Infinite Great Moe King

Blue hair is super beautiful, except for the mentally retarded ones

Common problems in Qidianwen. . . There is no clear main line, and there is no sense of pressure to survive in Infinite Literature. I don't know what the protagonist wants to do, what to do, and what to face. The protagonist is just dawdling. The success of Slime, in addition to the excellent setting, has a clear main line and reasonable hooks. In fact, all Japanese light novels are the same. They have a clear and strong main line, which can let readers know what the protagonist wants to do, what to do, and what to face. . .

Come on, I have read the existing chapters and there are no obvious poisonous points. Please work hard to write ✊

It is different from the anime's "Cute King", but overall it is very good and recommended reading. Just give me a few small suggestions. If the author thinks they are reasonable, then adopt them. If not, just ignore them (except for the fourth point). 1. I'm fascinated by the protagonist's attributes panel. There are numbers in front and numbers in parentheses, some are present and some are not. Should they be added together or should the numbers in parentheses prevail? It looks messy. Spending time doing calculations affects the reading experience. It's best to just have a number, simple and clear, so that we can clearly know how much the protagonist has grown at a glance. 2. Naruto is a pioneering volume. It seems to be very long. I don't know how many words the author plans to write in this book. If there are more, I can try Naruto again later. It just so happens that my strength has improved in the later period and I can compete with Nazusa. Let Naruto have a perfect ending. 3. Since the protagonist has a real name, the real name has a special meaning after all. Especially for the cute king, it is better to change himself to Rimuru. Just drop the previous name. It's not important anyway, right? 4. One of the biggest poisonous points is that there are too few updates! There's a guy next door who updates five chapters a day, don't you have any ideas?

The main character specializes in eating turtles. If I didn't have unlimited streaming, this book would be really bad. It would be really frustrating to read.

One thing to say, I am a little disgusted with the character Red Fox. After all, just like everyone who reads your invincible novels will be disgusted with the so-called "protagonist", I don't know why I am disgusted with him. I can also understand the setting you gave him and the reasons you gave him, but I am disgusted with this character. There is a kind of person who is very naive and... Hypocritical? I don't think it's a good feeling It's the kind of feeling that you clearly rely on your elders, but stubbornly believes that it's all your own efforts, playing like a child in the eyes of your elders, and finally moved yourself. What makes me sick is the pampering and selfish childishness of the elders It is indeed possible to give Rimuru a motivation to move forward, but in fact there is no need to use a thing to "force" the protagonist to develop. I don't know what the reasons are for others to read Wuwei-ryu novels. One of the reasons for me to read Wuwei-ryu is that it is relaxing, not There is a sense of compulsion in the struggle to upgrade flow After all, there are really only two reasons for the protagonist to develop upwards, a far-off goal and an imminent bottom line Obviously there is a lofty goal and unlimited time, but I think it is superfluous to arrange an imminent bottom line for Rimuru. I hope my humble opinion can be adopted by the author, and the Red Fox story line can be ended as soon as possible, or be diluted. (The short-term poison will pass if you endure it, but the chronic pain is really unbearable)

The quality is pretty good except that the beginning is a bit messy, the plot progresses too fast, and there are a lot of typos. But the protagonist is really chaotic and evil. Don't be deceived by the appearance of the cute king. He is basically a monster with supreme power and a cute appearance. The cold label is no joke, be careful if you are not compatible (ﾉД`)! The following contains small spoiler warnings for the Holy Grail Chapter⚠️ . . . . . . . . . In the Holy Grail Chapter, there was a team of good guys who rescued Sakura Matou, but were then destroyed by the protagonist. After hesitating for a moment, he would not show mercy to Matou Sakura. In the Naruto chapter, I couldn't be a sophisticated egoist, but later on, it's not that it has nothing to do with it, but it's completely... I skipped a little bit later and felt that the teammates were mainly based on a combination of interests, and there was no emotional connection. If anyone thinks so, I didn't say it.

Alas, I think the Naruto chapter is the best so far. The emotions are richly written, and there is no cliche plot like having any intersection with the protagonist of Naruto. The protagonist's emotions in the subsequent world are too indifferent, maybe because of the influence of the style of Samsara Paradise. But this is a fanfic of the cute king. Writing the cute king as the beheaded sister Su Zhen is a bit of a drama. I still want to see a cute cute king 😭

Rimuru's cheating was based on what he said, not how he cheated. He said he was going to die, he showed super-speed regeneration, he said cold brought out cold resistance, he said hot brought out heat resistance, synthetic temperature changes were ineffective, he said he had been single for 37 years and he would become a sage in 40 years, he showed up as a great sage, he asked his descendants to destroy the computer after his death, he said he showed resistance to electricity and paralysis resistance. It says it hurts, but the pain sensation is ineffective, it says it bleeds a lot, it creates a bloodless creature, it says being stabbed to death is ridiculous, it shows thrust resistance and physical attack resistance. He said that after being reborn, he would become a well-fed person and gain predator abilities.

Let's complain about the latest chapters. That Emily is so disgusting, and that Anna, who always wants to enter the extraordinary world, but doesn't know that ignorance is also a blessing. (I hope the protagonist can change quickly). If Su is the beheader, she might just go and tell him that this is the cruelty of the extraordinary world, and happily play GG. Emily is a character that can't be tolerated, right? Facing the protagonist entering "danger", he stood by and signed an unequal treaty full of capital. The protagonist defeated the enemy on the premise of saving people and came back to greet him in the interrogation room. This Iron Throne is simply irritating and will directly persuade a lot of people to retreat. If the author sees this post, it is best to change the overall situation of Emily's refusal to save the protagonist. I have been observing for a few days.                          ——，