An Adventure Starting in the World of Harry Potter

I'm not saying that, I've just read the part about the secret room, but after reading this, I didn't even understand what the author wanted to write.

The beginning is a bit bad, but the rest of the writing is quite good.

Let me support you from the world of Neville Longbottom. The beginning is indeed relatively confusing. If I hadn't read a little bit about The Chronicles of Narnia, I would definitely be confused. This kind of infinite subject requires more background introduction and plot coherence. There is still a lot of room for improvement. Come on^0＾~

I only read Chapter 1 to Chapter 27 and it was really rubbish. The subject matter is great, but the writing is rubbish. The plot description is rubbish. Is the time traveler really 40 years old?

The heroine shouldn't be Hermione, right?

It feels very good^ω^ Well, the only drawback is that the protagonist often reads about those magic spells, but does not practice them. He comes and goes, and only one or two spells are left to be used, which makes it very embarrassing-_-||

This is an invincible novel that I like very much

This book is sure to hit the street. There are too many problems at the beginning, including rhythm, format, characterization, and background introduction. Even if things get better later on, how many people do you think can stand up to it?

I don't want to talk about the protagonist's character either.

If I hadn't watched The Chronicles of Narnia, I really wouldn't have guessed how big the changes were.

Well written! It's just that the ending was too hasty! ! ! Can you make the postscript longer? ? ? ?

Big cheers for the author. I wrote hundreds and thousands of chapters and it felt pretty good.

It's over, spread the flowers, look forward to the new book, cheers (ง •̀_•́)ง

The complete book is complete. It is really my favorite work of Wudiliu. Thank you to the author. It's a bit like a certain review of European romantic chivalry literature. Once the great work has been accomplished, the hero is himself. As the author, he naturally has a light and peaceful life.

Relative! So what are you writing about?

It's best to introduce the film and television drama involved. If we haven't seen it, we can go and find out about it! It doesn't matter if it's unpopular

Very happy! Haha, dragons have reverse scales, and you will die if you touch them!

As soon as I read Chapter 21, I wanted to know whether the protagonist traveled to those foreign lands because of the system or because of the Book of Hartzmawend.

The idea is good but there are too few. It would be more interesting if we could not be in the same era as the protagonist.

Physiological hygiene class, okay...

I've finished reading it. It's pretty good. I like this kind of novel, but it doesn't seem to be on the shelves at all? My grades are probably not very good. I just finished the book hastily.

No wonder he rushes to the street, the protagonist has no IQ

The writing is very good. Does the author have any new books?

The protagonist is a bit reckless, and the emotional interaction with Hermione is not sweet enough, which is considered imperfect.

The author must be a high school student

I want to know, after finding so many magic spells, did the protagonist learn them? Just write it down and be done with it.

The main plot in the early and mid-term was mediocre, but by the time the finale turned out to be awesome, I watched two or three sections of the time-traveling branch plot, and the rest was a qualified practice script for all jumps.

It's still very interesting, I read it in two days. The disadvantage is that it is a bit messy and unclear. It may be much better if this aspect is strengthened.

When the protagonist can compete with Voldemort or even win, he is worried about how to make money.