God-Level Golden Finger Lottery System of the Apocalypse

Tsk tsk tsk, this is a dialogue novel, right

Is this obviously a lottery for all things? Is it Goldfinger? Is Goldfinger so bad?

Uh... The writing style needs to be improved. It is written like a dialogue novel ~ more descriptions of scenes, character actions, emotions, etc. Don't go from one line of dialogue to another, add some description between the dialogues. Come on, you can go and see how other authors write. Just use this book as a practice. First develop your own writing habits, then go to those comment areas to see which points are not accepted by book friends, and then open a new vest and write another book. If you really want to make money from online writing, I suggest you write about popular themes. I like apocalyptic stories, but very few people read apocalyptic stories.