Eastern Jin Dynasty General

This book is poisonous. It contains ecological farms, brown sugar, salt, iron pots, vegetables, tables and chairs, harvesters, paper making, water pumps, etc. I can't stand the joint-stock system! ! Damn it! ! Why don't you come up with steam engines, electric lights, telephones, internal combustion engines, etc., And have a first, second, and third industrial revolution? Make great strides towards the steam industrial system, the electrical industry, and the Internet era. Wouldn't it be nice to bring China into the four modernizations thousands of years ahead of schedule?

I just discovered this book and read it in one sitting. So far, the content is pretty good, the development is well planned, and the historical knowledge points are also good. Vote for it. In addition, I think there are many problems, mainly the pacing, goals and characterization, and the protagonist's way of thinking is too modern, as if it does not consider the historical background at all, but this is a matter of opinion, but the author needs to consider using a better way to express it so that it will not offend people. Regarding the pace, I feel that the pace of farming is too fast. It has only been a few chapters and so many things have been done. I feel like I am running all the time without stopping. You have to use a relaxed rhythm to give readers time to breathe, otherwise they will be too tired. Look at the current sacred books, which one is not criticized? But if there is no water at all, it will be a dry pancake. If your cheeks are sore from biting it, you will not be able to take more than a few bites, no matter how delicious it is. There is also a goal, what does the protagonist want to do? It doesn't mean that the protagonist must be an emperor or something, but since the protagonist's character is like a god and has everything under control, it would be embarrassing if the goal is confused. The characterization may be too demanding, but I hope the author will pay attention to improving it. All the characters are stupid and follow the protagonist, and the enemies are stupidly abused by the protagonist. It will become annoying after watching too much. Finally, add more perspectives from the supporting characters, now it's basically the protagonist who leads the show.

Not fighting for hegemony? According to the title of the book, is it a part-time job?

After reading Chapter 23, I couldn't bear it anymore. It's ridiculous to write endlessly about inventions and creations. I didn't write a single word about the flavor and stories of the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties that I wanted to read.

Wouldn't it be nice to build a computer? Build a photolithography machine 😁😁😁

To be honest, when I see Confucianism, I want to vomit. The protagonist likes Confucianism so much. The protagonist is not directly an emperor and manages the country. He has no talents and needs the help of Confucian literacy. The protagonist is a little kid. When will the country be unified? At the latest, it will be a few decades. In these decades, I can teach tens of thousands of people even if I build a school. How can I still rely on that bunch of rubbish from Confucianism? Don't mention that Confucianism only deteriorated later. The earliest Confucianism was originally a rotten tree root that was not in line with actual development. This tree root did not consider development at all. They only consider how to maintain the interests of the ruler, so they are liked by the ruler. This rotten tree root gives birth to a rotten tree. That is inevitable, In the end, Confucianism is not that the church is better than the church, but it is less cruel than the Western medieval church. Confinement is there. It is better to call it Confucianism than to call it Confucianism.

Author, your meters and kilometers can come as soon as you say it. At that time, the units were steps and miles.

It's 60 feet long and 25 feet wide. Have you built an aircraft carrier?

Was there an auction in ancient times? This was pulled from fantasy, right?

The harvester is really awesome😅

You can name it, Border Army of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, or Liu Laozhi of the Eastern Jin Dynasty. The writing is not bad, but it is a little fast to start making money. Don't you first familiarize yourself with the geography, customs, clans and war conditions?

Inventing things too quickly, one chapter is the same, and the article is too light and feels like an introduction!

Incoherent like a running account

Making inventions in troubled times🙂🙂Haha

I don't understand what the author means by writing about the two twin sisters of the Xu family. Cutting them out will not affect the flow and storytelling of the article at all. Doesn't the author just like this tone? Twin.

The first hundred or so chapters were really well written, but later on I felt like the author had changed. Not only was the story overshadowed and confusing, but what was even weirder was that the main character's goals were also confused. One moment he wanted to fight for hegemony, another moment he wanted to contribute to the court, one moment he was a danger to the aristocratic family, and the next moment he wanted to drag the aristocratic family together.

Let me ask, can pig's feet compete for hegemony? If you don't want to fight for hegemony, just be a native and don't mess around.

You can invent everything but not gunpowder? What's going on? Worried it will end too soon? But it's unreasonable

After reading this, I don't know what to say. Wine and sugar are the great benefits of the country, and not even one family can take them. The protagonist's family has so much power. Apart from being donated money by others, I really don't know what else they can get. The main line of improving food, food and diet can continue to make profits. Salt, sugar and wine were the lifeblood of the country in ancient times. It is a typical profiteering industry. Unless there is a powerful force that can cover the sky with one hand, there is no way to break it.

I feel that the writing style is good, but I feel that the author's writing is too rough. The plot is obviously very smooth, but the modern vocabulary is jumping out one by one, and the ancients can still understand it. What kind of stage is it? The angle is 60. Are you talking about the Book of Heaven?