Andris

Written by a classmate, everyone gave me face

Support, support 👍👍👍

Not bad, worth paying attention to 🤭

Very good, support👍

New writers, please support me

Well written, I support it.

The scenes are described in detail, the characters are vividly drawn and have potential.

Already collected, come on duck, please accept each other

This fairy is here for a visit 🤭

Very good~~Update soon! !

I hope the author will publish more works in the future

Several main lines are intertwined to promote the progress of the plot.

Looking forward to the new chapter🤭🤭🤭

The author's various characters are set up well, and they are awesome. I also introduce myself. I wish you a happy future╰

Yo yo, here is the notebook.

The novel is very wonderfully written and the plot of the article is well handled. Come on!

I have tried reading 5 chapters, so let me share my initial feelings. 1. Overall style. This book has a clean and eccentric temperament. What is clean is the language. It is not sloppy, has its own style, and is comfortable to read. The sense of weirdness comes not only from the setting of the story background, but also from the mixing of various elements. The setting is too novel, it is not the kind of bad system rebirth and time-travel upgrade in the starting point. This alone gives me a great impression. The author has put a lot of thought into building a brand new world, including the fantasy empire where the story is set, the settings of the characters' races, the characters' skills, etc., Which can all bring a sense of freshness to people. But I feel like the author lacked some foreshadowing and explanation when presenting these things. For example, if it is a system article, and a system comes out to assign tasks to you, the author does not need to tell the readers what the system is, because there are too many such articles, and explaining too much will become boring. However, as the author's brand new setting, for example, the undead tribe is mentioned in the article, I personally think it is necessary to explain how many races there are in the story? What are the characteristics of these races? Rather than directly mentioning it in one sentence, it seems that readers know everything about this thing. Because the author lacked explanation, when I read the first and second chapters, I was actually very confused. Just like a string of pearls, it is beautiful, but I don't know what is so beautiful about it. 2. What I like more is the description of fighting and dialogue scenes, which are detailed and natural, with a strong visual sense. I feel that among fast-food-style online articles, there are not many authors who can construct sentences with such care. The details of action, psychology, and scenes are well worded, and they can smoothly promote the development of the plot. 3. There are many foreshadowings and you can dig deeper. The beginning of the story is not about a rookie entering the trap, but about a relatively mature young man with a certain fighting ability and an unpredictable past getting back on the road again. It feels a bit like a martial arts master coming out of the mountain again, which is quite exciting. I don't know whether the author will bring out Andy's past bit by bit in the previous story, or show it in the form of a retrospective chapter. Anyway, judging from the previous chapters, this character's baggage has been shaken up. 4. Finally, I would like to make a suggestion. The characters in the author's works are very distinctive and three-dimensional, but I would like to remind the author to pay attention to the rationality of the characters' motivations and behaviors as the plot progresses. For example, Subaru's entire village was destroyed, and then he happily accepted the banquet from his enemies? Remember how the characters of Dragon Mother and Bran collapsed in the eighth season of Game of Thrones. Overall it is pretty good. This is a slow-burning book. After you read it and accept the author's setting, you will find many surprises.