Ant Paradise

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I feel that the protagonist is a bit stupid and naive. When the bus said to pick me up at the last stop, it was basically the same as self-destruction. Deducing the murderer, knowing that there are two people who want to find the murderer, it is better to call the police to investigate them than to follow them directly and be less vigilant.

Can you make the protagonist smarter?

Emmm... It can be seen that the author has absorbed some creative ideas, such as the plot of the neighbor using mythical creatures to make food, and then being ostracized by the local restaurant. It is probably a familiar slap in the face routine... You can't have some social experience, understand that you are not very strong, don't cause trouble, you are still big The yelling was like kicking the gym, who would give them a good look Then the protagonist learned a lesson about reasoning about the murderer, and then fell into a trap on the island. Then when Mary Xiao was playing, I don't know if the author added this movie to the background of the protagonist's original world, but it should be there, right? If not, I won't say it. If so... The protagonist just lost his mind for the third time... Maybe he hasn't seen it, but it should be quite famous, right? Oh, I love reading ghost stories, so I know, but I don't know about others Of course, yes, this is a God's perspective. If it were me, I couldn't do better than the protagonist, and I would be more likely to be disappointed from the beginning, but at least I have it in my heart When you are forced to count, you know that strength is supreme, you know that you are not smart, and you know that you can't read people's words, you won't slap others in the face casually, you won't trust so-called "companions" casually, and you won't commit suicide casually (￢_￢) Don't look at me, It's useless to look at me. If I can survive in it, I'm probably just a coward. I have to be realistic. There are not many time-travelers who have been beaten to death by the natives. If there is a big man behind the scenes who wants me to experience or time-travel, then I'm really sorry... I can use practical methods. I'm a waste of effort. You're probably just blind if you like me. As for the possible reply "If you have the ability, you can write it", don't say I can't write it, I can write it. Thank you. If you have the ability, come and criticize me. Anyway, I'm not writing it to make money.

Emm... I don't know why, but after reading a few chapters, I didn't have the heart to read further. The section at the beginning about the perverted kidnapper kidnapping the protagonist feels confusing, the explanation is unclear, and there is no sense of involvement. It always feels that it is not fully written, making people unable to bear to read it. Including the paradise that is introduced at the back, including the rules and so on, which makes people not want to see it and is not attractive. In terms of characterization, I feel that the protagonist's image is very thin. After reading it, I feel that there is no special impression, including the fat man who is necessary for the protagonist, there is nothing interesting... Personally, I think the fat man is also my personal highlight. I have read too many novels, and the fat man It is a must-have for the protagonist, but I am tired of reading it... I recommend the author to read Nightmare Happy Valley, a bad book that falls apart in the middle. You can take a look at its environment and character descriptions. They are both pretty good. Maybe the genre is similar. When you read this book, you will be reminded of that one. (Already 404) There is also the Horror Playground. I most like the first trial at the beginning. The characters stand up immediately (Already 404) It is worth reference. The author can follow his own ideas and practice his writing... My personal thoughts, please don't comment! I hope the author doesn't think I talk too much, and can encourage me anyway... After all, I can't write it if I want...