Recycle Waste Soil

The author strongly recommends replacing all words such as evil smile and bitter smile. For example, evil smile should be replaced by a joking smile, and bitter smile should be replaced by a helpless smile. Adding some adjectives will make people feel more immersed in reading. After all, there is no one I will always smile evilly and bitterly, because if someone smiles like this in front of you, you will wonder if he has Shenjing Bing. Or you can smile evilly in the mirror and see the effect. If you can't smile, please look at my accompanying picture and see if you have a sense of empathy.

It's quite boring. The title of the novel in the introduction says it's about picking up garbage, but it turns out that after eight chapters of picking up garbage, you go off to practice. It also contains a lot of general descriptions, but there is no detailed description of picking up garbage. That's not what garbage men are like.

Depressed, you are going to school to become an evolver under the pretext of recycling. Don't you have a mall, and there are no awakening potions, gene potions, or strengthening potions in it? So what do you need points for?

Your setting seems a bit confusing to me. Don't talk about what is there and what is not. I don't understand it either. But from the perspective of an ordinary reader, it is really awkward. I thought about the reason. In fact, the setting is okay, but you may have ignored the readers' feelings. First of all, it is divided into fantasy, and then the readers will subconsciously have the ancient subconscious. Then, the content I wrote at the beginning after time travel also had an ancient feel. As a result, at this time, modern things such as 100-yuan banknotes and credit cards suddenly appear, which will feel very abrupt and awkward, and start to feel confusing. In your setting, the technological level and economic level have reached modern standards, but as a result, civilization is still stuck in ancient times. This is like a person whose body functions have developed to an adult level, but whose IQ is still that of a two-year-old... He is mentally retarded. If this is the case, it is considered creating a deformed world. However, after coming out of the academy, the style has become more and more modern, making the previous descriptions of ancient styles even more abrupt. Because the modern cultivation style is basically to put modern leather on ancient things, and your previous description is more like putting ancient leather on modern things. I don't know what exactly you want to create, but it is very discouraging to me. I haven't read many chapters. Maybe there are some parts that are foreshadowed by the author or something, and I just can't stand it anymore. I'll just give you my own opinion.

Is the author's understanding of 'Introduction' biased? The word "simple" in the introduction, you taste it, you taste it carefully, you taste it carefully! ... Why do newcomers today make this mistake! The second thing is this novel. The setting is not rigorous. It is difficult to survive in the wasteland world. Some mercenaries understand it and some officials understand it, but there is also such thing as a college and school. Can you believe it? People who are in dire straits are so embarrassed. Who would pass on life-saving methods and the skills and knowledge of improving abilities at the bottom of the box to others? Is that a matter of money? ! Do you have any brains? Not to mention force, even if it is a special medicine in peacetime, it is hidden with patents and monopolies, not to mention the end of the world, nothing should be kept secret. Another article is off-topic, off-topic, and the topic of garbage recycling is getting further and further away. ~ Still going to school, still competing, and taking exams, it's really intoxicating! It is very similar to the popular school gangster boy in the past 10 years, with a Western magic mage college style, everything must be related to the school. The protagonist must be labeled as a good student in a blunt way, and then compete with younger students in school to gain a sense of achievement and vanity, and then make a big splash. I know how to drink even with my eyes closed. ~Traveler! ~Two lives are human beings! What about decades of life experience, life experience, and adult vision? ! ——I was really poisoned! Short-sighted and naive writing style. Looking at the book reviews and replies, I can tell that the author has a willful and stubborn character. At first glance, the author seems to be a tough talker who speaks hard and refuses to accept his words. Either he is a student party member, or he has only worked for a few years and lacks social experience. It's a hands-on work, and the subject matter is in vain. Identification completed. Resign!

It's another popular one, cloaked in the guise of garbage collection, but it's actually a fantasy novel. The matter of garbage collection is written down and gone.

Please remove your profile. After reading your profile, I won't read what you wrote.

Haven't watched it yet. . . First of all, I will introduce the first-class effect of persuading people to quit. This is probably a common problem among novices. You might as well just say that you are a member of the Wasteland Stream like this. You should first trick the readers of the Wasteland Stream into a trap, and then you can write about it if you have any ideas.

It's very interesting to write, keep it up

I saw it accidentally, it's well written, I like it more

The sauce is bubbling, a cup of milk tea, hot popcorn, crispy snow cakes, raisins, and a small bench in the front row to read a big book ~ By the way, please visit each other ^_^

I can't stand it anymore, the content goes against the name of the novel. The priorities are reversed😐

Come on, keep updating (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Very well written! Come on update.

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Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, both old and new books are hard work 🌹

There are ideas worth looking at, and nothing halfway too exciting.