Looking Back on the Past of a Unique Romance

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Received, well written, thank you very much!

The writing is okay, the writing style is barely average, the plot development is a little fascinating and intermittent, and the layout needs to be broken down. The emotional description is not enough, but it is very weak. The male protagonist has an okay presence, but the female protagonist has a weak presence. The dialogue between the characters is pale and weak, the characters have no personality, and the plot of the story develops a bit fast, and many of them are one-dimensional. After writing it, the main line of the story is unclear and the sense of substitution is low. Moreover, some chapters seem to be written by the author who stayed up late to catch up on the update and forced himself to write in time. The chapter names must be concise and clear. The writing style needs to be improved. It needs more practice. It is also necessary to read more novels of the same type and style to learn from them and reflect on why other novels are so wonderful. It is recommended that this novel be used to test the waters and practice writing.