Zhutian System Food Hunter

A book is basically all about battles, not much food, and not much original plot. How can this attract readers who are influenced by food and hunters and come to read the book?

Author, the next system reward should be a complete set of Nian system practice methods, so that there will be no need for help. Then the concepts developed are best related to food! This way you won't be accused of selling dog meat to others... Anyway, come on! Power generation with love! Great author!

I was looking forward to this book. It might turn out to be the same as or better than the Food Hunter book. At the beginning, I met the second-generation gangster who was brainless and ignorant in the city of gourmet food. He killed him to establish his authority, which was normal. The management of the Food City is normal. The protagonist is still like that when he arrives at the Sky Arena, but the management of the Sky Arena are such idiots! Having seen so many people using Nen and weird Nian, as well as Nian after death, I would have no problem provoking a madman for the sake of trivial benefits and face, and a madman with unknown Nian abilities. If such people had died long ago, in a world with extraordinary power, people without power and with abnormal brains would not survive the second episode. ... Delete after leaving a message.

Hunter World is really awesome. According to what you wrote, every gang has the strength of the Yin Beast. I am laughing so hard! ! ! If you don't read the original work carefully, if you don't check the information, it will be a purely self-obscene novel! ! ! ! Selling dog meat on a sheep's head

To be honest, I was looking forward to this subject, but the more I read, the more disappointed I became. The logic is very confusing. It is one thing to have a system to improve, but it cannot be practiced? As soon as I say that I can only do what I want to do, and rely on the system, there is Bisji, a master of telekinesis, who refuses to learn. I have to wait for others with malicious telekinesis to forcefully open telepathy, and then try to improve myself by relying on the system? I talked about my plans throughout the whole story, but to be honest, I didn't see any plans for the protagonist's actions.

It's not the protagonist who has a problem, it's the author who has a problem. You always arrange to change the map and encounter artificial contradictions and collisions, and then kill people by brushing the map. Do you know what writing rhythm is? Do you think that after killing people and then having a meal, it will slow down... Not to mention that the protagonist has a basis for killing people, it was not arranged by you yourself

It's miserable to write these three books, one book and two updates a day, with 13,000 words. 😆My fingers and hand joints have been sore for a month. .

As far as I can see so far, this book has a big problem, the creation of contradictions. The author likes to use the style of fantasy novels, bully, slap in the face, make things big, bring out a bunch of people, the protagonist can't beat them, and develop. Later, he became stronger and stronger, and the clan was exterminated. This kind of simple routine can be used once, but if it is used multiple times, it will make people feel tired. Why are there always people who don't have eyesight? The author can refer to the hunter fanfic of the author of Pirates Harm. The author needs to improve the conflicting points in the construction, as well as the main plot construction behind it. He can no longer use the above set, Lao Bai really can't read it. Other feelings are handled well, I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง

I was a little confused when I read it. I originally thought it was a food article + a hunter's adventure story. As a result, I cooked some noodles at the beginning and became a little chaotic, and then I kept fighting and killing. It doesn't matter if you just fight or kill, the telekinesis ability you have developed can be used to beat the enemy's hands a few times, and kill some not weak telekinesis users in an instant. As a result, when faced with a piece of garbage that could be killed instantly, he was tricked by the other party, and his telekinesis ability was blocked. . Go ahead, the main character has killed thousands of people in about 100 chapters. How many people are going to be killed next? Be careful, 404. There are only a few fellow hunters, so be careful.

A gourmet coupon triggers a gourmet journey. The funniest thing is that the longevity rice and the two-tailed hell rattlesnake actually appeared in the human continent. I was convinced. Did the author seriously read the original work?

I thought I was in the prison of delicious food

Although I have only read a few chapters and didn't find anything serious, I still want to say it. The article says that the protagonist takes the system to a different world to open a restaurant and activate the system by obtaining guests' satisfaction with the food. It also shows that he has sufficient funds and it is easy to make money. In this case, why should the price be expensive? He just wanted to hold a big eating competition to win over customers, and spent most of his own funds as rewards. Wouldn't this attract ordinary people or poor people to come here? Will rich people come to challenge? Really speechless😓

Got two bombs with 100,000 satisfaction points? It's not like suppressing the protagonist. There is also the chakra extraction method. Why doesn't the protagonist buy it? It's a random draw! Will you be dumbfounded next time you get reincarnated in the dirt?

Is it possible for any one person in the tour group to be the best in the world? You said that if the top five in the world are the best in the world, then they must be, but the brigade and the others are far behind, and there are basically few hunters in the Hunter Association who can rival them? Author, you are too outrageous. Did you eat the twelve earthly branches? Mo Laowu, Bisiki, Jin's apprentice, Master Kurapika, etc. Were eaten by you? Not to mention the overt and covert strong men in the Hunter Association, which almost made me laugh to death. Don't talk about the Association. They can't even beat Ruleiza who are outside the Association. Where do they come from to be the best in the world? It's so outrageous (ps: I don't hate the tour group or even like it, it's just that you, the author, are opening the door to someone who is outrageous)

I read Chapter 30 and didn't want to read anymore. It's said to be a food article, but I didn't see any food at all. It's said to be a battle article, but I didn't see any battle scenes. In the past thirty chapters, there has been a lot of food-eating activities to gain popularity, and the only things that appeared were ramen and half-finished Chaos. It was so bland, all water.

The most disgusting plot is half known and half unknown. Either you let the protagonist never watch the Hunter Hunter anime, or let him watch it to the end.

The author would like to ask, based on the current results, how many words do you plan to write if you continue? Thanks.

It feels like after the store was smashed, it feels like an F4 engine was installed and an unlimited amount of oil was added to it, beating back and forth like a perpetual motion machine!

How many times does the author want to write "Slap in the Face and Kill the Whole Family"? The article is not on point. I only see the map being changed constantly, and the same bad routines are used. The previous article was almost broken, and the deliberate curse was even more disgusting. If you want to be invincible, then be invincible and continue the article, instead of going crazy on the shackles. The fighting is also embarrassing, just shouting the names of moves at each other, and there is no feeling of fighting at all.

Your joining the Phantom Troupe is the reason why I gave up the book

Why are you asking for a disciple? Just because I feel like myself when I was a child, a bit poisonous. Shouldn't a disciple beg to become a disciple?

The book is too rubbish, the food is not delicious, the system is rubbish and I can't read it, isn't it frustrating to write it?

The more you write, the better. Come on and invest! Stop being a eunuch

There are too many systems, I don't like it anymore

It is very difficult for fan fiction to completely break away from the original work, because most people come here for the original work. As a result, if there is no content in the original work, you will not have the heart to read it. Unless what you write is really excellent. Otherwise, it would be difficult. It would be better to just write it yourself.

I read a few chapters full of nonsense, a garbage book

As for Food Hunter, the author actually wrote it very well. . . . . It starts with delicious food, but then it's all about hunting "people". There are indeed quite a lot of people hunting.

After reading Chapter 28, I don't even know what you are going to write about. If you write about food, you will just come up with ramen and wontons. When writing about hunters, Bisgui came out. What on earth are you writing about? The activity of a big eater is so good that it has 10 chapters. I feel like I am enjoying myself.

I don't understand. Since you can write so much. Why don't you write down the main plot in detail 😅

Just don't have too much fighting power. Let's go hand in hand with the kitchen battle.