Hotel on the Mountain

"What should I do if I have 30 collections of 100,000 words of online articles?" The answers below are all negative, including some online article editors. I thought about it and realized that I had reached 100,000 words, so I quietly took a look at mine. I didn't answer that question after that, but I want to express my opinion here. That's it... I'm over 30! I can still be saved! Ha ha ha ha! This is really happy, and I want to share it with everyone. If any readers can smile after clicking in and reading, I will be happy +1.

I watched the original version (4K120 frames 3D Dolby Cinema). The story is about a top killer who is hunted down by the government he works for because he knows something he shouldn't know. The person sent by the government to hunt him down turned out to be a young clone created from his blood. The old killer and the young killer staged an ultimate pursuit and attack and defense battle. The scene was gorgeous and logical, just like two people who are truly proficient in the art of killers playing chess. (Of course, there are artistic modifications that are essential for the movie) For example, when they first met, the series of actions of the little killer running from the roof to the aisle, and then sliding down the tree, was so smooth! The two of them continued to shoot with one hand during the attack and defense of just a few seconds. This scene was shot from the shoulder perspective of the old killer. With the advanced photography technology used by Director Ang Lee, as the audience, we in the Dolby Cinema completely felt the blood-throbbing excitement at that time! And the strong impact brought by the enemy's agile movements. But I'm not here to spoil anything. What I want to say is the advanced photography technology used by Director Ang Lee - it is definitely the future trend of movie watching! It can be said that if it is not for this kind of movie-watching experience, going to the cinema will be meaningless! With the support of powerful image quality, shooting techniques, and hardware facilities, as a viewer, I really felt like I was in a hail of bullets. All I needed was a pain simulator for my arm to enrich my tactile experience. The writing is not good, so I can only describe it like this. To summarize: This movie cannot be labeled as a commercial film. It should be a pioneering work to explore the future direction of film development. Its audience is destined to be small. In addition, the cloning story told in the plot is not amazing, the movie is not well publicized, and the movie ticket price is too high. The low box office is natural. But if you want to experience the shocking movie-watching effect with me (after watching it, I feel that the movie-watching experience in the cinema before was boring), then eat a few instant noodles and go to the theater to support the original version (4K120 frames 3D). Don't watch the castrated 60-frame version. The viewing gap is not that big. That's it, good night everyone. Let's work together tomorrow for the future of Alpine Hotel.

You really have to practice your writing. In addition, many places actually read inappropriately due to the use of sentences. There are also two important elements of online writing, character creation and environment creation. The image of the guard next to the protagonist is pretty good, loyal, low in emotional intelligence, and good in strength. This is what I summarized from the book. The image of Daoer looks like a kind and capable young woman, but their appearance is not mentioned anywhere. Some great platinum writers don't like to write about appearance, but they still use a few adjectives and one or two paragraphs to roughly summarize the character's characteristics. This is the first time to create the shell. The personality summarized above should be the content of the shell. Without the shell, it is difficult to imagine such a character based on content alone. To say that these two are okay, then the protagonist is really unclear. In fact, the first chapters of many online articles are mainly narrative. Why? Narration is to make it easier for readers to understand the world view and figure out what kind of person the protagonist is, especially for time-travel novels. As mentioned above, these two writing methods are feasible: First, the opening chapter directly narrates the rest of the text to arouse the reader's interest. Second, start with an engaging narrative that describes the first thing you encounter after time travel, and then use the protagonist's thinking to explain the protagonist's general understanding of the world and what he will do in the future. At the beginning, you can tell that the protagonist is handsome and has blond hair. The specific personality and image of the character are still relatively vague. In addition, the mistake that novice writers make is that everything they write must be a pit at the back. When writing a fight behind a pillar, you must hit it. When writing a depression, you must guess. How do you actually say these... What the author thinks is completely different from what is written. This has to do with environmental shaping. Looking at the real master Shirogane at the starting point, they always prefer detailed descriptions. Why? Not to mention that detailed descriptions can best highlight environmental features, etc., Detailed descriptions of character actions are also very important. Specific habits, such as this person likes to pinch his earlobes, that person rubs his chin when thinking, etc. The paragraphs must be short, and they can be shorter. One sentence or two sentences will do, as long as you read As long as there is no problem with the coherence, otherwise it will be a long paragraph. Not to mention that readers will not be able to understand it. Internet writing itself is a fast-paced book, and the reading speed is relatively fast. Readers will not even be interested in reading for such a long paragraph. Even if you write well, readers will seem to miss the content. Where did you just say it? Forget it, let's talk about another common problem. Novice authors always ignore action descriptions. For example, when I read it, there were a lot of "**** smiled and said." In fact, how do you say this kind of writing? A quick narration can be used with a character who has already established an image. Readers know what he looks like anyway, so a brief one is fine. However, it is not good if the character in the book has a very vague image. After thinking about it for a moment, this kind of speech method of just smiling and then speaking without any movements is actually different from the older method of "the man speaks, listens, and the woman speaks"? Now I'm talking about the sense of substitution. I've done what I said before. In fact, the sense of substitution has come out. I'm just talking about the benefits of the sense of substitution. Internet articles themselves meet the spiritual needs of readers. What kind of novel does your novel have a specific audience? For example, I am the protagonist. I know what I look like, but I don't know my own personality. The character is not full and lacks connotation. Then look at the environment around me. A maid, a buckled basin, no, it depends on the environment? ? ? Biao Shi? ? What's the place like where I live? Looking at the people around me, oh, you are very kind, oh, you are very loyal, what do you look like? ? ? Oh, stickman, get√

As long as you are updating, your recommendation votes will not be cut off and your subscriptions will not stop. My level is limited and I can't explain any profound truths. I hope writing will not become a burden and I hope I do it for fun!

Initial score: 81 Read to Chapter 38. Reading experience: - An Inception story that doesn't fit the scene at all (it doesn't work at all, and it doesn't fit the scene at all, it just makes people think that the protagonist is not a **) + Slightly attractive opening background (very fantasy feeling) + Good hunting description (description is spot on) -- The appearance of the dream (the author has already thrown out a lot of settings and backgrounds at the beginning, and here is a visitor from another world who is full of mystery and is not going to be explained clearly in a short time. When I read it at the time, I was confused) - The questioning description at the end of Chapter 7 (an overly taken-for-granted expression. This description is very graphic. I can almost imagine it being a scene from a certain movie I have seen, but it is unreasonable and completely unreasonable. It is also the first time for the protagonist to go to the New World. Everyone knows that no one can answer him, so he is asking nonsense. The author uses a questioning tone to highlight the crisis of the situation, and at the same time, it also makes the reader feel that the protagonist is angry. So what is the reason for his anger? It is not written) ++ Solade and Xiaonai's funny practice (the characters are very lovable and the funny effect is also very good) + The incident of trapping teammates (although the story is not new and not brilliant, but the author's description is solid) - He forcibly placed the "villain" next to Sora, and kept saying, "People must learn to compromise and cooperate." (In the case where Thora was described as very strong in the previous article, the protagonist, a weakling, showed a condescending attitude, which is incomprehensible. Moreover, it is not appropriate for two people to act to destroy their relationship just after they started working together. I suggest you think of a more reasonable reason. For example, a mouse like Obsward knows how to survive better than a down-and-out noble like Thorad) + Qiu Guang's selection (reasonable and convincing) - Chapter 25, and Chapter 26, a broken description (the manuscript was sent wrongly, between two chapters, one chapter was missing?) + The reaction of everyone in the Raya family when Pearl arrived (reasonable and reasonable, the IQ is online, the master's strong character is highlighted) + The description of the trio robbing the tavern (the characters have distinct personalities, and the description is in place) + The whole process of the Dragon God Sect grabbing the artifact (nothing particularly outstanding, but overall stable, down-to-earth, and you can't make mistakes) + The master's handling (without losing IQ, comfortable to watch) Evaluation summary: The overall level of this book continues to improve with reading. The author's writing style and plot arrangement are of a high level, the characters are well drawn, and there is no contradiction between the character's behavior and the setting. I have never been good at praising others, and the extremely high rating can already express my affirmation of this book. (If I rate it, 85 and above are works that I can't fault at all. I can only write a review, not an evaluation.) Next, let's talk about the problems the author made. All the author's questions are basically the same phenomenon: the reader is confused by what the author thinks is a clear and reasonable description. For example, in the opening chapter of Inception, the protagonist in Chapter 7 questions. The most typical part is that in the opening chapters, the author has stuffed a lot of settings and backgrounds. These things are very basic in the author's opinion, because he is extremely familiar with this setting. But for readers, accepting so much "boring background" information at once is a very poor reading experience and can easily make people feel confused. Especially, when the dream appears, the ordinary farming setting at the beginning suddenly feels completely different, which makes people feel confused. For another example, the protagonist forces people to surround Thorad. I believe the author must have thought that rats like Obsward are more suitable to survive and complete this kind of infiltration mission (the character setting highlights the author's purpose). But the information received by the readers is the same as Thorad. The protagonist forcibly arranged for a villain who could not even be fully trusted to be beside the collaborator for no reason. Finally, I'm sorry for procrastinating (in fact, I originally planned to read the free chapters, but I'm really embarrassed to procrastinate). I would like to offer my recent recommendation votes and my apologies for subscribing.

In fact, the audience for monster hunting is quite large, but your name and introduction don't feel like monster hunting at all. If you don't change the name, you'd better change the introduction to make this rare monster hunting theme more popular.

I used to take a look backstage, and suddenly I found that someone had voted for recommendation, so I would like to thank "XiXiXiaoYao" for 11 votes and "Le Xiaoyao" for 5 votes. To commemorate the person who voted for this book for the first time, thank you.

I would like to suggest that you try to divide it into more paragraphs. Too many paragraphs in each online article will affect the reading, and it looks tired and makes people not want to continue reading. In other aspects of writing and description, you can only practice by yourself. There are really not many Monster Hunter fans.

Today the website short notice is on the shelves. This release comes very suddenly, but I also hope that readers who have collected my books can order it for the first time. (Yeah, I just want to see if anyone sees it.) ———— In addition, I will ban advertisements because I never post advertisements in other people's comment areas. 🥺🥺 And ban trolls because you can't explain why. You were typing randomly on the keyboard, which made me feel bad. If you can tell me why, it won't be a big problem if I rewrite it according to your wishes. 🪖🪖 ———— Finally, I would like to say thank you to those who voted for me many times, such as "As You Like 2", "Shanghai Sailing" and other readers. Thank you for supporting me until it will be released soon. ❤️❤️

To be honest, I still don't like this kind of novel where one loses his name after time travel and uses other names to narrate it.

Author, would you like to add a new monster? The floating jellyfish can emit various colors, can shine, and can float in the air, especially like a slime.

Let's have a loofah. I've been using it recently until I vomited 😢, so I tortured it 🤓

Thanks to "Pure Man" for the reward, which is a milestone for me 😄. ❤️❤️

Dear author, can you please post some setting pictures of monsters? As a hunter who only plays mhw, I don't recognize many monsters in the book.