My Hero Academia: Lightning and Light

Dawn has entered the palace

The reasons are: first, you are not a master, and second, you update too slowly.

Don't think too much about the newcomers to the weekly beast update. Even the great god Yue Geng is popular. It's hard to tell the newcomers once the beast is released.

Come on, come on, I'll finish it in one go

731 Academy is over, it's gone, it's gone

Personally, I don't want to read it when I see the name, because Kaminari Electric has a strong personality, but he doesn't know how to develop it and doesn't need to add the attribute of light. You can completely refer to other electric powerhouses in anime, such as Cannon's railgun, Sasuke's Chidori, and Killua's speed. The above moves do not require controlling the direction of current, so I say that Shanming Denki is the weakest person with electrical abilities in history. If developed properly, even if it can't compare to the cheating protagonist, it will definitely be better than Bakugo and Todoroki. The above are my thoughts on your settings, I will talk about the rest after I read them.

The original work has a lot of plot, and most of those who read the fanfic have read the original work. Many non-essential plots can be mentioned in one go. For example, in Chapter 4, although Midoriya is the protagonist of the original work, he is not the protagonist of this book. There is no need to write it. It can be explained in a few sentences later, and there is no need to explain it in one chapter.

Iron juice, the name is split, it's Shangming. Change it quickly.

The layout and segmentation are not very reasonable, and it's not comfortable to read.

Why does it feel like DC Superman at the beginning?

What the hell is it that Midoriya suddenly sprouted a child, and his name even changed to Reiya Ken? It's really poisonous, don't use it.