Life Reader

To put it simply, this book is a sweet urban romance novel. The main thing is to flirt with girls, tease more girls, please two girls at the same time in front of the girls, and chase after the girls to show off Overall, it is okay, the harem is not very likable, and the subsequent plot is a bit far-fetched. But it's really sweet, the male protagonist doesn't lick the dog. Personally, I feel that the emotional scenes are neither embarrassing nor far-fetched, and the inner scenes are well described in a cyclical and progressive manner. The male protagonist's design is very successful (at least I don't see any problems with it) and the female protagonist's design is a bit unnatural, but there are no flaws. The supporting roles... Are pretty good. As soon as the supporting character's exclusive chapter is over, there's nothing left to do. Overall, I still like this novel very much.

From being a fake time traveler to now, although I have lost the motivation to pursue books, I am still willing to vote for the author whenever possible. It is obvious that Mars wrote better during the period of the fake traveler. After that, the style became more and more streamlined, and seemingly superfluous character actions and plots were gone. It's actually a bit vague. Although the plot is more vivid, it lacks spirituality. Probably because I wrote too much and lost the feel. But the idea is still creative and looks very strange. Hope Mars can continue. When I was pretending to be a time traveler, I saw you often writing about moving bricks, haha. Although I don't know if it's true, but I read two books of the later novel The Eunuch and was banned twice. I'm probably really embarrassed. Maybe time is tight, maybe the burden is too heavy, no matter what, now I finally start writing again. It's a good thing. I have read the previous two hundred chapters of The Fake Traveler many times. Many novels these days, even those that were once great, no longer stand up to repeated readings. The Fake Traveler has that kind of potential, but unfortunately some things haven't been developed as they should, so the results are unsatisfactory. There is no lack of creativity in the novel, and there is no problem with the writing style. If I were to say what was holding me back - probably it was the sense of immersion. Everything about Tang Xiaosheng (I still remember this name after n years) can be said to have been pieced together by him. The women he meets, even if they are Xiao Longnu and Ren Yingying, these plots are not mechanical. So it seems absurd, but some of the emotional tone has already been set. The plots of several books nowadays have a certain feeling - the protagonist is no longer the protagonist, the author's influence is everywhere, and the plot seems mechanical and cold. If you want to fall in love with a woman, you can't say: they had dinner and watched a movie, and their relationship warmed up. This logic is correct, but the novel is about something more simple. If you write the logic of the story directly as the story itself, it will appear mechanical. The things written in novels are the simplest, and they should also have simple logic so that they can be more alert. It is more convenient for readers to read and for the author to describe. But we must also know that the greatest truth in the world often appears very simple, even superficial. Don't lose sight of one thing and get yourself into a trap. I don't know what to say... Come on, Mars. I admire you most when you write about the fake time traveler, with your endless updates day after day and your enthusiasm day after day. Although the results at that time were not ideal, even dismal. But it was also a precious period when many issues that are incomprehensible today can be understood. I only hope that your writing will get better and better and that you can return to the top!

This is an infinite nesting doll! It started with Du Shuwan's world, and then the truth was that it was the base for the digital race to make movies. Then behind the melee between the three races was a higher level of digital life manipulation. Then, through the mouth of digital life, it was said that the pure-blood human race came from the future struggle for human emperors and human kings. Finally, it was discovered that "Du Shuwan and other humans" are essentially viruses and digital life is software? That's it, I created another life player. . . Reading thousands of books and watching movies? I'm convinced. . . . . The most amazing thing is that you can still be logical and self-consistent, and it feels like your three views have collapsed. . .

After reading it, I don't know why, but it feels more and more scary the more I watch it. The writing of this cheat is a bit like playing a stand-alone game? The more you play, the scarier you become. The more you play, the more lonely you become. God-like incomprehension and loneliness.

If someone hadn't recommended your novel today, I wouldn't have known you were resurrected. Support

She was only nine years old and wandered alone in a foreign country. She became a singing queen at the age of 20. Oh my god, how dark is she?

After reading 20 chapters, the book is not bad, but I don't like the setting. The revision requirements are too low. It feels like turning an independent-thinking person into a puppet who can be modified at will. What's the point when a person with independent thoughts becomes a puppet who can be modified at will?

What was originally a good book turned out to be filled with all kinds of artificial intelligence, which made me vomit blood.

At first, I thought it was about entering other people's lives, experiencing other people's lives, and learning skills. . . . Results. . . . . .

What I like to watch here is not Goldfinger, but the plot itself. When the golden finger is too powerful, all the writing and ink focus on describing the golden finger and its functions. Just ignore the development of the plot. Or the plot is too fantasy in order to forcefully match Goldfinger's abilities.

I don't know if anyone knows about the world modulation mode. 🤭

What a great book in the early stages! It's a pity that I couldn't control the writing in the later stage. This subject matter is great.

There is a kind of loneliness and fear when you first play Minecraft Open peace, cut down wood to build a big house, build a wheat field at home, bring only some food, manuscripts and torches to mine, turn on the simple survival mode appropriately, and then immediately change to peace, watch teaching videos online, listen to the BGM that makes people lonely, and then there will be endless loneliness and caution Later, I will open the creation, open Create a big house using diamond blocks, divide it into a storage room, fill the boxes inside, put on a set of diamond equipment, open Simple Survival, then open Creation again to get some things, then switch to Survival and bear the loneliness Open Creation and build a house, switch to Survival and bear the loneliness, open Creation and dig an underground passage, lay rails, switch to Survival and bear the loneliness, open Creation...

To be honest, the more I look back, the more I realize that at first I got a biography as if it was a difficult task. Later, I actually got the value of 50 as fast as I could. Are modern people so easy to deceive? Is it so easy to have a crush on others? But 👴 is so stupid

I only read the introduction. I just want to say that there are many black mosquitoes!

The back collapsed, brothers retreat, retreat, retreat

The back part of this book is pretty good if you read it without thinking. But the back part feels like it's just watery words. Whatever the pig's feet think is what it is. It's a running account. It feels like the author before and after is not the same person.

Hahahahahaha Fan count: 404

Is it the setting of Heaven's Gate? It would be a pity that the protagonist doesn't draw comics 😁

The protagonist's personality is not likeable. I think he can have some pursuits, such as being greedy for money, lustful, gambling, loving cars, etc. Only with a golden finger can he move towards pursuit. Why does a second-grade elementary school classmate care so much? The more I look at it, the more unhappy I am.