JOJO from Hero Academia

Here I go again. ... I don't want to make another long comment. It's tiring to type, it takes time, and it's very cold in winter, so please don't say: I'll give you the pen. I'll pretend I didn't see it if I wrote it, because I'll be very tired. To put it simply, the latest update, how should I put it, although it seems that the plot has begun to enter the more exciting parts of the straight line (fighting and so on), it is a bit stagnant for those who followed the update from the beginning instead of watching it all at once. Well, the problem with the author may be that he really wants to add more elements to enliven the article, but ends up being unable to control it because there are too many factors added. That's why some people say "it's just an ordinary light novel with a Jo joke" This is quite common in fan works. Please refer to various comprehensive comics for details. However, although they write like that (no accusations are meant), they still have a small circle of their own. Some people watch it and some invest in it. After all, there is supply only when there is demand. This is also the reason why the doujinshi area is mixed with good and bad. Don't talk about this, let's talk about this article. What I want to talk about are mainly two aspects, one is about character handling, and the other is about the main plot. Let's talk about the main plot first, which is the most important. If this is clear, everything else will be easy to talk about. The main line must be clear. Generally speaking, a good article often has only one main plot (same for multiple protagonists, except for bosses who can control multiple plots), and the most important components are what, why, and how. Why write this main line? What is the core (theme) of this main line? How do I express it with characters? As an old saying goes, for many authors, the characters they write are not controlled by themselves. They often act on their own. All the author has to do is record their actions, otherwise OOC will basically not run away. These characters are closely related to the main plot. After all, the themes come from their words and actions. Readers see the characters in their own minds. The closer the author's performance is to what they think, the better the article will be. And the image of this character generally follows the mainstream rather than niche ideas. Of course there are exceptions, but they are not listed here. I have read some book reviews by famous writers before, as well as some Internet tycoons (who can write a good article with their own writing style), as well as myself and other similar people. We generally have a point of view: a good article must be able to express his thoughts. In short, the author must have something of his own to show us. This kind of thing is generally in line with the mainstream and loved by people, and the expression must be clear and rely on the actions of the characters. This is the theme. Many authors come here for this point, but then they have no idea. Well, this kind of author often has a big golden dream, and then finds that he can't do it. Being able to explain one thing clearly requires a lot of talent. The threshold for writers is not high. It seems simple, but in fact it really takes talent. Do you often feel that your writing skills are weak? Are you struggling with character dialogue? Have you had a good idea but when you are about to start writing, you have no words to write? You have erased it several times and want to take out your own brain? Very normal. In this situation, I have no choice. Take this article as an example. In my opinion, what the author wants to tell is a story about jojo in my English (mixed with many private versions) showing the golden spirit (real no joke). His story starts from the academy but is not limited to the academy. It will be expressed through other anime characters who are involved in various events. This is where most of the excitement lies. Although the protagonist Jotaro is already an adult, he will still grow up in this wonderful adventure, and it usually ends with "Your failure is because you pissed me off" and "Ola Ola". Very simple? The article will discuss issues related to "golden spirit" (from jojo), "justice" (from fate), "hero" (from Woying (hero killer), etc.). The protagonist Jotaro will strengthen himself amidst various voices and embark on a path that shocks others and shocks the world in one day [not]. In short, it is to spread the "golden spirit". The protagonist can spend time with food and other things during his leisure time when he is not fighting, and develop side plots, and this type of plot also has advantages. But this is all idealistic. The reality is that based on the current progress, the author's main line is not obvious, and the writing style seems to have no characteristics in the entire article. It's fun to make jokes for a while, but I'm not interested in making memes all the time. The article has ups and downs, some successes and some protagonists. Although the undulating mountains are majestic, they are also very typical. They are not as thrilling as Everest. So, it's boring. You may be surprised when you watch it for the first time, but you can't take it for granted. Speaking of which, the most amazing thing about the author (for me) is that he brought Kakyoin, so we will all look forward to whether others will come back. This is somewhat to make up for regrets, but it is very attractive to JO fans, so it is a highlight and deserves praise. Coupled with the few Joes in the door, it can be said that his innovation and attractiveness are basically there. However, the author just doesn't write towards this point, and insists on running on a mixed road. I guess he has his own ideas, or arranges these later. So what is reflected in the article is that readers cannot see what they want to see (mainly using me as an example, so I want to see it, but I heard there is no author), and they don't want to see the original plot (this will be discussed later), so the article will appear to be watery, boring and derailed. But there is no good solution. The author has his own script and pace, the readers have their own ideas, and the speed of progress can be interpreted in two ways: fast or slow. Authors who are determined to be themselves may not necessarily be more successful, and changing the script for readers may not necessarily fail. It is hard to say, so I can only persevere. If I insist on writing down this wonderful adventure, my writing will always improve. No matter how bad the article is, there will be gains. But perseverance is difficult. Writing a novel is an arduous process that can only be endured by the author. Like-minded readers can also help. This can only depend on the author himself. As for the role issue, it's a cliché. Generally speaking, if the author does not rely on this to make a living, he probably comes with love, love for jo, love for various animations, and wanting to see the characters interact. However, the most important point in integrating the world is balance. The second point is, characteristics. This is not only reflected in the characters, but also in the plot. You can bring it in: There is a funny character in Marvel comics who can stop Thanos. As a comedy comic (single character, not mixed with the protagonist group), it looks very interesting, but in a serious comic, when the protagonist group is fighting very hard and someone is dying, and everyone is sad, you suddenly appear and gesture to Thanos to stop and say that you have three urgent needs to be solved, and he stops obediently. Isn't it very abrupt and... Embarrassing? This is still the same company, at least the world is the same. And if you are a great god who can destroy the world and reopen a new world in some ancient comics (this kind of thing still appears often, and most of them are female, waiting to be moved by the protagonist (male), which makes me extremely embarrassed), when the protagonist group is about to die, you suddenly pretend to be helpless and show up when you are forced to live a peaceful life, and destroy the final villain. Isn't this very poisonous? This is a typical example of collapse, hybrid failure, and a case of pretending to be evil. And when you mix fairy tales into American comics, it doesn't matter what you say when the whole world talks about ABC. Although it looks interesting, if you really want to write it... But this type is not impossible to write well, it is just that it has high requirements on the protagonist's way of speaking, behavioral principles, the author's understanding of the original work, and the understanding of the readership he wants to attract and other factors. Back to the topic, Combat power, character experience, and various major events surrounding the protagonist are the reasons why we love these characters, but imagination is good, but if you really want to mix them together, it will be hell mode. In order to tell a story well, generally speaking, there should not be too many mixed worlds. Two to three is appropriate. For novices, two is best, but three is also OK. Or if you want more, you can use the method of "borrowing settings" (copying only people with similar characters, or original characters traveling through time, etc.). Because it is easier to unify the combat power if the number is small, the character experience will not change much (for example, Emiya is from a modern city, and I don't know where the red pupil is). The big events that represent the character's charm will be released and will not be disrupted too much - instead of the incident of slaying the red pupil like this article - the author will have more energy to think about the plot, make the character more reasonable, and have a better opportunity to explore the theme of the article. The author deserves praise for using the definition of "personality" to include the special skills of all characters. Although it is not innovative, it is very useful. The protagonist's "Platinum Star" combat power is equal to that of All Might, which is considered balanced. In order to let him participate in the plot, the seal was weakened. Although readers were unhappy with it, it was not incomprehensible. The subsequent gradual unsealing was explained. However, when it comes to dealing with features... Let's take a look at the characters in the article, taking Emiya as an example (because I have never seen Zhan Hongtong) Emiya Shirou, the protagonist of the Fate series of games, this article may involve related characters in the main plot (battle). The partner of justice is a bit unremarkable for a student. Except for his performance during the Holy Grail War, he has almost no outstanding features at other times (except for his cooking skills). The skill is Durex..., Without a copy of the treasure house, among the ice and fire magic chef [No], the self-propelled explosive library, and the invincible Platinum Star... He is overwhelmingly weak. In addition, he is still a student, older than the protagonist and not in the same grade. He has less communication, has not experienced any life and death tests, and his skills are definitely not as strong as during the Red A period, and he participates in less plots. This makes him look like a cutscene character. Even though Tohsaka Rin is here, I want to know that there may be a Holy Grail line. As for me, his concept of justice (especially compared to the Red A period) is very suitable for the story of the hero killer (if the author wants to write it). In the dark alley or in the later shots, the four thoughts (the purity of the hero, the simple justice of the boy helping others, the justice of sacrificing a small part to save the most people if there is a Red A, and the golden spirit) collide, I always think it will be very interesting. And if he had not appeared as a student, not in the academy, but as a mercenary when he spontaneously dealt with the hero killer for the sake of justice, the fierce collision would have been more fun. But, author: I don't want you to think, I want what I think. I don't want to write, and I'm very helpless ヽ（＿；)ノ It's so cold in winter, so I can only talk about it. Let's talk about jojo Jojo's themes are "Hymn to Humanity" and "Struggle of Wisdom". Various jo memes are promoted by the people who are attracted to them, not the other way around. So the author's behavior of always playing with memes will not always be lovable, because although most Jo fans may fall into the trap because of various Jo memes, they will eventually be moved by the "gold". What is really interesting is not the various memes, but the people who create these memes. This is the charm of jojo. Needless to say. The most common situation among JO fans is the imbalance of combat power, and it is easy for the combat power to be crushed. In the words of the reviewer of this book, it is "an ordinary novel wearing the skin of JO". Can I say that it is fair? The two most famous recent JO fanfics are: Li Qing's Bizarre Adventure and The Bizarre Journey of the Best Villain The former focuses on the battle of wits and the interaction is natural, while the latter focuses on character interaction and the narration of the spirit, destiny, and struggle of various characters (mainly the protagonist). But in a situation like the author's, it's still difficult to switch from a straightforward combat power crushing plot to a battle of wits (because a battle of wits is really difficult to write, otherwise there would be so many crushing games). As for the character interaction... Ahem In a word, cheers for the author. (´▽｀)ノ♪

I stayed up late and finished reading this book. Well, actually it's not appropriate to read this book now. Please give me a pat, but the author is innocent. He just wanted to express his own thoughts about this work. Let me talk about the advantages first. The first point that makes me very comfortable is the character creation, especially for Jotaro. After all, I only read this article because the fisherman is the protagonist. I carefully read the article where the author analyzed why these female characters were introduced and liked it very much. Toru Hagakure helped Jotaro gradually adapt to the world. The female character in Class B later looked like Xu Lun, which made Jotaro slowly let go. This is enough to show that the author is very careful in describing and caring about the characters. It can be seen that you, like me, really like Aqiang and hope that he will live a good life. This is my favorite point in the whole article. The second thing is that I like the author's handling of Ta Ying's plot. Aqiang is indifferent to Moubao and does not care about his repeated provocations, which is very consistent with Liu Cheng's character. In the final game, he also completely dealt with someone like Moubao, which was refreshing to watch. I have to say that sometimes JOJO's handling method is truly comfortable! From here we can even see the mental gap between Araki and someone. Haha, it turns out that what kind of author brings what kind of plot. Moreover, in high school, Liu Cheng sometimes had to use San Cheng's method of handling things, and the scenes were unexpectedly funny. The third thing is that I like the details of this article, especially the daily life. I won't mention the description of Jotaro. Kakyoin & Jotaro are the sweethearts of the socialist brotherhood. "We send messages and chat every day." "Treat him to eat what he thinks is the most delicious." Win the championship." "We didn't even take the ranking because of Seung's injury." "The flower is recognized by the father of the second world." "Seung will only smile in front of Kakyoin (mainly because Popo hasn't been resurrected yet, so he is very reasonable in this aspect)." It's very reasonable, and there is no deliberate selling off, but I am very happy to watch it, thank you!

When will the author publish a new book? I will definitely support it. This IP must not be used. We are Chinese first, then animation lovers

All JO chefs, please check in and share some jokes about JOJO.

[The dog head saves life] I love Japan! Japan is my home. I don't care what you say, anyway, my love for Japan will not change and will never change. Japan is a beautiful country, if given a chance. No! There will definitely be a chance. I will go back to Japan again and go to the author's studio to let all Japanese right-wingers know that my name is Atomic Bomb!

I have no feelings for my hero. I read this book to see JOJO. What happened is so stupid.

1. Don't make fun of the victims of war or disaster. 2 Do not show contempt for certain professions. 3 Do not make fun of the nation, citizens or the public. The above three points are the three principles that you must follow no matter what occasion you are in or what kind of work you create. Whether you are a professional cartoonist or an amateur, or you are a newcomer to comics for the first time, you must abide by them. —— Osamu Tezuka, "The Way of Manga"

Although some people will definitely say that you don't want to see it, others want to see it, and if you don't think it's good, they think it's good. This kind of thing is a matter of benevolence and wisdom. In short, I think... I feel that Jojo's character is a bit strange. First of all, he shouldn't keep calling other people's names by mistake (thinking Ye Tuoying is Jing). Once or twice is fine, but repeating it would be weird. Then there is the question about the heroine. Why does it have to be written about the affection that eight million people have for him? It's so embarrassing... Isn't it bad to just be a comrade-in-arms? And female characters appear too frequently, such as his childhood sweetheart Ye Touying, his classmate 8 million, the female neighbor next door, even when he goes to order gloves, there are girls who have an inexplicable sense of competition for him (although there are not many scenes), light novels? If there was a female protagonist in this story, I'd better tell her earlier. If it's not handled well, it will definitely be a big problem. ... But if you can accept it, that's fine. The other one is about jojo's attitude towards others. He is about 57 years old! (Probably) Although he is 57, the fundamentals of his character will not change. Rather, because he has returned to 15 years old in a sense, his behavior should be a mixture of the leisure of an adult and the vigor of a youth. This was shown when he fought the sludge monster. Taking action at the critical moment, succeeding, and then walking away looks handsome, doesn't it? I believe that in the hearts of most JO fans, no matter how Jotaro's age changes, he will always be the one who was happy with his grudges when he was 17 years old. He can do whatever he wants and can do it. He is omnipotent and has the commitment to continue to practice his goals and justice and create miracles. That is what makes him invincible. However, it is precisely because of my love for this character that everyone will read this article. It is precisely because of the expectation that I found that his character became very ordinary in the rest of the time. I felt that he was just an ordinary male protagonist who could play "Yeah, yeah, yeah", "Like dolphins", and "Eula". And he is very restrained and does not have that free and unrestrained feeling at all (of course, this may be because he has to do the plot in Xiongying now, and he is really old). Expressing the character of a character seems simple, but in fact it is quite difficult. Even if it is to describe a person with a full personality, how he will behave in different situations, it is still difficult to completely write clearly. For the author, there is a saying that when he writes, the character who does those things on the paper is not under the author's control. He is his own master, so based on this, the author's forced changes will make people feel OOC. Although there is no "forced" feeling in this article, the character's personality is not outstanding enough. Although many comments said: "It feels a bit like Jotaro" or "This is very Jojo", but from my own point of view, it is not to this extent. However, this may also be because there are more daily routines, which leads to insufficient trust in the character. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Then in terms of fighting, why does he keep using flying knives? This is not jojo. When he used flying knives for the first time, the author said: This is what he learned from Pucci and Dio, but this does not mean that he should use it often. Although we all know that it is definitely not possible to fight Brainless directly with fists, but it is really strange to use flying knives too much. It would be better if it turned into "Do you think I can only use fists? Eat my flying knives." The last point is in the details. Jotaro's 17-year-old school uniform has two belts. Josuke is not his uncle but his uncle. In my opinion, Jotaro's calling Er Qiao "old man" is not actually an expression of disrespect. On the contrary, maybe it was not so at the beginning, but during the 50-day journey, "old man" and "old guy" have become words to express his closeness to him, so the author's use of "grandpa" is a bit alienating. I hope the author knows this. Hurry up and release the Platinum Star!

There is only one reason for your failure... That is because you pissed me off!

This book can be considered a good one. Although there are typos and many places are not smooth, the various chaotic characters still make Duo Chu love it. However, it is recommended that you slow down the introduction of new characters. There are enough characters in JOJO itself, not to mention other random characters. Even if you remove the supporting characters of the little heroes themselves, there are still too many characters. It seems that the characters are not full of characters right now. Of course, it is not impossible to let readers make up their own minds with love, but it is inferior. Anyway, there are a lot of CPs, so it's pretty good to fall in love, fall in love and kill each other, and at the same time push forward the plot. In addition, I have also written about Longtaolou, I hope it will be adopted 😄

The author, let me give you a job at Station B. You can take a look: I think "Jojo of Heroes **" does not need to stop updating. The subsequent plot can be changed to Jotaro finding Giorno, and then making Inubira never reach the truth of ending human experiments.

Come on, the author. I was short of books and wanted to find a book about little heroes. I found this book. The book is very good. It is definitely better than most books (about little heroes). The plot and the process make me want to read it. One final point: too little! ! !

The author is so miserable. Another one has been implicated. Please stop chatting. Come and Save the World has also been implicated. The writing was so warm and harmonious, but in the end everyone was stabbed in the back. Come on, author! The next book is waiting for you!

I saw your video from Station B, how miserable. It would be great if you let Giorno give Gouping a punch, Golden Requiem nb.

I didn't understand the first chapter. I only watched the Golden Wind of Jojo!

After the author finishes the college entrance examination, will he consider opening a Jojo fanfic?

I hope the author will not be affected and can write better works! I feel sorry for the author

I have the cover of this book, with pictures

After all this time, his ranking is still so high! It's really a pity the more I think about it.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Kuo Yi yo

Do you guys have any other good JOJO fans that you recommend?

It's a bit surprising that there aren't many people scolding the author. I saw other Hero Academia fans being scolded a lot.

There is actually an author writing a novel related to Hero Academia. You are so brave.