A Superstar in the Family

I thought of a novel, I am Liu Xing who has children at home, hehe🤓

After reading the free chapter, I can't hold back any complaints in my heart. First of all, both the topic selection and the entry point are refreshing, and the writing style is also really good. As for the plot, don't force it on Wen Chao Gong's novel. Personally, I feel that the author's biggest failure lies in character creation. Leaving aside the protagonist for now, Xu An is simply annoying. I can tell that the author wants to write that Xu An and Xu Ping are the kind of relatives who love and kill each other. They usually cheat on you without discussing it, but they will go out of their way to help you at critical moments. But it was obvious that he used too much force. Xu An deliberately made Xu Ping's girlfriend misunderstand that he was cheating on him, which caused Xu Ping's girlfriend to strip Xu Ping naked in a rage and throw him in the hotel. After Xu An did this and learned about Xu Ping's tragic situation, he had no intention of repenting and was very proud. This gives readers the feeling of being ignorant and unmeasured, even the best. Let's talk about Xu An's roommate. I also understand that the author wants to write about a father who loves and protects his children, but will find his way back if he is hurt at all. But this idea of ​​revenge is really weird. Do you think that a father who loves his children and takes the initiative to open a company to protect them from being polluted by the entertainment industry actually comes up with a way to cause trouble for his roommates by going into battle himself and taking the initiative to make trouble, and he also takes the initiative to tell his daughter about this method that we think is despicable and even dirty? The characters are obviously contradictory. No need, really no need, just forward the pictures sent by her roommate to her roommate's sponsor father, which will definitely be enough for her to drink. The same goes for what follows. You yourself teach your son to pay attention to his behavior in the entertainment industry, don't go around flirting with women, and in the blink of an eye you are discussing acting skills with an actress in a hotel room... Isn't this giving excuses to the paparazzi? What makes me most tired is that the protagonist always responds passively, and the routine has always been: There is trouble online ↣ The protagonist thinks the problem is not big and ignores it ↣ Makes the problem big ↣ Issues a statement ↣ Conflict ↣ Slap in the face From the perspective of plot rationality, the entire public relations department is in name only. The protagonist is also clearly not thinking long term. In the later stage, it is very likely that the plot will be driven by the villain seeking death, and then the protagonist will be slapped in the face. From the perspective of writing techniques, the slap in the face is not smooth enough, and the writing routine is a bit serious. I personally recommend assigning a tool person to the protagonist, who is mainly responsible for holding the protagonist before he performs any intelligence-reducing operation. To be fair, the protagonist's character is very pleasing to the plot, and he is very suitable for fighting against the villain, and this conflict is a very natural development of the plot. An old salty fish who cares about his children. He loves his children, so he will fight back if others hurt his children. But at the same time, he is an old salty fish and will not focus on one thing for a long time. Giving up halfway is his normal operation, so the villain can take advantage of his salty fish period to find trouble for him. But there is no conflict between salted fish and foresight. The author has also written about the insightful side of the protagonist before. As long as the author does not deliberately perform some zz operations for the sake of writing, I believe that the results will get better and better.

Do you want to take a photo in the name of the people?

The main character doesn't look like he's in his 40s, he's clearly in his 20s.

Friends who have the ability, please support me. There are more than 7,000 collections, and only 140 first orders, not to mention the others, are really miserable. If you calculate this way, you may not have 200 yuan a month. I am too tired. I originally thought I would be able to code five or six chapters during today's holiday, but seeing this result, I really can't do it anymore. Don't worry, I don't know how to be a eunuch, I will definitely continue to write. I just hope that everyone can support me a little more. I am grateful, thank you!!!

The clear flow of entertainment articles! For now, although they are all based on memes that have been circulated for a long time, and occasionally look a bit awkward, they are generally quite creative! As a bookworm, it's still worth reading! Stay tuned

The author's imagination and writing fluency are quite good, but I have to say that the topic selection at the beginning is really a mistake, it is too poisonous! It's been 9102 years, and I don't believe there are still people who don't know that I plagiarized the entire article in AiPiZi... For some people, this matter may not be that serious. I guess the author didn't mean it, but just didn't care that much. On the matter of anti-plagiarism, I don't mean to be arrogant or anything like that, but I would like to remind you that you, the author, are also a creator now. I think the harm caused by plagiarism to creators no longer needs anyone to say anything. Others can ignore it, but as a creator, shouting for plagiarism and plagiarized works is tantamount to digging your own grave. That's all, I hope the author can keep up the good work and look forward to your next work.

I always thought this book was about a family with children.

It's okay. I'll write it slowly and give it a few days to read. Cheers, author.

Thinking of a family with children: My name is Xia Xue, my name is Xia Yu, my name is Xia Binghai~