Jin Mingchuang

Martial arts works! Very well written! Definitely collected it! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us and give us advice!

To be honest, I read your book last year, and it was updated this year. I finished reading it in two days and would like to share my thoughts. 1. Your book is too difficult to write. It requires a story background from the Ming and Qing dynasties, as well as fabricated characters. However, martial arts is no better than a fairy tale. You need to invent martial arts routines when physics allows, which is really difficult. 2. The character's personality is not very obvious. 3. What you use is half-literary and half-white. In my opinion, you must not have read the ancient classics of Kaiyang. Many of the ancient texts in them are incorrect and lack the cultural heritage to cite the classics. 3 You have to read this book more than twice to understand many things. Not that kind of consumer literature. No one has time. 4 The structure of the story is too huge, and it also talks about human nature, history, brotherhood, and love. 5. Updates are slow, which is understandable. It is difficult to write a book. 6 Let's be honest, I still have talent as a writer. Have certain ability to control the story. And it's a bit like imitating Jin Yong. 8 In the battle with Ningyuan, you copied at least 300 words of Divine Eagle. Don't think you can hide it from me. 9 I wish you a book to become a god hahaha

Let me first praise the author's perseverance and the number of words in the text I would like to make some small suggestions The layout of the text is a bit uncomfortable and a bit dense Can the table of contents be set to a certain chapter? There is also the aspect of character creation Maybe it's because I haven't read many novels of this type I always feel that the characters are a little bit different Maybe it's because of the writing style? In general, it is a well-written work but it doesn't feel very attractive Come on, author💪

Judging from the few pictures I have read so far, the author's writing has the temperament of a martial arts novel. However, I am not very good at controlling languages, so I expect that many people will appreciate this novel in the future.

Good book, don't be afraid of being overwhelmed. Come on, author.