclusive, which means that there will be super magic things such as holy lands. On the contrary, the normal environment is similar to that of low magic. Of course, there are also world secret realms, etc. The most afraid of the kind of logically chaotic and chaotic places. In order to develop the basic world, that is Guandu No matter, it belongs to the stage of rapid development, but there is a main timeline. This line is basically a safe zone, and the others will become parallel worlds or directly doomsday disaster areas. They will basically be absorbed by the world itself. It is more like the only true world, growing through fantasy and miracles, but this is also the main god area, isn't it? As for the unique world level, let alone the fact that the world itself is dynamic, it is possible to weaken itself for the sake of development. Chaos itself may be created in this way. In other words, the origin has always been chaotic, and only infinite possibilities can lead to infinite development. From this, we can get that the world basically has a circle, and what maintains this circle is called cause and effect. The immortality of cause and effect basically lasts forever, which is the same as records. Therefore, the world is basically safe, but it is not necessarily true for the people in it. Therefore, there will be world destroyers, but these types are scavengers and the like. They are basically classified as tool people or thugs. They may also be called extraterritorial demons, and the main gods are similar. Things like the Lord God are either in the high-level area, or in the mid-level area, or the low-level area, which is the training area and nursery. After this division, it will be a brand new pyramid structure, and it may be a particularly stable one. The world itself does not have a devouring relationship, because basically everything in the world will be there, so it will form an environment called the macrocosm. Under the control of the will of the macrocosm, the world will not devour the world. After all, it is taboo for people to eat people. For this reason, projection technology has always been disadvantageous. After all, without projection technology, even the world itself cannot be communicated well, so how can there be any benefits. So the world levels are divided into low, middle and high. As for whether it is magic or spiritual power, it is difficult to say. After all, there are divine powers, but the difficulty depends on faith and miracles. To put it bluntly, it is just a relationship between idealism and materialism. It depends on the author's own settings. The settings of some books are very messy, and they can basically be used to apply theories. The infinite box theory is speechless.

Such a good book, no one reads it...

Can't you come out without bringing someone with you? Pure Infinity is pretty good to watch. The most annoying thing is bringing people out of the world. But this is just my personal opinion. The author writes very well and the setting is novel. I give you a recommendation vote. Cui Geng

Does the protagonist know that he is in the anime world? Isn't it time travel?

After all, you have the final say on the setting of your book, so I'll just complain about it. Is this the EX rating? Can this get an EX rating? I think at least the humans in Demon Slayer must rush out of the galaxy and occupy at least one nebula to be called EX level! Just kill a few ghosts and that's it? EX level means extraneous in the moon world. You have to create impossible miracles to be worthy of EX rating. But that's it?                                                                              Gensokyo can send any fleet at will to expedition to the Lost Empire, no matter how you say it, the humans in Demon Slayer are almost the same, right? And the so-called Lord of the World is too cliche. It's better to write an EX to directly destroy that universe and turn it into a resource for growth.

I deleted the book... And updated it again. Tangled

Everything in the past is just a prologue. I hope the days will be quiet and what I will encounter when I look up is tenderness.

Gugugu is wrong. Bai Gugu condemns your behavior.

The writing is okay, but the protagonist's words and deeds are full of poison, and he is fed poison by the second protagonist from time to time. If I were 7-8 years ago, I might like this kind of innocent protagonist. Overall, the book would be better if the main character was deleted.

Alas, I'm back to miss you again

? ? ? I ordered everything. I asked why there was no movement after raising it for so long! My feelings are cut off!

Will the protagonist's power from the previous world be gone when he reaches the next world? It's turned into a card, so I can't use it at full strength? The substitute is gone?

Book Recommendation "The Book of Immortals" is the author's new book. Let's move the battlefield. This book is waiting to be read later. The author is very capable. The pace and excitement of the novel he wrote are very good. Although it is not recommended because the author and the editor still have a bad relationship, the novel is absolutely beautiful. This author's new book "The Book of Immortals" I have also read. The author's creative skills are very good. He borrowed the characteristics of the Heroic Spirit Noble Phantasm. It is very interesting and the writing is worth reading. I hope everyone will support it. The author's book is still a seedling, but I believe that as long as it maintains the standard, it will not be inferior to those boasted books such as "Apotheosis of Gods". As long as the author's novel level is recommended, it will definitely become popular🔥🔥🔥 Not to mention lies, please give the author more support, vote, and invest more. Must fire🔥fire🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Why are there so many male protagonists now that you say you make them handsome? (After all, they all like to be handsome) But you add the softness of women to the boys, which is disgusting.

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The book is finished in less than 200 chapters. Is this a break?

You tell me, the only person who will grow old hand in hand, go to the world with her. Dare to slaughter the whole world for her alone, played the music and danced for him alone. Tell me how wonderful this is. I don't understand why we have to become a group of people now? There are demons in the upper body of the sperm, and people are dominated by the lower body.

Unfortunately, there are still no new books, or the number has been changed.

Is this the rhythm of creating a new heroine, or is it a hidden heroine?