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The main character's IQ is online throughout the whole process, but he's just as retarded in the second part. The outline is the same as if it were written by a different person.

During this period of review of the plot, I once thought that the author finally couldn't write it anymore and had to post an outline to finish it 😅 What can I say about this kind of plot treatment... The level of detail is not enough to make readers sympathize with the two heroines (?), It just feels like "in short, they paid a lot of money and worked hard, are you satisfied?" In the end, it turns out that it was just a setting for the sake of setting. The four Deathly Hallows (are not), the earrings are fake, and the world avatar can actually absorb life... It just reveals that time can be traced back anyway, so it's just a mess. As a result, time went back and I felt lonely reading these chapters. In fact, these chapters were deleted, and then when the male protagonist committed suicide, the female protagonist directly stopped him and died herself. Isn't it better to show the situation of going back in time by leaving the middle section blank and letting the female protagonist leave a few "last words"? In other words, one of these two people has lived for thousands of years, and the other has gone back tens of thousands of times. They must have experienced a long life. Why are they so reckless...

Although the writing style is a bit lacking, the plot is quite new and worth reading. I support you.

Bad jokes are almost everywhere. Isn't it good to play them in moderation? It's like cooking. If it's too light, add salt, if it's salty, add water, and finally it turns into soup? The so-called stereotyped essays and anti- stereotyped essays are not just routines and counter-routines. Others' stereotyped essays can get high scores and are recognized by most people. Why can't your anti- stereotyped essays work? The worldview and characters laid out in the previous hundreds of chapters are all illusory at the end. ? ? What's the difference between this and a domestic horror film that tells the audience at the end that everything in front of it is someone's dream? The classification of light novels does not mean that you cannot kill people, but the role of tragedy in the works is to make readers more impressed by someone or something. Obviously I am not tearful, but now when I think about the plot here, it feels strange. Why? Because they are all fake, but the others are also fake? For example, in the novel next door, the AI goes through hundreds of thousands of years just to return to its maker. As a god, it can use its body to seal the abyss for the mortals it protects. In "The XX Daily Life of the Seventh Team", the strongest man builds a trap and hides a nuclear bomb at the door to protect his people. In "Jiang Ye", the male protagonist almost dies for the female protagonist. Against the world, a supporting character in the early stage of "Fire of Sorrow" killed his whole family because of self-suggestion just for the truth. In "The First Sequence", Chen Wudi became the biggest beam of light in the world as a recognized fool. In "The Proud Nine Heavens", the supporting character lost his life because he loved the wrong person or believed in the wrong person. Wen Huahong washed away the elephant in "The Snow". The remaining games that are similar to Restart World Line Salvation include "Honkai Impact 3", "Double Pamish", "Puella Magi Madoka Magica", etc. What's here? The death of Xiong Xingxing or the female protagonist restarting the timeline more than 30,000 times? (But is this fake? It's like watching a video, and the dead character suddenly stood up and made an advertisement?) Personal rating, the first 400 chapters, about 70 or 80 points on a ten-point scale, plus Leviathan at the end, 3.5, Not even reaching the passing mark

I feel that the protagonist has no emotions, and the author may want to create a person with a more rational heart and stable emotions. Your volume-by-volume description is great, but you rarely mention other supporting characters in each volume, especially the female supporting characters. It feels like the protagonist doesn't care enough about the people around him and his emotions are relatively weak. So I personally hope that the author will put more effort into emotional communication. This is purely a personal suggestion, but the author's writing is still very good.

Great support, author. I really like what you wrote. I will try my best to support you.

No good books recommended, lots of bad books

It's not easy to write novels... Good books are buried in piles and rarely see the light of day 😅

The following is a personal subjective evaluation: 1. The writing style is not satisfactory; 2. There are too many references to the settings and characters of a certain mobile game, but the novel itself is not a fan, so it feels a little inconsistent. A slightly smart and capable student transforms into a murderous gangster godfather. After he returns to campus life, whether he likes it or not, his personal behavior pattern and personality will not easily become the same as when he was a student. This gang experience will inevitably cause him to grow and change from the inside out, and the people around him who follow him will feel this strange change to a greater or lesser extent when they see him again. But I don't know whether the author didn't think about it or was simply too lazy to write such details. It gave me the feeling that the protagonist has experienced such a big event but has not grown or changed at all. To put it simply, I thought it was the advancement of growth in 1 2 3 4, but I didn't expect that it was 1 2 1 1 with no change at all. The general feeling now is that you can chase but you may be persuaded to quit at any time. Come on, author.

If you want to write about people without emotions. Don't have too many mood swings. The way you speak should also be concise and straightforward. The main character speaks too animatedly for an emotionless person. Then reflect the protagonist's high IQ.

Stitch Monster➕Mindless fun, very embarrassing joke = this book

I admire the author's use of love to generate electricity, but it is true that the beginning of the article is to persuade people to abandon things. Basically, no one deliberately abandons things like notebooks. The protagonist just picks them up. It is also a character to be greedy for petty gains. He also deceives himself and others by using the reason that others don't want them. It is very uncomfortable to read, and the plot is not played well, which is very embarrassing. The protagonist goes to the police station to verify No problem, but is it funny? Even if it is funny, most people will not laugh like this. The author must be clear that the expression method of funny comedy movies obviously does not match your novel. This joke is very embarrassing, and the setting is that the protagonist's emotions are weak, emmm, it is not reflected at all, and the psychological description is one set at a time.

Author, you are writing about a domestic background, so don't use too many words from light novels. For example, the main character likes to bow, not to mention it. It depends on personal habits, but the words "boy" and "yo" that always appear are very dramatic.

I don't like the death of important characters. Life is already very tiring. Reading is actually a kind of escape from life. I don't want to read such heavy plots. Now I prefer to read some light and funny books, so I say goodbye. I hope the author can write better and better in the future.

The author is a typical aloof and chuunibyou type patient, there is no way to save him, it is a pity that this subject matter is gone. It's already 0202, can we stop being such a middle school student? When you turn 30 and look back at yourself now, will you want to slap yourself to death?

Have you ever thought about how valuable a two thousand year old woman is? . . .

The four wealth codes of Qidian are combined into one People don't want to click on it at all 🤫

Huang Tao: "The witch tastes really good!"

Maybe it's the way Sister Bei feels.

Mingui, you know, I would like to call this author Xiao Mingui.

Let's add a label of "depressive" to this one. The bento distribution is really diligent, and the plot of two chapters is used to make people's mentality. The protagonist is almost always drifting with the crowd, and only starts to want to control his own destiny when everyone is almost dead. I don't care if the protagonist is weak, but can I do something because I want to do it, rather than being arranged? There is no bloodiness. It perfectly avoids all turning points of fate and rushes directly to the most disgusting route. I regret reading this book.

I finally understand why it is not on the shelves. This is self-awareness.

The writing is so bad, you abandon the book at the beginning, and the male protagonist leaks his notebook and lets others kill you? Look completely stupid? How stupid can you be to do such a thing? Why do you think others won't kill you if you hand over your notebook? It makes sense to kill someone and silence them, right? And the hero, who can't cure any disease, is still afraid of death? I have never seen such a coward before.

Interested friends can take a look.

Do you think the world is controlled by a small group of people from behind? 1 Completely positive 2 Positive 3 Neutral (although it does not comply with the law of the excluded middle) 4 Negative 5 Completely negative This author is a bit interesting (

It seems that the author has never been poor~ If he is really short of money, who would think so much as long as he does not break the law~ And the country is so idle... This writing is really embarrassing

I can accept anything except the Riddler, the Riddler crawls

A good book that brightens up the boring summer vacation.

Let me tell you something, Sharon is portrayed as quite stupid.

If there is a witch, there must be a witch♂ When I finish reading "Ruyi's Royal Love in the Palace", "The Legend of Zhen Huan", "Yanxi Palace", "The Temptation of Going Home", "Because Love Has Miracles", "Because Love is So Beautiful", "Because Love Has Sunny Days", "Because Love Has Happiness", "Palace Locks Heart Jade", "Palace Locks Bead Curtain", "Beauty's Scheming", "My First Half of Life", no woman can be my opponent.