Liaozhai Fairy Road

Travelers may not necessarily be able to mix well, but a person like the protagonist is also weird. No matter how good his psychological quality, how he behaves, or how adaptable he is, he is worse than an indigenous child. What is the author trying to do? A highly useless protagonist?

After waking up from the dream, the protagonist is a time traveler and the skills obtained in the dream are special. The other emotional intelligence, IQ and mentality are really difficult to describe. It feels like any ordinary person is better than him. The protagonist's strength is not clear. I see that many simple things are made complicated. I really don't want to read it.

It would be much more comfortable if your brother was the protagonist. The protagonist is like living and wasting air.

The setting of the book is very good, but the character of the protagonist is too tangled, with poor psychological quality, timid and fearful, with the heart of a child and the body of an adult. He is too childish, has no goals, is uninformed, and has no good or evil intentions. People wanted to kill him, but he also let others go. If it hadn't been for the protagonist, he would have died long ago.

I'm here to help you change the title of the book: Fake Liaozhai: The Perverted Brother Controls the Mentally Retarded Aboriginal Legend

The writing is quite good. Promise me, stop writing and find a job in a factory.

Author. . I would like to ask why Meng Xing wrote this. . In fact, at the beginning, I thought it was very well written when I had a master. The protagonist is just ordinary and I also thought it was a great setting. . . But the plot after waking up from the dream is really not as good as the previous one. . .

I read a little bit, and after I woke up from the dream, it was actually written by another person. Farewell

That's it, returning the time traveler, it really embarrasses the time traveler, returning the protagonist, it would be more like replacing his younger brother

He looks happy and cheerful, and is poisonous enough. When he wakes up from the dream, he becomes mentally retarded. He is almost like a brother to a ghost, and then he is scared to death when he sees a ghost (there is a ghost in human skin). I understand that you have just traveled through time. The question is, you have been practicing with the master in that virtual realm for several years. You have always seen ghosts, and you still have it. There are people who can be easily crushed to death. They insist on BBing for a few rounds and say that they are passing by (the men in black in the ruined temple), please don't kill me. Jiji Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai. After showing their strength, they left. Please BB for a few rounds. You were almost beaten to death, so you just left like this? ? ? I don't have anyone anymore, the protagonist didn't just travel through time! ! ! This book is so poisonous that I can't even see it on the shelf!

It's too poisonous. Is this thing called a time traveler?

Why does the protagonist become less intelligent the more he writes? The start is okay, but I won't call you a novice later on, just like a **…

Mentally retarded protagonist

It's better to watch it yourself than others have said it 100 times

Waste, waste. It pissed me off. Throw it away, throw it away.

It doesn't look like a time traveler at all, it's so silly.

Why can you portray the role of the younger brother very well, but why do you fail as the protagonist? Just because the protagonist is a time traveler? Then just write a native. Why was the Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality so popular back then? Apart from Golden Finger, the character of the protagonist is also the most important part. Because he is a mortal, he wants to change his destiny and control his own destiny. This made Han Paopao rise from a humble mortal to the top step by step.

I could read the first few dozen chapters, and then he actually told me it was a dream!

What I wrote in the front is pretty good, but what I wrote in the back is so annoying.

I said that the protagonist saw that the portrait was of him, and the master was the true god, so why did he hide it? It turned out that he wanted to change the story. I just want to say why write a dream. Wouldn't it be better to just write it down? It's a pity that I had an idea, but I couldn't grasp it and ran away. Bye bye.

Are the first 38 pictures all a dream? ? ? Those few pictures are pretty good, but I can't stand the ones behind them. The styles are all different.

A person who has experienced a whole life can still be so stupid. I don't know what the author is thinking.

This book is very strange, the writing style and the construction of the story are very good. The author is the same to achieve this effect, but the shortcomings are obvious. There is no climax, and the pig's feet are made very silly and naive. It seems purposeful, but in fact it is reckless. Anyway, pig's feet can't die.

It was amazing at first, but then the writing power deteriorated drastically, and the characters' personalities didn't change at all. Is it about being thirteen forever?

I feel that the protagonist is very clever. After regaining his life, he feels that he wants to save people, but he is not strong enough. He always escapes and always gets Shi Kui in trouble, and he feels like he is overestimating his capabilities.

The writing was very good before I woke up from the dream, the writing was very good, but the writing style and narrative after the awakening from the dream are completely different. It feels like the part before waking up from the dream was written by one person (most likely He Zhou), and then the author changed. Without the writing power of the previous author, the current plot can only be regarded as a dream, forcibly cut off, and start a new plot.

I don't know how to put it, I'd say it's not a sadistic plot, it's frustrating to watch, but it's smooth sailing if I say it's a sadistic plot, the protagonist is a bit naive and silly. It's not appropriate to say that a male protagonist is silly and sweet, but that's how it feels to me. At the beginning, there was a city god who gave the protagonist water or something, and I thought I could get big benefits by going to Heishui later, but it ended inexplicably.

In an impetuous society, this novel doesn't even have a golden finger. After reading a few chapters, I don't want to read it anymore.

To be honest, it's generally okay, but it's a pity that the main character can talk.

Did someone else write it after waking up from the dream? ?