Xichuan Ballad

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Each has its own advantages and disadvantages: 1. The portrayal of individual characters is still very vivid, such as Qin Chuan's laziness and disdain for worldly affairs, and the temperament of the drunkard master and Zhou Botong are very similar. However, some characters have contradictory personalities. For example, Zuo Qianli was unreasonable at first, but later he showed more understanding of justice than Qin Chuan. Lan Xi was focused on revenge at first, but later seemed to have forgotten about it. 2. The plots in the first few chapters are coherent and comfortable to read, but some places are too straightforward, like the beginning of searching for darts, which makes people feel that it is not that serious, and there is no sense of tension and curiosity. Later, a large number of descriptions of the scenery and morale of the Miao border seemed too cumbersome and had no promoting effect. 3. Although the characters are vividly depicted, they do not combine thick and thin. The images of Qin Chuan and Lan Xi are not obvious enough, but the three brothers from the escort agency give people a deeper impression. 4. Jianghu people do give people a feeling of being generous and generous, as if they can make a heart-to-heart with one glance and pay for their lives with a smile, but the "glance" and "smile" here are not true happiness, anger, sorrow, and joy. For example, the friendship between Qin Chuan and the three brothers from the escort agency did not have the foreshadowing of each other's personalities, nor the openness and openness of young confidants, let alone life and death friendships. Therefore, this plot feels inexplicable and cannot resonate with people. 5. Perhaps the author is portraying an image of a young man who seems to have no scruples about worldly affairs, but has a deep heart. He has experienced the unbearable secrets in the palace and is aspiring to the end of the world. He is sensitive and kind, and sometimes ignorant and naughty. But the Qin Chuan I felt was someone who was looking for trouble (he had nothing to do with robbing other people's escorts, and was not in a hurry after losing other people's important things), without wisdom (for details, see my comment on the part where he took Lan Xi away in Qinchuan), he was face-loving (① Zuo Qianli had just brushed off his face at first, and he cared about it; ② He had to be flattered by others to get a response from him), and not kind (even if the old man was a liar, he would just ask him to leave, and he would not scold people in person). In summary, this is my evaluation of "Xichuan Ballad". If the score is out of 10, I can only give it 5 points. I know this is really hard to accept for a hard-working author, but I hope that the author can realize his own shortcomings and strive to write a true "late classic"!