The King of Elements in the Comic World

I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters. It's really watery, it's really ****, I really don't understand it, it's such a mess. I judge it to be a useless book! ! ! ! ! ! ! 😅😅😅😅😅

Author, it's really annoying that you're plotting too much.

I don't understand, the number of words is okay if you're happy with yourself, but you even named Anthony Stark! Although Anthony and Stark had collaborated on the Ark reactor in the early days. But Howard discovered that Anthony's mind was impure and was expelled from the United States.

If you have any concerns, please feel free to comment. But please think about it before giving your opinion. Am I kidding myself by calling Tony Anthony? Find out for yourself the relationship between the titles Tony and Anthony.

It feels like the protagonist's ability has been marginalized. Doesn't anyone with such an ability have the capital to compete with SHIELD? They are still struggling. An S-level ability is suddenly used as an E-level. I really wonder what is the use of keeping such a good ability without developing it? ?

The elements you wrote about are not the same as the ones I think of. You can only control them when there is water, and you have to change the water element. The king of elements in my imagination is that the elements of heaven and earth change color in a single thought. Even if it is not so powerful in the early stage, you can't control the elements by using a lighter to start a fire. I thought it was to control the elements in the air 🤫🤫🤫. Apart from being a little watery, the writing is still very good, but it is far different from the King of Elements that I imagined. Come on, author.

Force yourself to be happy, just write normally.

The author loves to complain so much. There are a lot of complaints in one chapter, which really affects reading.

Coulson, I couldn't remember who it was after thinking for a long time. Tsk tsk, it's okay if I made one or two mistakes. It was always Coulson, and he persuaded many people to leave.

This is not the King of Elements, the King of Talking Words And I feel that the author's writing is a bit perfunctory, mixed with jokes to make people laugh, details of inner activities Basically not described, and there is no technique to tell it in a straightforward manner, it doesn't feel like a novel but like a sketch or cross talk

To be honest, it's a bit self-indulgent. I don't know why you let the protagonist follow Aegis. He obviously has no ability to protect himself after leaving the river element.

Seriously, shouldn't the King of Elements build a world of fire, a dimension of water, etc. The protagonist is too low-key and a bit stupid, exposed superpowers, why is Aegis the first person to come to you? Can't it be the military, can't it be a local boss, can't it even be the passing demon Mephitus?

Laughing to death, 230,000 words. The comment section is full of people criticizing the author.

Hello, King of Pigeons, Goodbye, King of Pigeons

The earth element life... Is the construction engineering team? ? Mu... Is the agricultural and forestry engineering team? ? Jin... Is the mechanical engineering team? ? ? Water... Is the water source purification engineering team? ? Bing... Is the weather adjustment engineering team? ? ? Lei... Is the electrical engineering team? ? ? ? Feng... Is the environmental engineering team? ? ? ? Fire... Is the culinary engineering team? ? ? ? ? Light... Is it? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Is there that kind of Marvel fan who broke down on the first day of time travel?

Let me reiterate, I just used the concept of mutants, there is no related plot! No!

There is no need for the author to make the protagonist a Chinese. Although there are Chinese characters in the comics, it is a smooth feeling when reading the novel. How would you feel if you were reading a novel about cultivating immortals and saw that the protagonist is named Tony Stark, and he kills an evil dragon with a flying sword, takes out the inner elixir, and prepares to go back and practice a set of magic weapons? ! !

The official forces the fan to death, even if it's just a sideshow, your fire element is dead

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This book shouldn't be called King of Elements, at most it's called Elemental Mage

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Pig's feet can become creators, you can refer to Pokemon's alpaca. Be the mastermind behind the scenes and create Pokemon-like creatures.

I saw "Exploring Qingshui River" written by the author in other book review sections. Is it included in this book?

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The author probably didn't write this book just for fun. ∠( ᐛ ∠)_

Is this a eunuch? Updates are too slow! Can I use up the value I recharged for you?

I'm the same author who wrote the book, I want to ask, is this book a buyout? My grades are not good, I also want to buy it out 😰 If you see this, please reply, thank you