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After this novel, I suggest you just abandon the book. The more you read it, the more poisonous it becomes. Those who are not capable of handling poison should not try it. It is really poisonous. 😭

I'm bored of Yukinoshita Yukino in this book. She lives in an ideal world she built. Others misunderstood the protagonist and told her, and then she thought the protagonist was a scumbag. Does this mean that all men wear tinted glasses? She believed whatever others said, and would rather believe others than the protagonist. Her intentions were sinister. Hiratsuka Shizuka finally wanted to be single, but in the end, she wanted to be broken up. She was cold and arrogant.

I thought the theme was very interesting when I read it. The protagonists grow up. However, the author wrote it too complicatedly. There were too many characters in one world, resulting in no focus. Just daily things were too watery. In fact, each character has a lot of potential. Too many characters were written, but it resulted in no focus and it became tasteless. See Death Elementary School It's even more unbearable when it comes out of nowhere. When integrating different worlds, you have to choose a background with a similar style so that it won't be abrupt. Not every world is easy to structure together. At least the author doesn't have this kind of writing power. It's a pity. It's such a good idea. Give it up. I'll wait until someone will write a similar article in the future. Let's read it when the writing is good.

To be honest, except for the swords and swords in the first dungeon, it became more and more confusing later on, and the female characters became more disgusting as they were written. I almost wanted to slap her in the face. Moreover, there will be a chaos of magic changes later on, without explaining it. No one in Heiqi who is over twelve or thirteen years old will directly contact the Cursed Child even if he is jealous, because only children under the age of twelve or thirteen can be Cursed Children. But here you are, a fast-moving adult can still have a relationship with the Cursed Child. What the hell? If you read a few more chapters and it doesn't work, you have to give up.

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The writing is good, but the protagonist is too toxic. In Suzuki Kanou's part and Sima Shishi's part, you are a time-traveler from the Celestial Dynasty, not a Japanese high school student. You are 5.60 Years old in your two lifetimes. You are not a young teenager, and you are not a junior high school student who traveled through time. You are obviously very mature as the guild president in Sword Art Online. Why do you end up acting like a teenager later? Like a child, for example, in the Suzuki episode where you tied her up with alchemy and spanked her, let her feel "Father's Love", and then deleted the phone, it would be better than the situation you wrote. Now that I see where Sima Weixi threatens to date, I feel that I have no choice but to abandon the book without posting a comment. I don't want to do it a third time.

It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to discard it, there are frequent typos, and the plot is average.

There are so many poisonous points, and I feel that the female characters described by the author are all bitches, which is a pity for a good subject. If it were replaced by a veteran, it would definitely be a little popular.

After Sword, I couldn't watch it at all. I almost thought the author had changed... Newcomers can stop after reading Sword. If you continue to read Sword, you will only want to sneeze at the author in the end.

Except for the Sword Art Online dungeon, which is pretty good, the other two dungeons are poisonous, and the portrayal of female characters is also poisonous. Then what about the character of Yukinoshita Yukino? I don't like the author's Yukino at all.

The author wanted to incorporate all the two-dimensional elements into his own text, but he couldn't grasp the personality characteristics of the original characters and made random changes. It made people read extremely awkwardly, just like eating all the food without absorbing its nutrients, and finally turning it into smelly feces and spitting it out.

The sword was okay in the front, but the protagonist changed in the back, and Megumi became a completely different person, and the power system didn't exist either.

Objectively speaking, journal writing

I feel like I'm writing a running account, which is a bit boring.

I don't know if it's my imagination, but I feel that the author's writing skills have declined a bit recently. It's a bit like a running account and doesn't seem to have a sense of substitution.

Why did you actually survive the beginning? Admire admire

Alive again! May I ask when will it be updated next time?

Seedlings, raise them up😁😁 Come on, author

Alas╯╰! Cut it now and then! Doesn't it hurt? Author!

In an infinite world, ask your teammates to lie down and not take risks. The protagonist is either stupid or bad, or both. The first few pictures are not bad, but when I say this sentence, it feels like the protagonist has no brains. There is an infinite world every month. If I give you a Warhammer World later, you can play with it. What a fart, let's go

Out of habit, I flipped through the catalog first and saw a dark loli. Good! Just rush and chase, watch first! If it's so poorly written, I'll come back and complain.

I thought the title was "Playing Extremes in the Rifan" 🤓

? How come I, Yinglili, am the female partner!

Activate the magic card to resurrect the dead. I choose to resurrect the author's desperate luck.

It's almost finished! ?

I haven't read the book yet, but the number of chapters is 253 and the discussion thread is 252. It's a bit uncomfortable to read.

Has the magic ban been cut off again? (

Did it hit the cover?