The Great Demon King of Kendo Reborn in Japan

I reached chapter 30 and couldn't stand it anymore. The background setting was okay, but the author's writing style was not very good and I couldn't control it. I felt like I didn't have an outline and I could write whatever I wanted. The setting of the protagonist before time travel does not match the written feeling. The 30-year-old doctoral student is written like a 16-year-old middle school boy. He does not have the IQ and thinking mode of a doctor. There are too many inner dramas and he is very out of touch. Unlike a 30-year-old person, the inconsistent personality is the biggest reason to quit. The elf in the staff system is the last straw to persuade him to quit. It is too jumpy. Generally speaking, the author's characterization is too weak. Although the main plot is clearly about becoming the strongest in the world, there is no detailed outline of the stages. It is a mess and the plot is not developed at all. It is too watery.

I have read about sixty chapters so far, and I found that the author is very brave in writing. Some things, such as the female partner being raped, and where the male protagonist goes, are risky to write. But I still wrote it, which shows that I have my own ideas in writing books, and there is no blindly conforming to the taste of our readers. It is relatively successful. I don't hate it, and the plot is not bad.

Aren't you a 985 doctoral student? Why do you behave like a young boy? If you can't play the character, it's better not to get one, right? The most annoying thing is that the protagonist has a high-level personality before time travel, such as a world-class, 40-year-old successful businessman who is seriously ill, a corporate executive, etc. However, the main text cannot control the personality at all, and the various actions of the protagonist are completely lacking in what the personality should have.

The fifteen-year-old book is guaranteed to be a good book. Please feel free to read it. Come on, the author. It has been added to the bookshelf. Give it a recommendation vote!

Why does a kendo text say that he went to boxing? Ximen Fukiyuki finally became a swordsman with a sword, but was beaten to death by a third-rate warrior when he had no sword. Although it is embarrassing, it has become a classic. Well, the question is, is the protagonist going to become a professional boxer in the end?

Haha, it was okay at first, not great or bad. But there are so many poisonous points in the back that I can't stand it anymore... I don't know how to complain about the system wizard as soon as it comes out. The male protagonist goes to sell meat later. I really can't stand it anymore! Farewell!

I don't know what I'm writing about. The protagonist has a golden finger, but he seems to be crazy and obsessed with it...

I find it baffling. Can anyone tell me what the protagonist is doing, what he wants to do, and what his world view is?

It's a bit confusing. It's about improving personal strength, but it's obsessive, it's about the system, it's not written in depth, and it's hard to make money by working part-time. Several of them seemed to still reply to Shenti and Anmo Shenti. As for the female protagonist, at first I thought she was a female classmate, but then I wrote a lot about working girls. Let's say that the working girl is the heroine. In and out of the story, this working girl seems to have been raped. After reading the first 60 chapters, I personally feel that it is a passionate campus where intelligence improves grades and leads my younger brother to get into college. The bad guys who dominate by force reach the top, organize a team, and then go out to work hard in society. Personal strength, mental obsession, system assistance, improved swordsmanship, and two more girls But there are a lot of passionate and brainless plots in the middle, which is not like having the IQ of a doctor.

985 A doctoral student in his thirties has such a bad personality. I'm drunk too.

Why do you feel that this protagonist has such an awkward personality and has been abused all the time, so he can become a big devil? The writing at the beginning was pretty good, but at the end it felt like I was just writing a running account. Did someone else write it?

Chapter 200 of the main character has been written as a lunatic (perverted murderer), especially when he punched the female classmate and even drank human blood. He was so perverted that it is indescribable.

This book is very good, highly recommended by both readers and old bookworms! (I don't care! I can't be the only one eating Xiang!) 🤓🤓🤓🤓

How to say it? I read it for 2 days, off and on, and I finished it Let me tell you some feelings for those who come next 1. The system has seen that more than 300 chapters have not been officially unlocked, and the system elf seems to have some problems, and the system does not have a strong sense of existence 2. Well, there are many, and it is complicated. I can see some shadows of many similar books in the past in this book. 3. And it is the kind of slow-burning, super, super, super slow 4. As for the plot, you will want to hit someone after reading it In addition, it seems that the words said in the chapter cannot be pronounced at all The seniors are right, it is really a bit poisonous, but I don't believe it, so I insisted on reading it, and then there is no more Summary: If it can only be used as food and grass, it doesn't count for me

The protagonist of this book seems to only pretend to be cool in front of his younger brother. He can't hold back when it comes to people and things. He has died in the system many times. He still panics when facing other people's swords. He even has doubts about his life. And he still calls himself a devil? It's rare to see a protagonist who talks nice but can't do anything. He looks like a loser. Although the plot has highlights, it's basically a mess.

Miss author, have you bought your autumn clothes and trousers? Are you planning to buy them in summer to change seasons? Why not try harder and buy some furs?

After reading more than a dozen chapters, except for a little bit about the first chapter, I didn't see any description of swordsmanship.