Protect My Pokémon

Already collected, please return to collect it, the writing is good, keep up the good work.

Well, now that we've received the red envelope, let's look at it carefully. We will express our thoughts seriously. (Although I was like this yesterday and my comments were deleted and permanently banned. I had no choice but to get the first package~(~￣▽￣)~~). It's not impossible to use this method for the first choice at the beginning, but it really doesn't convey the chief's demeanor. At one point, it felt like the two of them were giving for nothing (although the plot requires it, but they still have to describe their highlights (this will be a bit overwhelming after all, it is the later stage)). Also, the fighting is a bit too simple. It seems to be just dialogue. It feels like the author wanted to write about bonding, but it didn't seem to be done well. Maybe there's something wrong with the lack of focus and direction (although I know it's to lay out the whole pattern, it's still a bit hasty⊙∀⊙!). Can the subsequent impact be more subtle? It is better to direct, arrange and react temporarily (don't say it out loud... Otherwise it will be embarrassing). Also, the description of battles should be as minimal as possible, with scenes that are too fast to be seen and disappear in one fell swoop. How do you write in the later stage? You can take your time to portray the characters and the appearance of the trio of villains. Obviously they have collected intelligence, planned carefully, and seized the opportunity. How come these professional plain-faced people are instantly low when they meet the protagonist? You need to pay attention later (I think about it: for various embarrassing situations in confrontation situations, the first is that the tactical layout can be more detailed. After all, the teammates are novices. Use your own experience and advantages to arrange reasonably. The battle situation (isn't this a highlight) and then the overall view, because it is a low-end game and you can still see the three directions. Of course, I know that the author wants to write about the impact, but it is not so big, and I want to explain it slowly. But you must pay attention to it. Even in a low-end game, the opponent is not something that a few elves who have just conquered can deal with. This must be turned on. Otherwise, the whole process will be as low-energy as it is now, with various sluggish operations of the main and supporting characters, and then it will end with the help of "unexpected" foreign aid (isn't it familiar, it is really like this). Well, after saying so much, I know that this book does not require a lot of game knowledge like the elf novel (so it saves a lot of time and controversy). ). Moreover, the main selling point of the story about bonds and different elves really moved me. That's why I said so much (laughs(◓Д◒)) You can delete me and ban me forever, it doesn't matter. I just want to ask you to take a look. I hope she can do better... That's all. Thank you for reading. 'д'⊂☆))

Two chapters? Can't even see it for 3 minutes

Have you ever thought about teaching the Fighting-type Pokémon the 6th Marine Style? Just shave it off and draw three kinds of paper on your feet

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The author is so ruthless, it's 40 chapters and the protagonist hasn't gotten the initial Pokémon yet.

Is it too strong? ! The first book with 60,000 words has this achievement! 😭

This is really a rare novel in which the protagonist hangs up for more than 40 chapters.

I've decided, let's raise it for a few days and then see.

It's a very good book. Please update it.

Question marks throughout the whole process, can the protagonist be replaced by Li Kai? The protagonist should be strong or weak.

It's too watery. I wrote almost a dozen chapters about catching an elf.

The author doesn't update anymore? It shouldn't be a big deal if I push it. It's a fantasy of being kneaded together like dough. If you are interested, you can check it out (´-ω-`)

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