Strange Anecdotes About the Uncontrolled Gravity Stone

Is there anyone alive? This is the work complaining room. If you have any opinions about this book, you are welcome to complain downstairs! ! ! !

After reading a few chapters, I feel like I have a good idea of ​​the story, but there seems to be some shortcomings in the expression of the text. I hope I can continue to work hard.

The writing is not good, it would be better if I could write more before posting.

Change the introduction of the book. A good introduction can attract many people.

The author's imagination is okay, but the writing style cannot hold up, and compared with novels of the same type, it is not exciting enough. I suggest the author read more novels of the same type to learn and learn from it.

Hey friends, leave a claw, fire tongs Liu Ming

The writing is good. It has been collected. Welcome to visit again!

The story is very interesting, but I feel that the description is a bit poor and cannot support such a good idea, which is a pity.

Come on, give each other a try and encourage each other...

Ask for mutual acceptance. . . Why. . Let's all work together

Already collected, keep it up, come back when you have time

The writing is very vivid, and the science fiction theme is very attractive. Just a little short. Let's work hard together

Come to visit, come on! !

Come on, come on, come on＾0＾~

The opening chapter is very messy No, it should be said that it is all messy The commando team at the beginning is very inexplicable. They are neither important plot nor characters, but they have a lot of ink, especially the weapons. In my eyes, these people are just A, B, C and D, but you gave them so many shots? Moreover, a lot of words and space are wasted on introducing world changes and concepts, which actually have nothing to do with the protagonist, or have an indirect relationship. So this is also a waste, a waste of the audience's eyes and hearts, they don't care about these things that are irrelevant to the plot. And your protagonist creation is a failure! At the beginning, the descriptions of the protagonist by people around him were very negative, and the protagonist's own behavior was also very negative. After the war, he was also in that negative state. This is not good, because at this time your protagonist has lost his three-dimensionality, and you have not given any special description of the protagonist! This makes the character very one-sided! Well, I thought about it. Your protagonist, like the previous commandos, didn't strike me as profound enough. If he wasn't profound enough, he became "A, B, C, and D"