Xiaoyao Xiaojunhou

Jiangjiang is here, the front row is bench, melon seeds, soda, Xiaoxiaosu, and the back row is sports drink, spicy strips, and crispy cookies. Come and watch the big masterpiece. By the way, please visit each other, ^_^

I always feel that the connection between one chapter and another is weird and not explained clearly. For example, Zhu Xiuyuan was asked to take a bath after being captured by Yan Dashan, but he did not mention where people would take him to wash or bring him a basin. ( •̩＿•̩ )

The Jingde in the chapter "There is Jingdezhen" in the novel should be Changnan. In fact, the name "Jingde" was given by Emperor Song Zhenzong of the Song Dynasty to a town called Changnan after his reign. If the dynasty in the novel is Nanchen, then the name of the town should not be Jingde. I hope the author changes it 🙂

Support the author, come on, author. We also know that this book has not been published, but we hope that the author can finish it and not be a eunuch. I think this book is a good book. I originally read the pirated version. When I saw what the author said, I downloaded the reading software of Qidian. I came here specifically to support

First of all, as for my views on this book and its pros and cons, I actually have nothing to say about the outline of this book and the subsequent plot! The author may have failed in shaping the characters and the heroine. First of all, the heroine Dong Shuzhen gave people a too childish feeling in the early stage. Maybe the author wanted to highlight the development of loli, but the heroine was given too much plot in the early stage without substantial progress. Nothing that happened happened, but the endless fun and tolerance gave people the impression that the heroine was too childish (although Dong Shuzhen in the book is a teenager). Secondly, there were too many plots and they were all insignificant plot descriptions, which gave people the feeling that the number of words was too low. The author could learn from the previous chapters. The novel "Prince Bi is Fierce" portrays the female protagonist, and what is worth watching is that the male protagonist enters the enemy camp and pushes the plot beyond a small climax. It is indeed a bit incredible that there are only such a small climax in so many chapters. For the character You Guifei, I think it is Yes, some things that shouldn't happen can happen to stimulate and enliven the plot of the book. The role of Dong Cheng, the father-in-law, is well created. It not only expresses the vivid expression of the character as it should be, but also expresses the severity and care for his daughter. The role of Dong Shuyu is also quite good, that is. The overall progress of the character relationship is too slow. During the transitional period, it has been written about how Dong Shuzhen is doing. It feels perfunctory to other female characters. Take being trapped on a desert island as an example, it highlights the feeling of Dong Shuzhen being unreasonable. In fact, if trapped in a desert island. If the plot of the island feels difficult to transition, the author can also open up some situations in the capital. For example, it would be better to describe more about some things that happened when the male protagonist was not in the capital, rather than a dozen plots describing the deserted island. Dong Shuzhen can't stand the bandits and hugs the male protagonist. The plot of isolating Kou Wanwan will give people a feeling of being overly doted on and unreasonable. Of course, there are also touching plots on desert islands, such as Kou Wanwan's bloodletting to save the male protagonist, and the description of Kou Wanwan's weakness after saving the male protagonist, which gives people a very touching feeling. Secondly, in After returning to the capital, I think the progress of the plot of the heroines other than Dong Shuzhen can be accelerated. After all, if it is not a harem, there will be a lot of heroines. If it is a harem, only one Kou Wanwan has made substantial progress in so many chapters, so it looks like four different characters. Of course, these are my personal opinions and do not represent the opinions of all readers. After all, there are a hundred Hamlets in the eyes of a hundred readers. The author has worked hard! Come on! ! ! 💪💪💪 Finally, I found some avatars of the heroine for everyone as gifts. In order, they are Concubine You, Dong Shuyu, Kou Wanwan, and Dong Shuzhen.

I don't know if the writing is good or not, but I love reading it and I think it's pretty good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, and the author is quite interesting. In the end, the author didn't want the tragic ending! The happy ending is pretty good, at least none of the heroines die. 😁

More than eighty chapters were written about a flood?

What's the situation? There's no heroine? All female characters!

Come on, the more content the better, it will definitely become popular. 😍😍😍

The writing is very good. Come on, the author, it will definitely become popular.

I don't understand why Yanpo and the others regard the protagonist as their benefactor. Please explain 🤔

It's pretty good, but there are not many people watching it.

Dong Shuzhen

The writing is very smooth and comfortable to read. I hope the author can stick to it.

Came here for Dong Shuyu, haha😃

🙂🙂🙂 Super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super nice novel

For nothing else, just because there is no system and library left

According to the word count of the author's article, Dong Shuyu wouldn't be able to recommend it if it doesn't have seventy or eighty chapters.

It's interesting to read the introduction, but I don't know what to make of it

I still hope that I won't rush into the street. I hope that my book will get better.

Yes, yes, I still remember one chapter where you seemed to use the wrong word Wan Kongxiang.

Zhu Xiuyuan

Alas, all the flowers I waited for have withered.

This is the first time to support genuine novels, don't—you know

This is also my first time to come to genuine support

It looks like he wants to create Wu Zetian as an enemy 😡

Bangbangbang👍👍

Come on, come on, the more content, the better.

I looked at 11 pictures and found out it was a stallion.

Has the author read Six Notes of a Floating Life?