You Can Drop Equipment by Reading a Book

1The subject matter is good, I like it very much. 2. Running account style writing. 3 The dissuasion index is not high, but I can fall asleep watching it, mainly because such a good plot is written in a running account... I hope the author will work hard on the next book.

I have a few comments after reading it earlier 1. The whole plot line is too confusing. Readers always feel that the protagonist's life pace is completely unplanned. This also leaves readers with no place to start the book. 2. Everything is covered hastily, without describing the characters in detail. After watching three pictures, I went from playing live broadcasts to dancing to receive books. In addition to the fast pace, the portrayal of images in the middle is too thin, making it impossible for readers to keep up. I still need to read more books and work hard to ponder this point slowly.

I think it's pretty good, but it's too slow.

Only for scolding the author. 😢

I originally abandoned the book. This morning I thought about the heroine's dual personality, which I found very interesting. Then I thought about which book it was from, and then I came back to read it. Wenwen feels pretty good

To be honest, it is actually foreseeable that you will rush to the street. The writing skills are there, and there are many profitable novels that may not be as good as yours. But why did you pounce again? Plot plot issues. Books are always written for readers, and you have to look at your own book from a reader's perspective. You cannot write how you feel comfortable from the author's perspective.

For Xia Ge's songs, you can search for Xia Ge's music on NetEase Cloud and listen to it.

Come on, author! I can feel your progress! If you persist, I believe you will succeed.

There may be a section in the front that is a little bit toxic, and there is also a section in the middle where the author is a novice and his performance is unstable. I will write better and better in the future. Everyone is welcome to complain about the author's new book and taste the male god

Seeing the Chaos Body falling from the sky? Imperial soldiers?

Four tickets, I want to mix it up and get better 🤫

I was looking forward to it, but after seeing that I joined the entertainment industry, I had no idea. I just don't like that industry. This is my own reason and has nothing to do with the author.

I don't understand why I have to write about a scumbag

The writing is so fucking messy, it deserves not to be popular. A hammer here and there a stick. This chapter is still being broadcast live, and in the next chapter I will jump to participate in the hip-hop competition and the code competition. In the next chapter, he jumped into the box again, and then went to hunt for antiques and slapped him in the face. He wrote about everything. I simply wrote whatever came to my mind, with no main line at all.

I don't know what other people think, but I like it. Come on! 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

Looking at the introduction, is such a great skill used in the entertainment industry and playing games? Okay, just like Lu Bi Wang, you can have whatever you want. What is money? His status is equal to that of the boss, and his name will forever be remembered in the annals of human history.

The author should be young, and the content of the article is full of energy

As expected, it's the protagonist's physique. Wherever he goes, there are villains who can't stand it. From the beginning, he was always criticized by netizens, and then he turned around and pretended to be slapped in the face. It was very embarrassing to watch. . The subject matter is good, but the author doesn't have the control to do it here and there. . . It doesn't matter if you write books and live broadcasts, you still participate in some dance competitions, and what's even more disgusting is to participate in a boy group variety show. Wouldn't it be nice to just get the book on fire, complete the live broadcast, and then invest in film and television? If you have to do things here and there, you will be criticized and hacked. . . . It was extremely embarrassing to watch. . .

Typical pretense of pretending to be Sabi's stick-making article

Speaking of live broadcasts, I watched them on Huya, and they were ranked high on Xingxiu. Some of the male anchors I didn't even know what they were doing. They were neither singing nor telling jokes or cross talk. Inexplicably, there were a lot of people following them, and they were very popular. Anyway, I watched it for a long time and I didn't know what they were doing.

Is this a new author? Do you find it hard to think about practicing the Sunflower Manual?

Fully booked, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on, author😄

Support for the masterpiece is coming, come on.