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I have read the first four chapters. The writing is good and fluent. The story setting is very novel. The writing style is lively and interesting. It is edible and nourishing. I have collected it. However, the system appears a bit frequently, and there are quite a lot of various energy settings. It makes my brain hurt to read it... I suggest you use more words to describe the characters. The article is a bit of a fusion of urban, fantasy, and science fiction. Come on, I'm optimistic about it, and hold on tight so it doesn't collapse.

The secondary hairstyles that have appeared in this book include men with crew cuts, men with short hair, mushroom heads, instant noodle heads, airplane heads, and what other heads will appear later 🤭

The subject matter of this book is novel. It is rare to find such an interesting book in this era of routine writing. As the saying goes: Good-looking skins are all the same, but interesting souls are unique. I hope the author can continue to work hard and have a promising future!

Under normal circumstances, there are two updates a day, one in the afternoon and the other in the evening. If there is no update in the afternoon, there will only be one update (sometimes it's really hard to code it╯╰). Because I haven't saved the manuscript and don't want to stop updating, sometimes it's too late to code it out, so I publish it in a hurry, and then I go back and modify some places, so... It's recommended to read the next day for updates after ten o'clock in the evening. (| Finally, if you accumulate more collections and recommendations, your energy and blood will surge. Now, Ah Huo can only try his best to keep writing, it's so miserable~

The plot is too compact and a bit confusing, and the relationships between the characters are vague.

The plot is a bit cliche, the fighting is okay, the villain writing is a bit mindless and a bit too much, this style is easy to be blocked, the conflict is a bit deliberate, if it were written more naturally, it would be perfect, but this novel is okay.

Where is Song Yiren? I want to see Song Yiren😳

The novel is well written, come on, but there are too many systems and not enough characterization.

Congratulations on the successful signing of the contract, I wish you great success in the future.

Come and visit us! Come on＾0＾~

Come on, it's so beautiful. You have to update it five times a day, otherwise I won't be able to eat or sleep.

Received, very innovative, (ง •̀_•́)ง

The writing is very good. I have invested in it. Please give it a try.

I have been paying attention to this book, it has been put on the shelves, and I strongly support it.

To be honest, I think this subject is quite good. Why do there seem to be so few people?

I was fed a shit when I put it on the shelf. I don't know how the author plans to deal with this woman. Unlike Song Yiren, this woman will not harm the protagonist at least. The two families are natural allies. On the contrary, Qin Shiyu will cause trouble for the protagonist as soon as he appears this time. But it doesn't matter. This routine can be accepted after seeing it too much. Qin Shiyu and her brother are really evil. It's a sweetheart, forcibly creating conflict points to pave the way for the next horror, and introducing blunt emotional scenes. Except for the author forcibly giving the protagonist an intelligence, I don't think any normal person would smile after saving a stranger whom he has only met once. Not doing anything to her is already a kindness, and not leaving her there is considered a holy mother's heart.

I don't know if there will be any Yonko coming out later.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's normal to fight monsters by leapfrogging levels, Xiaobaiwen.

Let me ask you how the protagonist obtained the traffic.

Is the protagonist Flathead Brother? Either in a fight or on the way to a fight