Phoenix Thousand Generations of Love

The writing is delicate and the language is relaxed. Come on💪💪💪

The Japanese two-dimensional fairy tale of falling in love and fighting monsters has a bit of Chinese fairy tale passion (feeling). The overall feeling is good. I won't go into some details. I will understand it after writing for a long time. The plot of the story needs to be more rigorous, it is too scattered and the time point is too fast (it is harmless). After the overall development of the story, it is recommended that the author go back and read what he wrote before. (It will be easy to write) The writing is good. I feel that the author has watched a lot of Japanese two-dimensional anime and worked hard on it. This is the review first, waiting for the follow-up plot!

Writing a book is not easy. Every author will put a lot of effort into writing a book. He does not want his work to be buried. Even if the results are not ideal, he must write it with the original intention. Good luck 🤝🌹

Collected it, the writing is beautiful! Keep updating, come on! Welcome to visit us again!

Comment: My sister keeps calling the police for no reason, and my brother smashes his phone for no reason. I know you want to write something funny. But I really don't think it's that funny. Instead, it looked awkward. Can the police call be made casually? Although you said that my sister didn't actually call the police, you still didn't laugh when you looked at it. I won't comment much else, the novel is still good.

At first, I really thought it was the training of Xian Xia. Later, because it was my daily life, I finally returned to Xian Xia. Emmm, it felt weird, but overall it was well written and the details were well handled. It made people not feel tired when watching it. Come on. 😁

The writing is really good. I see a lot of praise for it, so I won't go into detail on it. I prefer the daily joy at the end, but those who don't like this type at the beginning will be a little discouraged. It is recommended to proceed step by step and not write too much beforehand. Have you seen "I Have a House of Horrors"? The life story of Pig's Foot is always hanging, which makes readers want to continue reading. I believe many people can guess it if you give a few hints. Only by digging out the real answer bit by bit can you feel the pleasure. But I'm also a newbie at heart, so I can't comment too much on others. I can only say, keep up the good work! ₍ᐢ •⌄• ᐢ₎

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The writing is relatively good The plot is also very smooth And it's not cliche either It's pretty~ Come on, author!

It's a good article, the writing style is good, and the plot is well described. Come on!

I originally thought it was a gritty battle story, but halfway through I felt like I was being fed dog food. . . . . .

The writing is very delicate. I like the style. Come on Oli.

Sister Shu Juan, come on (づ ●─● )づ

The description is delicate and details can be seen everywhere. It has been collected and kept going.

The writing is good, the description is delicate, pay attention to the paragraphing

Come on 🌹🌹🌹Look after you

The writing is not bad, the first few chapters are very smooth, and the description is very careful. It seems to be a very beautiful story, I look forward to it ~ I also suggest that you can make the introduction more attractive, please update it

The writing is good. The introduction and title of the book are also good. It's quite interesting, humorous and light-hearted. Great support.

Thanks, You will have a wonderful day.

Come on! Awesome! Keep at it and finish it!