Interstellar: The Starry Sea Is Endless

The writing is too poor, and there is no way to develop the story well. Even at the beginning, the structure of the world is unclear, and there are many character problems. According to the chapters I have read, the heroine was nearly 30 years old before she traveled through time. Is a 30-year-old woman so childish? There are differences in behavior and thinking at different ages. It's not that you can't be confused, but that as an adult soul, the heroine is too dependent on others. Personality is not something that can be said, it is comprehensively reflected in all aspects of behavior and ability. There are also various repetitive and meaningless emphatic descriptions, and old-fashioned biography-style forced spoilers, which make this book quite difficult to read. There is a setting that is very attractive, but it makes me feel boring when I read it. The repeated inner drama can fill a whole chapter, and the story does not progress smoothly. Compared to another interstellar novel I read, it's not easy to be a man. The gap is too big. It's almost the same type. Although many settings are quite middle-grade, it reads very smoothly. I really recommend that the author streamline the writing, improve the character design, and make many details more reasonable and smooth. Third-person novels describe the story, not the protagonist. The protagonist is shown through the story, rather than using inner drama to construct the protagonist and then insert it into the story.

The writing is really good. The author has his own ideas and worldview. The female protagonist is also very good. I like articles like this, but I feel that the female villains written by the author are all a bit stereotyped and feel the same. I hope the author can write more personalized characters in the future. Overall, this novel is really good. I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง

The concept is good, and the article seems to work, but there are too many sworn words piled between the lines, which is not relevant and I can't read it.

Authors can write stories about smart people among ordinary people, such as stories about time-travelers about farming or about making a fortune. The author has the feelings of a literary youth (a slightly less cultural literacy of a literary youth, can he learn more poetry?), And he can write love stories with a heavy emphasis on romance! However, the author still writes less articles about big guys, because the author has a weak character and heart, and does not have the heart to be strong! Top geniuses may not be easy to fight, or they may be quiet and focus on their own hobbies, or they may avoid interacting with others because they are far more intelligent than ordinary people, or they may have a peaceful mind and not compare themselves with others, or they may be temporarily weak and avoid the sharp edge of their enemies! But if these top geniuses have a normal mentality, they will have strong self-confidence! Proud and unwilling to admit defeat! A strong heart! He may not attack the opponent, he may temporarily avoid the enemy, but it is absolutely impossible for him to pray that he will not encounter the enemy for the rest of his life, and to avoid the enemy for the rest of his life! Cheating yourself to live in the spirit of Ah Q! The self-esteem and self-confidence of geniuses will make them continue to work hard and firmly believe that they will stand upright in front of the enemy, making the enemy fear and even avoid them! ! ! What I wrote may not be expressive (but there is absolutely no malice). In short, I just want to say that a truly strong person not only has talent and superb skills, but also has a strong heart (not admitting defeat, strong and confident)! You can judge the situation and avoid the sharp edge temporarily, but you can never think about hiding for the rest of your life (Ah Q spirit: I am not hiding, I just don't provoke the other party)!

It really feels like a running account when reading, and the concept is really great! But the language makes it impossible for me to read!

The story at the beginning is quite attractive, but the writing is too weak later on.

The setting is very good, but the sense of immersion in this article is not good. It is always verbose in irrelevant places, and the grand points that should be written are not written.

I've read more than 60 chapters, and the author's writing style is so literary. The combat description can be studied again. 20 Moves or 30 moves, the description is weak. The dialogue between the characters is too polite (personal feeling, if the setting is a polite environment, just pretend I didn't say it), and the changes in the mental state are a little bit, and the writing power is not enough. For example, in Star Wars, the protagonists suddenly had a change in their thinking after watching the video. What exactly they saw shocked their souls. This is just the author telling readers, oh, the protagonist here is more motivated. But I, as a reader, cannot empathize. It just feels stiff. I'm sorry for my harsh words. I hope the author can improve to a higher level. I hope a good story matches good writing. Will continue to support.

With good ideas and delicate emotional stories, female channel novels are different. Even hard science fiction is full of tenderness.

I'm here to try the poison. It's well written. Although the plot is a bit flat at the beginning, it becomes more and more interesting as you read later. The story has a complete structure, rich characters, and comprehensive scene descriptions. The pace is a little slow, but as you continue to watch the plot, the sense of immersion will gradually strengthen. Thank you so much for letting me try the poison, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง