It's a Bit Early to Travel Through Time

After reading a few chapters, I will tell you my opinion. This novel mainly tells the story of the protagonist traveling through the Tang Dynasty (prehistoric era) and then obtaining his golden finger. In other words, you can travel to "Zhetian" and back, which is the kind of routine that can travel between two worlds. However, this novel is not Zhutianwen. The author said that there is only the world of "Zhetian". Author's words: This book borrows the world view of Jianghu, there will be plot characters, but there will be no plot. In addition, this book is not an infinite flow, only the original world and Zhetian. What I want to say after that is that the author's writing is a bit... How should I put it... Just a bit confusing... For example: This paragraph: "Master, what have you gained from this year of wandering around the world?" Li Ze fell into silence after hearing this. What was the situation during the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms period? It can be said to be the darkest and chaotic period in Chinese history. Although it is not yet the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms, it is not much different. If you just look at it this way, there is no problem. After all, you are a time traveler. However, the author's setting is that the protagonist is 5 years old and traveled through time, so it is a bit strange. "How does a five-year-old child know that this era is Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms?" Then many people began to say that this was a poisonous point. This is definitely what most people think (should). I thought so too at first. After reading it again, I understood what the author wanted to express. The author should just want to introduce the era and background so that readers can have a better comparison. But the way the author wrote it made many people think that this was what the protagonist said, so this discouraged some people. The author knows what he is expressing when he writes. After all, the settings are all set by the author, but the readers do not know, so it creates a dissuasive effect. And there are many similar scenes later, and it's really easy to get discouraged if you don't understand them clearly. And the first sentence of the first chapter... The author starts with Li Bai's poem... "Master Cen, Dan Qiusheng, is about to drink wine, and never stop drinking..." I read this chapter and found that the reader's first impression was that the protagonist was copying a poem (that's what he thought, right?, I'm not sure... Anyway, that's what I thought.), And those who hate this routine and have no patience will immediately jump to it, and I don't understand why this poem is used at the beginning... Maybe this can make the character more popular? But this is probably the first time for the author to write a novel, so I understand 😁😁 Generally speaking, this novel is still worth reading. Of course, it mainly depends on your own preference. Just like me, I am the kind of reader who doesn't particularly care about details, and after all, I like funny and humorous novels... The main reason for typing so many words is because I am bored and have nothing to do, hehe. One more thing, come on, author!

Nowadays, everyone is really writing books. Time travel at the age of 5? You tell me how much self-awareness a 5-year-old child has. . 5 Years old is the age of a naughty child, and I can still understand foreign languages ​​when I travel back in time, 🙂🙂, and I was persuaded to quit after reading 3 chapters 🙂🙂🙂

Gone, gone, poisonous, 5 years old, knows how to love freely

When I saw that I was 5 years old before the time travel, I knew the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms, and I was poisoned and dodged.

The writing is so bad and I signed it internally. My editing skills are getting worse and worse.

Putting aside everything else, you can try throwing a five-year-old child into an unfamiliar place. What kind of reaction will Kangkang have? Fart! I feel like you gave this silver to yourself! Even adults in a strange place may not be as good as you as the protagonist, lol~ I really don't understand the author's brain circuit! Are you testing your book friends' resistance to toxicity?

When I traveled through time at the age of five in Chapter 1, I knew that the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms were very dark. This chapter persuades those who quit to report here 😁😁

​​ Some sentences are not what the protagonist wants to say, but are background introductions. Although the five-year-old time travel is a bit inappropriate, it is still passable (it is a bit inappropriate to be open-minded). Just treat the protagonist as having some modern knowledge. Generally speaking, the sentences are smooth, the paragraphs are reasonable, and it is not difficult to read. It is not as difficult to read as the people below said. This is what I thought after reading the first chapter. You'll have to watch the rest to find out. It would be really embarrassing if later it was said that the protagonist is familiar with the plot of "Shading the Sky". After all, I don't think a five-year-old child would have the patience to read a novel with so many words (there are also issues with memory, mobile phone ownership, time, etc.). So much nonsense, I just want to say that this book can be read by those who are short of books. So many people below are complaining about how bad this book is, but after reading it, I found that it is not actually bad. Did the author invite a large group of trolls to blackmail him? 🤭

I'm afraid this silver cute guy bought it, right?

The author himself rewards himself. If his writing is so bad, you are not afraid that you will not be able to recoup the cost?

Eighteen recommendation votes have been cast, come on.

This prehistoric one is really weak... Zhitian is bragging, awesome, awesome. Goodbye, never see you again

I've read so many books and never commented on them. I really can't stand it anymore, so I deleted it.

What trash novels nowadays have silver cuteness in them? It seems to be making me laugh!

Why is this protagonist still acting like a child at 16 years old

The main character is just like your kid! I feel like I haven't grown up yet

The subject matter is good, but I feel like I can't keep reading. It's too boring.

I don't know what to write, so I say goodbye.