The Life and Death of Tianzun

In today's world where routine writing is dominated by novices, it's great to have such a high-quality and high-level writing!

As a newcomer, I know that my writing is not as good as those of great writers. But, I think, I just need to be serious, write attentively, and study. No worse than others! I very much hope that some book friends can give me opinions and suggestions and let me know where the shortcomings are now. As long as you point out the problems, I will improve. People need to have dreams as their motivation to move forward, and they also need someone's constant encouragement to take steps towards their dreams. As long as people can see me here, I believe they are my book friends, my big brothers, and people who can give me motivation.

The simple words show the great principles of life, which is quite beautiful.

I like the writing on this subject! The heroine has a good personality, so cheers for the author!

I wonder if Chen Ye made a mistake. This marble was not a gift from the little girl.

Come on, Tianhu, I'll keep an eye on you 👍

The red envelope came in, thank you! Although I don't read this type of article, I have some suggestions from what I felt in these three minutes. Frequent occurrence. . . It seems very casual in a formal style, and there is no period at the end of each sentence. Furthermore, the language is too plain, like everyday speech, not like a literary work. Just a humble opinion, don't blame me if I'm wrong. Finally, it is normal for the author to rely on love to generate electricity. I hope to stick to my original intention and finish writing this book! Best wishes!

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A 500 point follow-up investment is disrespectful.

Is it Chapter 24 or Chapter 22? ? ?